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Right, hello and welcome to RWBYrpg! It's always nice to see new people on the board. It looks like you've got a pretty clear idea of who you want your character to be, but she's going to need to be refined before she can be approved.

Firstly, pop over here and take a look at the character template. You're gonna want to copy that and use it as the basis for your profile. Please, really do that. It's part of the character submission requirements.

Secondarily, two quick pieces of advice for Chara:

- If you want her to be a student, she's gonna need to have some degree of combat capability if she's going to get into any of the hunter's academies. If you want her to be a civilian, then a lack of combat training is expected - but the hunter's academies is where most of the roleplay action is.

- You're going to want to flesh out her profile a little more as well. Don't be afraid to go into detail! We like detail here, and length really isn't an issue.

Also, are you referencing Undertale?
Name: Chara James Eisenborne

Age: 17

Race: Human

Sex: Female

Appearance: 6'2" with dark brown hair blowing to the bottom of her neck accompanied with Brown eyes, her skin is mostly tan. She has a pretty flat chest, and most of her muscles are in her legs, overall, this specimen looks nothing out of the ordinary.

Type of fighter: N/A

Combat behavior: Chara has an untrained agile fighting style, relying on flexibility to dodge attacks and to throw quick jabs in vulnerable areas.

Skills: Good at cooking, baking- wait, is this meant to be for combat? Alright then, NONE!

History: She doesn't tell her backround as it is just an unremarkable backround with an abusive family, but you can see from her facial features that she may have used to be male.

Personality: Chara has an outgoing personality, however, she is a danger to herself, as she will put herself at risk of harm to help others.

Aura: Chara has a higher average amount of aura, however, this aura does not have any offensive use no matter how hard she may try.

Semblance(Undeveloped): First Aid: Chara can sacrifice her aura to heal physical and mental wounds of creatures around her, the more aura she uses, the better the healing properties.

Weapon: N/A: Chara is a melee fighter and does not have any money for weapons.
Plot Zone / Re: Historical Hearsay [Plot Signup]
« Last post by Moth on Today at 02:38:25 AM »
Right, I left this up for a week in case anybody else wanted to sign up, but it looks like everyone who's interested is already interested.

Party participants have been edited into the original post. I'll reach out to y'all on discord soon, and throw up a starter post sometime in a few days. Keep an eye out!
Approved Characters / Re: Cyrus Blaze
« Last post by Vox Machinae on June 12, 2021, 03:44:38 PM »
Symbol is too big, -1.

Jokes aside, after a look through nothing seems too stupid. +1.

Moving the thread once I remember how.
Approved Characters / Re: Cyrus Blaze
« Last post by Moth on June 11, 2021, 05:23:18 PM »
WiP Characters / Hozu Aka
« Last post by joserasco80 on June 11, 2021, 11:34:35 AM »
Hozu aka is a 16-year-old teenager, he has black hair and brown eyes, he is 1.80 meters tall, he wears black glasses, he is usually someone curious and cheerful, although he can be a bit abrupt when it comes to speaking, he has trained since he was 11, he has a sword called shirohime that works like a pistol, is quite fast in short distances but tires easily and has moderately good reflexes its appearance allows it to set fire to itself or the things it has touched but it needs to eat twice as much as the common person its aura is moderate

He was born in vale, he does not know who his parents are, he is an orphan, his dream is to be a hunter and fight with grimm in fights, he is someone who likes to move and attack with speed and precision, although he tends to get too excited about the battle
Approved Characters / Re: Cyrus Blaze
« Last post by Aethon Shaan on June 11, 2021, 07:16:37 AM »
Also because of his wings and dust supplies, Cyrus is a lot more manoeuvrable and faster than the average man of his size as well as having the obvious advantage in any aerial engagement but when they fade so does his speed. Speaking of his wings Cyrus is unable to fly unaided but through careful use of updrafts from his semblance and a mixture of gravity, wind and fire dust which Cyrus calls Fly Dust the giant can approximate flight for a time.

Changes made as above.
Approved Characters / Re: Cyrus Blaze
« Last post by Moth on June 10, 2021, 03:17:36 AM »
All your edits look good! I appreciate the attention to detail and elaboration in his story. The added detail on his weaponry and the ability to split it into two seems pretty neat. I've got two more notes 'bout your character and then you'll have my +1.

Combat Behavior: I just want to bring your attention to a portion of the character creation rules in theappearance section that limits the flight capabilities of OCs with wings - gliding's just fine, but prolonged flying is impossible due to the sheer weight of the human body. There's a few ways around that though (flying character of my own), and that's usually through the use of his semblance and Dust. If you throw in a sentence about using the updrafts from his pyrokinesis (I think you've mentioned this) and wind dust use to stay aloft, that's good enough for me.

High agility is fine, especially if he's been training so long and is technically something of a prodigy. But he's still a big boiTM who puts a lot of power into his swings, and a first-year hunter student. If his increased agility and speed basically come from... high-focused technique and adrenaline and it isn't constant, then we're good.

Thanks for your patience with everything, especially all the edits.
Plot Zone / Re: Historical Hearsay [Plot Signup]
« Last post by Metroidhunter on June 09, 2021, 10:21:14 PM »
I'll sign up with Isabelle. She is only a first year, but she is good on the offensive and shines the most when she has solid support.
Plot Zone / Re: Historical Hearsay [Plot Signup]
« Last post by ReaperJoe on June 09, 2021, 09:21:15 PM »
I'll throw Lucas in here, though that currently brings the count to two support types. At least there'll be a 4th year to balance it out
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