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slimeboymob13

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Dark Shiro
« on: November 30, 2016, 09:42:30 PM »
CHARACTER

Name: Dark Shiro

Age: 17

Species and Gender: Human Male

Symbol: A black X surrounded in a cycle of white

Occupation: Combat Academy Student

Appearance: Wears a long white coat trimed in black with black pants,
coat was a black X on the shoulders and has a hood trimed in black. Has long brown hair that covers his left eye and has black eyes. Wears gloves and a bandana covering his mouth.

Height is 5'9" and Weight is 137 lbs.

History: Dark had Lived outside of the kingdom Vale for most of his life. When we lost his family from a grim attack at the age 16,
he came to Beacon in hopes to become stronger and wiser when it came to combat so he make the things the grim did to his family
wont happen to anyone else.

Personality: Is mainly silent, little bit of a loner, Kind, and careless about his well being when it comes to others.

Aura and Semblance: Has a dark black aura and semblance has the ablility to control the wind for attacks of wind like blast at the enemy, but is costly and only good at close-mid range plus it does not do much damage. Also has the power lift the user 7 block and is used for scaling obstacles. This semblance is called wind manipulation.

Combat Behavior: Is somewhat quick and perceptive but also can get a little emotional when pushed to hard.

WEAPON

Name: Shadow Strike

Primary Form: one handed sword with rigid sides with a grey blade and black handle.

Secondary Form: compound bow with a sight and rigid blades facing out with a quiver

History: Sword was made by Frost Shiro, (Dark's father) and was given to Dark before his fathers death in a huge grim attack. Frost wanted to make a weapon both ranged and close ranged but wounded up making a mid ranged weapon. Frost did not complained and did not care to fix it because he say no need sense it was perfect to him in every way.
« Last Edit: December 01, 2016, 03:19:45 PM by slimeboymob13 »

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Re: Dark Shiro
« Reply #1 on: December 03, 2016, 05:36:55 PM »
I don't really understand what you mean here

'Also has the power lift the user 7 block and is used for scaling obstacles.'

Is it city blocks? Because they don't really have a set distance.

Also have you given any thought to the characters aura strength, what they can do and how they use it in combat. Because most characters semblance is their secret weapon your aura would normally be your go to power boost and should characterise Dark's fighting style.
No criticism is too harsh so hit me with your best shot.

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