Sorry for the delay here! Everyone has been busy with Finals and holidays so we haven't had much of a chance to do any reviews. I'll go ahead and do your first review, but first things first...
Kingnoname1, while I do appreciate you wanting to help with the reviewing process (your review was pretty decent), there is one thing that I want to make sure you're aware of. Any character that is in the Character Creation section can only be reviewed by those who are authorized to do reviews. If you desire to do reviews, then you're free to do a character review on any WIP characters. Hope you understand.
That said, here's my review:
Appearance:
Your appearance section is very lacking and leaves much to wonder. If she was placed before you, what are some other things you would notice? Try and describe every aspect of her to the best of your ability so that the rest of us who read this profile would see how she looks.
History:
A couple things here:
1. How was her aura unlocked so that she could use her semblance?
2. I was gonna hit this later, but I'll talk about it now: how is she still able to have her family weapon? I'm going to guess that the WF took their weapons away, so how does she have it now?
Personality:
Okay, I have one problem with her personality. You have down that she has trust issues and is very withdrawn. However, then you do a complete 180 and say that she is friendly with others. Considering the extent of her history, I find that EXTREMELY improbable. Being a slave and whipped non-stop for a year will take a huge toll on her personality and even traumatizing her extensively. Saying that she is still friendly with others and able to make friends in spite of all she's been through just doesn't fit here. My suggestion would be to either take that part away, or put something in her history showing how she was able to overcome her traumas and be able to somewhat make friends with others around her. I will say this: with you putting down that they were outcasts while at Signal, the latter choice is highly unlikely.
TL;DR - Either keep it all the way with the dark history and have it completely affect her personality, or get rid of most of the dark history.
Semblance:
A few things here:
1. Being able to go invisible for 30 seconds for only 5% is too OP. Either lower the duration or up the cost.
2. How long can she use it at one time?
3. What are the drawbacks/strains to using her semblance? Every semblance has some.
4. Just so it's perfectly clear here: Having complete invisibility is too OP and will not be allowed. That said, I know you've indicated it, but please make it very clear that it's not complete invisibility. While you're at it, please indicate how much of a blur someone would see if she was moving?
Combat Behavior:
This section is extremely lacking. Please put more down to describe her combat style as well as her strengths and weaknesses.
Weapon:
A couple things here:
1. What dust types does she use? Also, to say that it doubles the velocity is taking it too far. You can have it increase the velocity to an extent, but not doubling it.
2. As I hit it before, how does she have her family weapon now? How was she able to steal it from the WF when she escaped?
That should cover it for me. Aside from everything I've said, Kingnoname1 also did bring up some valid points so I suggest you look at what they said also.