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Introductions, birthdays, and departures. / Re: hello!
« Last post by nathan67003 on March 14, 2019, 08:37:03 AM »
Noice, welcome to the site. Hope you have fun and enjoy creating your own Remnant peeps.
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WiP Characters / Re: Roux Palakiko
« Last post by MonsterManic on March 14, 2019, 07:00:28 AM »
Personally I would like to see some more detail on everything, that’s the only major gripe I have with Roux. Even though you’ve read our advice, it still feels barebones but it is an improvement upon the previous iteration.

One thing I will ask is that the weapon description be more than a namedrop of what it’s supposed to be. For example, is there any decorations on the hook? How large or long is it? Is there any sign of previous use eg. dents or scratches? How does the weapon transform/parts-form into its machine gun form? Etc, etc. I know Reaper has already mentioned this but it does bear repeating.
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The Vale Region / Re: Taking A Bull By The Horns [PLOT] [CLOSED] [FOREVER FALL]
« Last post by Xarias Fury on March 13, 2019, 09:34:22 PM »
     It took a while but Kei finally managed to get through the lock, having the other students look for one piece of junk or another or for her key that she supposedly dropped. In one swift motion, the thief spread some of the dust on the floor on the lock, pressed a laminated document she snagged a while back against the scanner, then pressed her palm against it.

     The door opened with a mechanical whir and the simple yet annoying obstacle slid away to allow the students in. Sorry guys, Kei thought, but there are more important things at stake than their silly mission. She slipped in, wondering if the door closed automatically or not, but it stood open while the others were busy doing...well nothing. If they saw her walk in they wouldn't be none the wiser anyways. She- er - he was an employee here. At least on the outside.

     As Kei stalked through the suspicious caboose she heard muffled sounds of arguing just ahead. The room was lined with sheets of steel way too heavy to be moved individually and had a few deactivated Atlesian Knights just standing at ready on the sides. An alert would probably cause them to hop back into action but as it was they seemed content with just staying stiff as statues. Kei thanked her luck that the lock worked, otherwise she would have to deal with getting caught on top of being shot at by the train's security detail. Another door barred the way and it was just as locked as the previous one. Another splash of dust and the same trick later she got through and walked in to sounds of...was Professor Nox yelling?

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     "I will NOT participate any further in this project, Jonathan!" Despite his wiry frame the Professor stood firm and slammed a fist against a large white pod behind him. It looked like an egg flattened on one side, resting on the floor supported by several mechanical arms, wires, and large amounts of tubes feeding fluid and power into the device.

     "A theory does not give right for experimentation of living, breathing subjects!" Nox continued, "We don't know what would happen if a person's aura can handle such strain, nor can we measure without further research. I dropped this years ago because of that and even you supported my decision!"

     Jonathan smiled. "See now, William. That's where you're wrong"

     "What? This is clearly an aura pod, that means you have someone inside!"

     "Some thing, William. A vegetable has no emotions nor can it feel pain. Not that it was a person to begin with anyways. Nobody is going to miss a Faunus-" Jonathan practically spat the word, "Not to mention White Fang scum. Just because you're desperate to feel the same way as them, to feel emotions the same way, doesn't mean you should get in the way of progress William, not when you've contributed so much to this endeavor. Perhaps in the future we can even create devices capable of enhancing conscious, living souls. Think of the possibilities! Every person has the potential to no longer fully rely on mechanical weaponry to fight Grimm and terrorists alike. All it would take is a simple machine-"

     "And huge amounts of dust." Nox cut in, "Just give me the plans, I need to see everything before I make my decision..."

     Jonathan's thin lips stretched into a smile once more, "Now that's the William I know. Professor Ovid would be glad to hear you've come on board."

     "I haven't agreed yet, Jonathan. I'm merely interested in the schematics."

     "Of course."

     A loud crash echoed throughout the chamber, and Jonathan pulled out his scroll. Atlesian Knights all throughout the car sprang to life and and started marching towards the source.

     Jonathan stood straight, raising an eyebrow at Professor Nox. "I'm sure it's nothing. But we can't be too sure."

     Nox could only scrunch his eyebrows at the words, taking his hands away from the machine before pulling out his own scroll.

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Introductions, birthdays, and departures. / hello!
« Last post by AlterMi on March 13, 2019, 09:30:59 PM »
Hello! I'm AlterMi!! I'm new to here and just saying hello. How we all get along! Love rwby and everything from it, love the fanfiction too, and I that's all I can really say atm.
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The Vale Region / Re: [CLOSED]Pecking Order
« Last post by NotSurprised on March 13, 2019, 09:02:50 PM »
It was interesting watching the kid use his new gun. It’s like a baby that got to play with a toy for the first time. Though, she supposes that she felt bad when she saw where exactly the boy hit the target. Normally, Artist would just leave it be and be on her way, but she does have time to kill… Against her better judgement - which she has very little of - Artist made her way next to the boy with a rather easygoing smile.

Being next to the kid, Artist was able to study the boy’s feature a lot more closely. The slick hairstyle made him look a lot more appealing, and the additional scarf definitely bumped up the kid’s style points. Otherwise however, he looked very normal, almost rather soft. If Artist wasn’t gunning for someone else, she’d appreciate the kid’s appearance a lot more. Quickly looking away from the kid’s features, she decides that she’ll simply start the conversation.

”So kid, you planning to actually use the gun,” Artist would then gesture towards the target in front of Tiber, ”or is it just for compensation? To be quite frank, it seems like you have no idea on what you’re doing.” Short, blunt, and honest. That’s how Artist rolls and anyone that says otherwise can fuck off.
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Beacon Academy / Re: Extending the Olive Branch [Closed]
« Last post by Moth on March 13, 2019, 12:58:00 AM »
“One.” Her left foot shifts forwards, her right foot perpendicular to stabilize her stance.

“Two.” Her left hand drifts to the neck of the weapon, her right sliding back as the staff is tucked in close to her body. There’s thin haze in the air around Prism, drifting from the tip of the blade and and curling up and away from her eyes. She doesn’t seem to notice.

“Three!”

The blade of Hawk’s Eye leaves momentary wound of iridescence in as it cuts through the air, the now-familiar white beam streaking down the arena to decimate another hologram. She watches for the split second it takes to confirm her success before her eyes dart to Juno, seeing if the man besides her manages to succeed.
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Beacon Academy / Re: Extending the Olive Branch [Closed]
« Last post by Rush on March 13, 2019, 12:43:02 AM »
An extension of the body… His aura already encompassed the sword itself, but to extend it beyond?

Well, she and several others had already proved that such a task was possible. Who was to say he couldn’t do the same? Offering a small nod as he called forth his aura again. Closing his eyes, the young man attempted to focus on the blade, an extension of his being, of his own creation and design. It was by this tool that he was able to do some of the amazing feats he is capable of, how he made it through the Vytal Festival as successfully as he had.

His aura pooling around Type-J, Juno opened his eyes, looking to the Faunus beside him for confirmation.
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Beacon Academy / Re: How to Train your Idiot [Closed]
« Last post by Rush on March 13, 2019, 12:17:33 AM »
Juno cried out in pain as the sudden force impacted his chest, sending him into the ground and sliding on his back, kicking up a cloud of dirt and dust along the way. The young man eventually tumbled his way back to his feet as he slid to a stop, one hand firmly planted on the ground with the other gripping his blade. So that was too easily read. New plan.

A loud, reverberating BANG sounded as the young man launched himself back at the scorpion-tailed woman, maintaining a similar line to the first two strikes. This time, however, was different. The young man’s violet, fiery aura erupted around him mid flight, enveloping him completely before dispersing and leaving a shadowy, silhouetted form in its wake. Though his body seemed frozen for a second after the display, Juno maintained his momentum, fully intent on slamming full tilt into the older woman.

Juno hadn’t wanted to break out Full Stop so early, but quite frankly, fighting without Phi was much more difficult than he had anticipated, and Malina clearly outclassed him. As much as he hated to admit it, he was beginning to regret leaving the AI behind.
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WiP Characters / Re: Bordeaux Page Alderson
« Last post by Golden Koi on March 12, 2019, 11:42:00 PM »
Done. It's less of a weapon and more various Dust canisters to use, but I hope it works.
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WiP Characters / Re: Roux Palakiko
« Last post by Flamenami on March 12, 2019, 07:57:03 PM »
Thanks for your feedback! I've edited Roux's profile and am ready for more ways to improve him as a character!
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