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Approved Characters / Re: Catalina Glenn
« on: June 23, 2017, 11:57:13 AM »
Re-approved.

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Approved Characters / Re: Catalina Glenn
« on: June 19, 2017, 10:21:14 PM »
Everything seems fine except one thing:

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5 rounds of stimpack shots that remedies pain, small injuries(anything that doesn't leave a scar) and other abnormal status, and help regenerate aura at 1% per second for 5 seconds.

This won't work for two reasons: First, as far as we know, you can't artificially regenerate aura. Second, the ability to purposefully regenerate aura for yourself or others is technically considered a semblance ability, which is also a no go for you since he already has a semblance.

Long story short, remove the stimpack rounds and you're good to go.

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Approved Characters / Re: Aksel Orion
« on: June 19, 2017, 10:00:40 PM »
Group Approved (JJB, Gus, and Janus)

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Approved Characters / Re: Martin Roja
« on: June 02, 2017, 03:44:02 PM »
Re-approved.

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The Vale Region / Re: Dust on the Rails [initiation] [MLDC]
« on: May 16, 2017, 01:20:09 PM »
Sensing that the tension had somewhat dissipated, Jett looked up at the others. Nodding first at Xavier and then at Lien, he decided that it would be best to try and break the tension completely and let everyone relax a bit more before any fighting begins. Standing up, Jett walked across the cabin and sat next to Mythos. "We'll make sure to have plenty of downtime after this so you can have your girl talk with Lien" he said, beaming a smile at Mythos. "Just make sure to save some time for me since it doesn't look like I'll have any time with you anytime soon and I may start to feel left out." Nudging her with his shoulder, he laughed lightly before looking briefly at his carving. Despite this possibly being awkward for Mythos, Jett trudged forward. Being part of a large family, he was used to being the awkward one in order to try and cause his siblings to smile or laugh.

Looking carefully at Mythos briefly, Jett still couldn't get it out of his head how much she and Lien looked so similar. Despite some features being different, like Lien's faunus features and smaller physique, he still could see a lot of resemblances."How about a motorcycle?" he inquired suddenly. "I've never carved one before so it would be a good challenge." Looking over at their team leader, he tilted his head slightly to the left and gave her a smile, hoping to lighten the mood even just a little bit.

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OOC: So sorry for the delay!!! Life has been really busy and will continue to be busy until mid-June or so.


Watching the others work on pulling Sandy inside the mine, Rackley provided cover fire by taking down a couple more of the Beowolves before nodding at Anza's remark about following. Jumping down from his perch he quickly ran through the pack towards the mine, all the while dodging between the thrashing Grimm that were still clawing around. Ducking under a horizontal slash, he came face to face with another one who's claws were coming down towards him. Moving quickly, he stabbed his bayonet into the beast and fired the last round in his magazine, blowing a gaping hole in the creature as it fell.

Making it to the entrance of the mine, he stopped next to Anza and turned to see where they stood against the remaining Beowolves. Not spotting the Alpha anywhere, the remaining Grimm seemed to still be caught up in the noxious gas. "I-I-I th-think we'll b-be good t-to go inside with th-the others" he stammered, glancing over at Anza before nodding his head towards the mine shaft that led further into the darkness ahead.

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Approved Characters / Re: Airi Okairos
« on: May 12, 2017, 04:13:41 PM »
DENIED

Approved (JJB and Timeworker)

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Approved Characters / Re: Saffron de Cortez
« on: May 08, 2017, 07:25:29 PM »
After much debate, particularly about how a quad barreled shotgun can also function as a boomerang, we're going to just say okay with it.

Group approved (JJB, FunkyMonkey, and Janus).

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Listening intently to Sherwood, Suntalia did her best to resist her urge to laugh. His accent on words was very unique and she couldn't help but smile at it. Hearing his question back to her, she brightened up and gave a dimpled smile. "Actually, I didn't grow up in a big city, but near a monastery in Vacuo." Smiling while she rested her chin in her hands, she looked at those around her. "Betcha weren't expecting that, huh?" she inquired, laughing lightly.

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Watching each team member leave in their designated directions, Savas rolled his shoulders as he turned and made his way towards the eastern wall. Passing what looked like it could be the town hall, he briefly looked inside the burnt building. Not spotting anything out of the ordinary, he snorted and continued on. Let the others search the buildings, focus on finding the Grimm he thought. Steeling his mind as he continued on, he walked past another building that, from the scent, seemed to have a few dead bodies laying within.

Snorting again, Savas finally made it to the eastern wall where a gaping hole resided, as if a creature smashed through it. Looking down, he spotted various tracks that seemed to lead out from this direction. "Seems like they left this way..." he muttered to himself. Looking through the treeline of the forest, there were also signs of Grimm smashing through the forest as well as signs of blood in the grass, as if something or someone was being dragged away.

"Cursed Grimm" Savas growled, clenching his fists as he remembered the tragedy that occurred with his previous teammates. As if being summoned, a distant howl far to the north of the village suddenly broke the silence. Cursing his luck, Savas readied Metatron as he continued to search his side of the village to make sure nothing was nearby and still lurking.



OOC: Grimm to the far north of where Acero would be going. Nothing coming around yet, but something to be aware of.

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The Vale Region / Re: Dust on the Rails [initiation] [MLDC]
« on: May 04, 2017, 04:26:25 PM »
Continuing to work on his carving, Jett briefly looked up at Xavier and Mythos. Thinking about the situation, he could see both sides being a good idea. Sensing a slight tension building up between the two, Jett decided it would be best to step in. "Both seem to be a good idea" he stated, continuing to focus on his carving. "I personally would prefer if I worked with Lien as we could probably do a better job at holding the enemies at bay while you two work on taking them out from afar." Looking up at Mythos, he gave her a warm smile. "Also, with the comments the conductor made about Lien, I would feel more comfortable being the one watching her back just in case something happens."

Turning his attention over to Xavier, Jett simply nodded his head once. "In the end, Mythos is the leader, so if she wants to team up with Lien, then we can just go with that" he stated, turning to nod his head in acknowledgment to Mythos. Regardless of the situation, there was a reason that Mythos was picked to be the team leader and not one of the other three. "I trust that you will make the right judgment call, Mythos." With all that said, he simply turned his attention back to his carving, working meticulously on the legs so as to not crack or chip the wood.

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Approved Characters / Re: Yu Mei
« on: May 03, 2017, 11:48:05 AM »
Group approved (JJB, Xarias, & FunkyMonkey)...I guess.

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MiA Characters / Re: Rufus Stern
« on: April 28, 2017, 12:59:32 PM »
First, welcome to the RP board. Overall, this is a fairly good character (love the reference to Moby Dick). There is only two issues/concerns:

History:
1. How did Rufus get into Beacon? There's nothing showing that he had any formal training or studies so there's not much to say as to how he was accepted into Beacon. Seeing that there's nothing on him going to combat school, the only other option for him to get into Beacon is the Beacon Enrollment Exam, which is a fairly hard test to pass for someone with no formal training and education. Please clarify this.
2. This won't hold up your character from getting approved, but at some point, we'd like it if you can do a write-up on this "Great White Grimm". This will fall under the 'Worldbuilding" section in the "Grimm Catalog". You will just need to PM the Worldbuild staff your Grimm and await for their approval.

That's about it for this character. Overall, this is very well-written so well done.

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Laughing lightly at everyone's remarks, Suntalia reached over and gently jabbed at Noctis' shoulder and winked at him. Turning her attention to Sherwood, she beamed a smile at him. "The lucky one is me. It's not everyday that I get to make four new friends." Keeping the fact that she normally makes around six to eight new friends on a daily basis, she was happy nonetheless that she got to spend time with this team.

Deciding to change the topic as Noctis seemed embarrassed by Diamante's remark, a remark that will get him a scolding later, Suntalia turned her full attention on to Sherwood. "So what caused you to be late for dinner? Couldn't figure out what to wear? Did you get lost? Was there an elderly lady that you helped cross the street? Maybe there was a hot girl that you swooned over while coming here? Please do tell!" she asked excitedly. Resting her chin in her hands while leaning on her elbows, she shot Sherwood a dimpled smile, while her legs swung back and forth under the table.

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OOC: Sorry for the delay! I've been really busy with so much that it's been difficult to be in the right mindset to even post.



Steadying his breath, Savas continued to take deep breaths while the airship continued its path. Hearing Acero's comment about waking him up when they get there, Savas focused his thoughts on the deep void within himself. Emptying all thoughts of the past as well as any problems that may arise today, he continued to take a few deep breaths. The silence was broken to the sudden scratching of pencil upon paper. Opening one eye slightly, he noticed Ribeiro busy drawing something as if to pass the time, while the others also had their eyes closed and appeared to have fallen asleep. Ngggrh...didn't think her hobby would be drawing he thought before refocusing his mind on being empty, while the noise of Ribeiro's drawing provided a kind of calming effect over him.

Thirty minutes later...

"We're arriving at your destination!" yelled the pilot as he began the landing descent into what looked to be a burned down village. Opening his eyes, Savas cracked his neck as the airship touched ground and the back door opened up to let them out. "Ngggrh...guess we're here" he muttered as he stood up and harnessed his weapons on his back. Picking up his pack he walked until he was about to step off. "Let's go" he said simply, glancing back at the others before walking off the airship.

Feeling the morning sun on his face, Savas took this opportunity to look around the razed village. Taking note of the large gaping holes on the northern and eastern side of the wall that surrounded the village, he moved his gaze to the village itself. Here and there, buildings showed signs of being broken into as well as half burned to the ground. Within a few of the buildings, embers still burned, indicating that the attack had happened fairly recent. Signs of bloodshed could be seen on the walls of the buildings as well as a few bodies being seen lying here and there. Lastly, there were many tracks in the ground that showed signs of Beowolves and larger Grimm having come through.

Bending down on one knee, Savas inspected one of the Grimm tracks. Touching the ground briefly, he looked around before turning back to his team. "Tracks are recent. The Grimm are still nearby" he rumbled, letting his deep voice resonate through the desolate village. Kei and Ribeiro, search the village for any survivors. If you find any, send them back to the airship" he said, looking over at Kei and Ribeiro. Turning his gaze to Acero, he motioned him towards the north. Acero, inspect the hole in the northern wall and see if the tracks of the Grimm are coming in the village or out." Turning his attention to the hold in the eastern wall, he rolled his shoulders briefly. "I'll take the eastern wall. Call out if you need help." Not wanting to talk much more, he simply pulled Metatron out of its harness and slung it over his shoulder. "Questions?" he asked, trying not to scowl while talking.


Picture of village. There's a wall surrounding it with a gate at the north and south end of the village.
Spoiler: show

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