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Re: Setsuna Antiqua
« Reply #15 on: June 29, 2018, 01:54:29 AM »
-Fixed formatting and spelling errors.
-Updated and reworded Combat and Aura/Semblance for clarity.
-Fixed image links.
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Setsuna Antiqua - First Year Leader, Team ASTC - Chivalrous Shield

Tina Allan - First Year Member, Team ATLA - Twin Sharpshooter

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Re: Setsuna Antiqua
« Reply #16 on: July 01, 2018, 05:51:31 AM »
You left in a 'dischord' in(which I fixed) and fighting like a gladiator isn't that descriptive considering there where several different types of gladiator and none used a long sword. Regardless edits approved.
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