Lilly needs a team. She is a headstrong team based fighter who loves to dance.

CHARACTER

Name:
Lilly Meier
Stage Name: Melody
Age:
21, Amare 3rd
Species and Gender:
Faunus, cat     Female
Symbol: 
A spear with a cloth ribbon coiling around it
Occupation:
3rd Year student, dancer
Appearance:
Lilly is 5’5” and 121lbs. She has straight, light red hair that falls past her shoulders and cat ears. She wears her hair down at all times. Her eyes are emerald green and she has a heart-shaped face. She is often found wearing silver headphones and dancing slightly to whatever she is listening to.
When she can she wears a pair of dark blue jean short shorts and a black off the shoulder crop top that shows off a little bit of her midriff. On her feet she wears over the knee black boots. To top her outfit off she wears long, red jacket that she keeps unbuttoned. For accessories she tends to wear chokers, often with a red design, fingerless gloves, and a messenger bag.
History:
Growing up in the slums of Vacuo, Lilly always loved music and would sneak into concerts and dance performances. She practiced nonstop to try and be as good as her idols. Her parents supported her as best they could with their meager income and always made sure that even if they didn’t eat, she would have food. Lilly was surrounded by other faunus her entire childhood so when she eventually got a scholarship to a local dance school she wasn’t prepared for the racism she would encounter. However, instead of allowing the humans to bully and push her down, Lilly would simply brush their insults off and outwork them and try to avoid making enemies of them and instead become their friends. She quickly became a star dancer and by the time she was 12 she was touring as part of a youth group. Because of how weak Vacuo’s government is she quickly realized how popular and cool the huntsmen were and she decided to try and pursue that as an alternate career to dancing, because what would be cooler than a dancer who was also a huntsman. She enrolled in Oasis Academy. There she excelled in her studies but never was the best fighter. She was never confidant enough in her abilities in combat and often was in the lower half of her class in combat scores. She graduated from Oasis and got into Shade due to her high academic scores and potential. After two years of school at Shade, she applied for a transfer to Beacon because of the culture there and an amazing opportunity had opened up for her in Vale, she got a mentorship with one of her dance idols, Kiara Ashley (A great dancer in the dance community). Moving to Vale, she began learning from Kiara and going to the academy. 
Personality:
Lilly is a very extroverted person. She loves to meet new people and is constantly talking or otherwise trying to be the center of attention. She used to spend her time surrounded by her friends in Vacuo. She is an impulsive person often doing things on a whim and will answer any dare. She never backs down from a challenge. To keep up her appearance and keep her friends around she tries to always be upbeat in front of others no matter what is going on in her life. She always has a smile on her face and is affectionate to all of her friends and to her a friend is anyone she talks to for more than five minutes. She is always listening to music and moving to the beat. Her hobbies are dancing, hanging out with friends, making new friends, and playing or listening to music. She if often found at a local club dancing and drinking. However, she knows that she isn’t the best combatant and will try to avoid most fights and work as a team. She is terrified that even though she has come so far, she will fail and end up right back where she came from and so she is constantly pushing herself when she is training in dance or combat or school. When she gets too excited, Lilly tends to purr a little bit. 
Aura and Semblance:
Dance Partner
Lilly has always been in tune with music, and always wanted someone who could share her love of dancing. Her semblance summons a red dance partner out of her aura. He fights as Lilly fights. He fights based on what music she is listening to and how she is moving so as she hits he will attack from another direction. It doesn’t require too much concentration for her to keep him fighting. He deals a relatively low amount of damage, about half of what Lilly does which is already lower than most people at her level. She can keep him fighting for an hour straight before needing to rest for an hour. He isn’t only useful in combat. She also practices partner dances with him because he matches his movement to her she programs him by practice dancing with him, so he knows what different music that she is listening to means and will follow a designated style of fighting based on that. He can be destroyed by a few solid hits. Resummonin him only requires Lilly to pause for a second and focus on bringing him back.
Combat Behavior: 
Lilly fights in rhythm with her music. She is an agile dancer and that shows in her combat. As she spins and dances around her enemies she jabs the quickly with her spears before moving to dodge the retaliation attacks. She uses her semblance when she needs to deal more damage or distract the enemy more by adding another opponent to the mix. She will move in sync with her semblance partner and their attacks land at the same time at different points to try and make blocking or dodging her attacks harder. She tries to organize her team to fight with her and as a unit because she knows her combat skill isn’t the best, but she can see the music of the fight and is great at working with others to take down foes that the would normally have trouble with. Her greatest weakness is that she doesn’t deal much damage and isn’t able to take a lot. She relies on her ability to dodge attacks and all of her dodging is a dance and once someone figures out that she is dancing based on her music they can anticipate how she will move until she switches music. An opponent paying attention will be able to land blows too often for her to be effective at close quarters. If this happens she backs away and uses her guns but this means that she is removed from the combat and she is worse at directing her companions in the fight due to her not being in the middle of the music of the combat.
WEAPON

Name:
Sunrise
Primary Form:
A three foot long spear, the weapon is black with red along the edges
Secondary Form:
The spear transforms into a one handed SMG with a thirty mag clip. Think of Pyrrha’s weapon for transformations.
Tertiary Form:
Lilly keeps a holster for her SMG on her left hip and stores the weapon in gun form there but mostly fights with it in spear form.
Name:
Sunset
Primary Form:
A two foot spear, the weapon is red with black edging. The blade has what looks like the revolving cylinder of a revolver where it attaches to the shaft.
Secondary Form:
The spear shaft collapses into the handle of a revolver. The revolver has eight chamber and fires on bullet at a time.
Tertiary Form:
She stores this weapon in a holster on her right side but also mostly uses the spear form.
History:
Lilly watched a lot of huntsmen fight in her time in Vacuo and there she noticed that the most elegant weapon to her was a pair of short spears so when she got the chance she made herself a pair of them. They fit her dance style so she was able to use what she already knew in combat and it allowed her to keep up with the rest of her class.

This is my first character so any advice would be great 
CHARACTER

Name:
Celeste Malaika Izusa
Age:
19, Hua 14th
Species and Gender:
Faunus, dove, female
Symbol: 
A pair of angel wings extending from a circle
Occupation:
1st year student at Beacon
Appearance:
The first thing you notice about Celeste is her wings. She has a pair of dove wings that extend from her back. They are white and get flecks of black as they get farther from her back. She is 5’4” and weighs 133lbs. Celeste has dark brown hair that falls down past her shoulders. She has a streak of white in the back. She almost always wears it down. She has a pale complexion and a few freckles on her cheeks.
She wears a white tank top most of the time with a pair of jeans. She wears this whenever she doesn’t have to be in her school uniform or is on a combat mission. She often has her brown leather jacket on. Her belt is white and on the buckle is her symbol. She normally wears leather ankle boots that match her jacket. On her neck she wears a necklace with an ammonite hanging on it. She got the necklace from her little sister when she left for Beacon. Her earrings are a pair of pearls.
When she wants to dress to impress, Celeste wears a long dark blue dress that hugs her figure and flairs out at the bottom. She wears her hair in a braid that comes down over her left shoulder. She wears a pair of heels.
In combat, Celeste wears a pair of black combat boots. She wears a pair of padded pants with metal greaves. Above those she wears a loose, black, long sleeve shirt and a light, leather jacket with steel studs. Her weapon is strapped to her right leg. She keeps her combat knife on her hips.
History:
Celeste was born into a wealthy family in Mistral. Her mother runs one of the largest technology companies in Mistral that makes everything from phones, to computers, to TV’s and video games. The company, Archon Technology, is mostly just in Mistral but has a few stores outside the kingdom. Her mom was almost never home when she was growing up due to her work and Celeste was mostly raised by her father. He is a children’s book writer. He worked from home and loved doing everything with his kids. Growing up she was always going to the best schools that money could buy and was being trained to help work in her family’s company. She was expected to grow up to be like her older brother, who by the time he graduated college was hired as an overseas manager. He helped her dad raise and she always looked up to her brother. As she grew up she was sheltered from most of the world and the racism against faunus. At school, no one would bully her because of her family’s influence. When she was fourteen she learned how people really are. She was coming back home after hanging out with some of her friends shopping when an anti faunus riot broke out. As the riot turned violent she was caught by them. The mod decided that a rich faunus would be the perfect was to make their point and as they caught her they prepared to cut off her wings. Before they could do that, a huntsman jumped in and drove the mob off, saving Celeste. Her eyes open to the world around her, Celeste decided that she no longer could just go forward living in luxury and working for her mother’s company. She begged and pleaded to be allowed to transfer to the local primary combat school. She transferred over at age fifteen and trained there until she graduated and decided to go to Beacon. She chose to leave her kingdom because she wanted to learn more about her world.
Personality:
Celeste is a calm and composed individual. She is incredibly social and loves hanging out with her friends and shopping. During her free time, she also likes to cook. Her dad taught her how and she is very good at cooking. She loves shopping and is often at the mall. If she isn't there she will probably be playing games with friends. She isn’t a great studier and although her schooling was the best money can get she is just about average in terms of grades. She really hates anyone who openly hates on faunus and will argue or ignore them and avoid them after. She dislikes the White Fang but understands them and won't help or fight them. She has a great relationship with her dad because he raised her. She views her brother as a bit of a workaholic but she respects him and tries to keep in touch. Her mom is a bit distant due to work.
Aura and Semblance:
Her aura was unlocked while at Sanctum. There she discovered her semblance. Her semblance is the ability to bend air. She can use this to blast wind at her opponent or to help her get into the air and keep herself airborne with her wings by gliding and pushing more air into them if she begins to drift too low. She mostly just uses it to help herself fly because she isn’t very skilled using it as a weapon. She will also use her semblance when not in combat to blow her hair around some and ruffle her feathers. She can use it to fly for about an hour before being totally exhausted. If she really tries her gusts can push an enemy back about 20 feet. She can use a strong gust of air to push and enemy or to move quickly ten times before she is exhausted.
Combat Behavior: 
Celeste tries to fight from the air as much as possible. She flies above the enemy and stabs at them with her spear. If the enemy can easily reach her while she attacks this way she will fly higher and shoot arrows down at them. She is not very good at using her semblance in an offensive manner, so she won’t use it often to attack. Although she is skilled with her weapon, her tactics are pretty easy to read and she isn’t very good at adapting. She is also not very skilled when on the ground because she has mostly trained while fighting in the air and lacks a good close quarters weapon. If the enemy gets past her spear she is vulnerable.
WEAPON

Name:
Izulu
Primary Form:
Celeste wields a golden, two handed, long spear. This weapon is six feet long. The blade of the weapon is a spear head and behind that there are two curved blades that curve down from the head down a foot. She stores it by telescoping the weapon down into a foot-long cylinder. She straps this to her leg.
Secondary Form:
When Celeste needs range her weapon transforms from a spear to a bow. The shaft of the spear bends into a large bow shape and as it bends a bowstring comes out of the shaft. The arrows are thin and attached to the shaft of the weapon. She stores twenty arrows on her spear at a time and will take more with her on longer missions. 
Tertiary Form:
A foot long golden cylinder
Dust Functions:
None
History:
She designed this weapon with help from her teachers at school. She made it this way because the huntsman who saved her life used a large spear and she wanted to emulate that.