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Character Creation / Re: Gram MacConkey
« Last post by Moth on Today at 11:41:53 AM »
Right! Sorry about the wait for Gram’s review. His backstory and personality are looking good, but he’s gonna need some tweaks before be can go live.

The first problem comes with his semblance. One person’s aura can’t interfere with another’s, so poisoning a person via a toxic gas cloud made of aura isn’t going to work. They literally wouldn’t be able to inherit it. In a similar fashion, it wouldn’t be able to dissolve the flesh of someone who still has aura up. That doesn’t say anything about the obnoxious odor annoying people though, and it can still effect grimm thanks to their lack of aura.

Secondarily, we generally ask for three explicit weaknesses included in combat behavior. His lack of ranged abilities already makes for a good one, but two more and some more detail will be required before approval.

Make these changes and he should be well on his way to approval.
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Character Creation / Re: Gram MacConkey
« Last post by TheKaru on Today at 11:04:08 AM »
Not to sound annoying but uh... some feedback would be really awesome :D
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The Vale Region / Re: Big Guns and Bigger Booms [CLOSED]
« Last post by MonsterManic on Today at 08:15:58 AM »
”Yes, we are.” Professor Ferus nodded assent, while behind him the small figure of a distant aircraft could be seen emerging from over the horizon. As it drew closer to Beacon’s wide landing platforms something seemed different, it didn’t look like the standard dull form of the regular Bullheads, and a closer look when it landed revealed the airship was armed; a standard military-grade minigun mounted on each side of the open doors as well as what looked to be missile tubes displayed a menacing front. To a keener eye, they would also be able to attribute the slightly different shape of the airship to reinforced plating.

All the while, Lunae was staring with an open mouth. ”Ooooooooooooooh.” she breathed, awestruck. It looked like she was about to clamber all over the equipment, so Ferus stopped her by saying ”Climb on, but do not position yourself at the turrets.” Lunae’s face turned crestfallen and she boarded the ship without saying a single word, all the while looking at the minigun with a longing expression.

The insides of the ship were more cramped than usual, largely due to the stacked crates and belts of ammunition used to feed the twin turrets. It seemed this Bullhead was specially modified for combat.
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Beacon Academy / Re: The INKKredible room fiesta [INKK]
« Last post by Th3King0fChaos on February 20, 2019, 08:24:42 PM »
F my hopes for forgetting to check in again.
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Ismael looks at his hand and shrugs at the idea as he has nothing special, and everyone grabbed the cards from the center, so they'll all be rejects of the three of them. So he looks towards each person and knocks on the floor and passes his turn, hoping he some how got some crazy luck of the draw from some strange rule, or he is boned.
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Beacon Academy / Re: [Open] Breakfast At Bacon
« Last post by Frankenstein Joe on February 20, 2019, 02:01:22 PM »
Immediately swallowing what was already in her mouth, Aoife would take the ice cubes to put them in her mouth and start crunching on them, she'd move one of them under her canine to start audibly chomping and scraping it to fragment it. Ensuring at least the first cube to be destroyed was down her throat, she'd move the remaining shards into her cheeks like a hamster to quickly add, "The uniform is too stuffy. I can't properly breathe in it as it gets too warm. Though, I am always up for training when the sleepy one joins us. Or if we find a fourth member. Besides, Nevermores are like, eaasy."  Going back to caress her spear she'd then look it over, "Oh! And you're boring to fight. All you have to do is like, use Fire a few times, then you are like oh nooo, I can't jump any more. Let's quit." Continuing to torment the teammate even as the dog faunus moved over, she'd periodically glance at the cold looking Faunus and slowly develop a smug smile while looking at Ayburn knowingly.
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Character Creation / Re: Lucas Meridiem
« Last post by Moth on February 20, 2019, 01:36:10 PM »
Lucas is a well-written  character, but there’s a few things regarding his semblance that need to be addressed before his second approval:

- A range of 300 ft is a bit much, so there's been a polite request to nerf it from a decent chunk of the staff.
- How does Lucas apply dust effects to his lantern? Are they applied while it’s within the initial summoning range, or are they flatup shot out to the lantern, and if so, can they be intercepted? Either way, the current implication is that the dust flatup teleports 300 feet out to his lantern, and if that’s how it’s done, it should be mentioned.

Edit 2/21: Semblance range and Lucas’ status as a SCF for the lantern approved via Discord. Another possible weakness brought to attention via Staff Discussion was the fact that his F/I dust combination blocks the lantern’s own light, and therefore disables its own dust effects, since the light is what causes it explicitly - so that might be worth tweaking.
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Beacon Academy / Re: [Open] Breakfast At Bacon
« Last post by arcus_gray on February 19, 2019, 04:45:19 AM »
As the two students conversed in the sparring area a 3rd walked up near them. A blonde haired german shephard faunas wearing a jacket and a coat with his arms wrapped around himself, evidently not taking the cold weather well.
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Beacon Academy / Re: Starting a rebellion [RBLS]
« Last post by EdgeyReyes on February 17, 2019, 05:29:17 AM »
"Stop being a hater Reginald, cookies are great, or do you preferred having yours decorated with flakes of gold instead of chocolate?" The faunus couldn't wait and took a sip of her tea, her lips lightly touching the edge of the cup as she tasted the tea, "It's nice" Akel said, directing her comment towards the obvious teamaker "Thank you Shiroe." she added on, at the same time she grabbed the free chair beside herself and pulled it out for Reginald to sit on "I doubt you'll drink tea on your own bed, take a seat Reginald."
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The Vale Region / A Difference In Social Skills [CLOSED]
« Last post by NotSurprised on February 17, 2019, 02:25:09 AM »
Iron is not having a good time. The very opposite in fact. Then again, when is he ever having a good time? However, unlike every other time, he had never felt this aggravated with his team. After all, his excellent leader had deemed that the relations within the team are not as strong as they should be, therefore they should spend some more time outside together in order to reinforce these bonds. Iron, being how he usually is, deemed the expedition a waste of time until Isabelle decided to make it mandatory for him. He tried his best to break free of the event, but his leader insured that he had no choice but to attend.

With that, Iron finds himself in the City of Vale after taking a bullhead out, waiting for his fellow teammates to show up. If he remembered correctly, Ayaka wasn’t planned to show up since she has a mostly cordial relationship with the team. On the other hand, Iron would admit that he isn’t exactly the greatest with human interaction, but he does feel that Lucina’s mere existence makes the team dynamics rather interesting for the rest of them. As he continues to wait, Iron would think about what he and his team should do for the day so that he can just get back home.
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Character Creation / Re: +1'd Characters
« Last post by Xarias Fury on February 16, 2019, 07:55:12 PM »
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