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Approved Characters / Re: Justice Montenegro
« on: August 02, 2017, 05:07:09 PM »
Interesting character. Wouldn't have expected any less from you though, Mike.

Approved 2 of 2.

MiA Characters / Re: Silva Marquis
« on: August 02, 2017, 05:00:05 PM »
I'll take on the second review:

A few things here:
1. As it stands, there are no upper and lower limits to how this semblance can be used. Please explain it more in detail.
2. How long can she use it at a time?
3. What are the drawbacks/disadvantages to it?
4. Does this only affect herself or is it able to affect others? From the way it's worded, it sounds like she's able to use it on someone else, whether it be their person or their weapon(s).

That's about it. The semblance just needs a bit more explanation, even more so since this is your 6th character now.

Approved Characters / Re: Dorian Aurelius
« on: June 27, 2017, 06:56:44 PM »
Looks good.

Group Approved (JJB, Gus, Janus, and Kaliot). Happy RPing.

Approved Characters / Re: Dorian Aurelius
« on: June 27, 2017, 12:23:27 PM »
Hello and welcome to the RP board! I'm going to go ahead and do a group review of your character.

After reviewing your character, almost everything seems good to go. The only thing that we had an issue with was his semblance. Your semblance is a great idea, but it is pretty OP as it stands. Therefore, we offer the following changes:

1. Anything bigger than the radius of the sphere is not affected by his semblance.
2. The sphere's affects does not affect those with aura who resist it (his comrades can be affected by it so long as they allow it to affect them).
3. The sphere is stationary when created and he can be forced out of the sphere's effects.

Those three changes will be enough to equalize his semblance and make it acceptable. Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions.

Approved Characters / Re: Catalina Glenn
« on: June 23, 2017, 11:57:13 AM »

Approved Characters / Re: Catalina Glenn
« on: June 19, 2017, 10:21:14 PM »
Everything seems fine except one thing:

5 rounds of stimpack shots that remedies pain, small injuries(anything that doesn't leave a scar) and other abnormal status, and help regenerate aura at 1% per second for 5 seconds.

This won't work for two reasons: First, as far as we know, you can't artificially regenerate aura. Second, the ability to purposefully regenerate aura for yourself or others is technically considered a semblance ability, which is also a no go for you since he already has a semblance.

Long story short, remove the stimpack rounds and you're good to go.

Approved Characters / Re: Aksel Orion
« on: June 19, 2017, 10:00:40 PM »
Group Approved (JJB, Gus, and Janus)

Approved Characters / Re: Martin Roja
« on: June 02, 2017, 03:44:02 PM »

The Vale Region / Re: Dust on the Rails [initiation] [MLDC]
« on: May 16, 2017, 01:20:09 PM »
Sensing that the tension had somewhat dissipated, Jett looked up at the others. Nodding first at Xavier and then at Lien, he decided that it would be best to try and break the tension completely and let everyone relax a bit more before any fighting begins. Standing up, Jett walked across the cabin and sat next to Mythos. "We'll make sure to have plenty of downtime after this so you can have your girl talk with Lien" he said, beaming a smile at Mythos. "Just make sure to save some time for me since it doesn't look like I'll have any time with you anytime soon and I may start to feel left out." Nudging her with his shoulder, he laughed lightly before looking briefly at his carving. Despite this possibly being awkward for Mythos, Jett trudged forward. Being part of a large family, he was used to being the awkward one in order to try and cause his siblings to smile or laugh.

Looking carefully at Mythos briefly, Jett still couldn't get it out of his head how much she and Lien looked so similar. Despite some features being different, like Lien's faunus features and smaller physique, he still could see a lot of resemblances."How about a motorcycle?" he inquired suddenly. "I've never carved one before so it would be a good challenge." Looking over at their team leader, he tilted his head slightly to the left and gave her a smile, hoping to lighten the mood even just a little bit.

OOC: So sorry for the delay!!! Life has been really busy and will continue to be busy until mid-June or so.

Watching the others work on pulling Sandy inside the mine, Rackley provided cover fire by taking down a couple more of the Beowolves before nodding at Anza's remark about following. Jumping down from his perch he quickly ran through the pack towards the mine, all the while dodging between the thrashing Grimm that were still clawing around. Ducking under a horizontal slash, he came face to face with another one who's claws were coming down towards him. Moving quickly, he stabbed his bayonet into the beast and fired the last round in his magazine, blowing a gaping hole in the creature as it fell.

Making it to the entrance of the mine, he stopped next to Anza and turned to see where they stood against the remaining Beowolves. Not spotting the Alpha anywhere, the remaining Grimm seemed to still be caught up in the noxious gas. "I-I-I th-think we'll b-be good t-to go inside with th-the others" he stammered, glancing over at Anza before nodding his head towards the mine shaft that led further into the darkness ahead.

Approved Characters / Re: Airi Okairos
« on: May 12, 2017, 04:13:41 PM »

Approved (JJB and Timeworker)

Approved Characters / Re: Saffron de Cortez
« on: May 08, 2017, 07:25:29 PM »
After much debate, particularly about how a quad barreled shotgun can also function as a boomerang, we're going to just say okay with it.

Group approved (JJB, FunkyMonkey, and Janus).

Listening intently to Sherwood, Suntalia did her best to resist her urge to laugh. His accent on words was very unique and she couldn't help but smile at it. Hearing his question back to her, she brightened up and gave a dimpled smile. "Actually, I didn't grow up in a big city, but near a monastery in Vacuo." Smiling while she rested her chin in her hands, she looked at those around her. "Betcha weren't expecting that, huh?" she inquired, laughing lightly.

Watching each team member leave in their designated directions, Savas rolled his shoulders as he turned and made his way towards the eastern wall. Passing what looked like it could be the town hall, he briefly looked inside the burnt building. Not spotting anything out of the ordinary, he snorted and continued on. Let the others search the buildings, focus on finding the Grimm he thought. Steeling his mind as he continued on, he walked past another building that, from the scent, seemed to have a few dead bodies laying within.

Snorting again, Savas finally made it to the eastern wall where a gaping hole resided, as if a creature smashed through it. Looking down, he spotted various tracks that seemed to lead out from this direction. "Seems like they left this way..." he muttered to himself. Looking through the treeline of the forest, there were also signs of Grimm smashing through the forest as well as signs of blood in the grass, as if something or someone was being dragged away.

"Cursed Grimm" Savas growled, clenching his fists as he remembered the tragedy that occurred with his previous teammates. As if being summoned, a distant howl far to the north of the village suddenly broke the silence. Cursing his luck, Savas readied Metatron as he continued to search his side of the village to make sure nothing was nearby and still lurking.

OOC: Grimm to the far north of where Acero would be going. Nothing coming around yet, but something to be aware of.

The Vale Region / Re: Dust on the Rails [initiation] [MLDC]
« on: May 04, 2017, 04:26:25 PM »
Continuing to work on his carving, Jett briefly looked up at Xavier and Mythos. Thinking about the situation, he could see both sides being a good idea. Sensing a slight tension building up between the two, Jett decided it would be best to step in. "Both seem to be a good idea" he stated, continuing to focus on his carving. "I personally would prefer if I worked with Lien as we could probably do a better job at holding the enemies at bay while you two work on taking them out from afar." Looking up at Mythos, he gave her a warm smile. "Also, with the comments the conductor made about Lien, I would feel more comfortable being the one watching her back just in case something happens."

Turning his attention over to Xavier, Jett simply nodded his head once. "In the end, Mythos is the leader, so if she wants to team up with Lien, then we can just go with that" he stated, turning to nod his head in acknowledgment to Mythos. Regardless of the situation, there was a reason that Mythos was picked to be the team leader and not one of the other three. "I trust that you will make the right judgment call, Mythos." With all that said, he simply turned his attention back to his carving, working meticulously on the legs so as to not crack or chip the wood.

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