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Teams / Re: {Complete} In search of team -- apply within
« on: August 07, 2017, 03:49:34 PM »
hey back sorry had some computer issues

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Teams / Re: {Complete} In search of team -- apply within
« on: July 23, 2017, 11:53:34 PM »
kk

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The Vale Region / Re: Bread over Bombs [OPEN]
« on: July 14, 2017, 02:56:31 AM »
"I'm okay. I didn't know anyone there but heard about it and rushed over to see what was going on. I got there after everything happened and they were looking through the rubble. I stayed and helped as long as I could," Yona replies. "I never had seen anything like that. It was... horrid." Visibly a little shaken Yona takes a long drink of her coffee. 

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The Vale Region / Re: Bread over Bombs [OPEN]
« on: July 10, 2017, 11:43:05 AM »
"Thanks Rory," Yona says biting into the pastry. "That is really tasty," she mumbles with her mouth full of food. "There are a lot of people gathered around the areas that are closed off. I'd avoid going to the North side though there were a bit more aggressive protesters there. The cops and crews are everywhere, they shouldn't be hard to find."

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The Vale Region / Re: Bread over Bombs [OPEN]
« on: July 09, 2017, 10:12:57 AM »
Blankets and coffee. What better way to start a morning? Yona thanked the random person with, is that soup on his back? "Thanks. Also morning Rory sorry I needed coffee before I could function. How is work going?" As she drinks her coffee Yona begins to regain some of her normal glow and sits up looking around. Seeing Calen's suit with how he was dressed she stifles a laugh and asks, "Sorry. You just really don't look like a soup kitchen person with that suit."

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The Vale Region / Re: Bread over Bombs [OPEN]
« on: July 09, 2017, 01:02:51 AM »
Walking into the bakery Yona looked half dead. "Anyone got some coffee..." She mumbled as she stumbled over to Rory. Finding a seat on a rock near the stand in the park Yona sat flopped down. "Coffeee....." Absent mindedly she starts running her hands over her tattoo on her shoulder. Her cloths are a little scorched here and there. "DOES ANYONE HERE HAVE COFFEE!"

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Teams / Re: {Complete} In search of team -- apply within
« on: July 07, 2017, 12:27:54 AM »
looks good

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Teams / Re: {Complete} In search of team -- apply within
« on: July 05, 2017, 11:21:20 AM »
yes initiation and i think cider actually makes more sense cause the leader's letter should be 1st and Cider allows us to have C first instead of Y

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Teams / Re: {Complete} In search of team -- apply within
« on: July 05, 2017, 10:05:27 AM »
i agree with umbra with ygg or cider

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Teams / Re: In search of team -- apply within
« on: July 02, 2017, 06:06:03 PM »
Well Yona needs a team. Shadow summoning caster. Protective and kind

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Approved Characters / Re: Yona (Ngeā) Bron
« on: July 01, 2017, 07:51:45 AM »
it says can only summon up to an ursa in size. i did edit the time it takes to summon

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Approved Characters / Re: Yona (Ngeā) Bron
« on: June 28, 2017, 04:46:23 PM »
made her taller due to some changes to personality
added faunus to the local joints
added some to the personality on her and bullying and being protective of other girls
edited semblance to answer all the questions on how summoning works and orders and dusts use and what gus said (praise be upon him)
added how she fights with out semblance and how good a shot she is. from what i have seen with combat schools they are like a private school where you pay to enter and because you are entering at maximum 14 or 15 years old i doubt the students are pre trained heavily for combat and go to these schools to learn how to fight to get into the big schools. with yona's good grades id guess she'd be able to get into combat school.
added some stuff on her umbrella and yes 30 shots of ice dust.

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Approved Characters / Re: Yona (Ngeā) Bron
« on: June 26, 2017, 06:14:41 PM »
History was just added why her family is upper class
History also says when she unlocked her semblance
Appearance and weapon got edited to answer your questions
About the weapon
Fleshed out personality and gave more specifics on aura

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Approved Characters / Re: Yona (Ngeā) Bron
« on: June 20, 2017, 02:32:45 PM »
sorry that took so long i think i have fixed most of it. She is supposed to be short. May change her height a few inches before finalizing her but that is the idea. Added a decent amount to personality. History got a few small edits on how her family became high class and when she got her semblance. Aura fixed up. Same with combat and weapon.

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Approved Characters / Yona (Ngeā) Bron
« on: June 12, 2017, 06:21:05 AM »
CHARACTER
 
Name:
Yona Ngeā
 
Nickname:
Yona Bron, she goes by this after her family disowned her
 
Age:
17
 
Species and Gender:
Female Panda Faunus
 
Symbol: 
A shadowy panda curled up asleep
 
Occupation:
1st Year at Beacon
 
Appearance:
At only 5’2” and 113lbs Yona is small. She also is a bit skinny for her size and comes across as a rather small weak girl. Her eyes are a deep hazel and her hair is raven black but with small white streaks. She wears it in a loose braid over her right shoulder or down. On her left shoulder is a scarlet macaw tattoo colored like a sunrise and under it is the name of her older sister Amor. On her hear are 2 small panda ears. Often found wearing a pair of loose black pants and either a tank top or crop top so you can see her tattoo. Her cloths are infused with dust to make her almost glow a little like a small sunrise. It isn’t very obvious but does help her stand out some more. She wears a pair of black combat boot and has a bunch of different bracelets on her right arm. Yona often wears a pair of red sunstone (feldspar) earrings. On her belt she carries 5 clips of ammo and when going on combat missions she brings another 5 on an extra belt in a backpack along with food and some basic first aid gear.
 
History:
Yona grew up in Atlas with her older and younger sisters and her parents. They were upper class military because of the weapons her parents designed for the military. Her grandfather had invented a new way to use dust in weapons and ever since her family has been working for Atlas. Her parents were very strict but even with these strict rules the three sisters found a way to live rather free. They all loved music and would sneak out of the house and into the city to go to concerts and play in local faunus joints. The three girls were always together doing things. Their parents were often too busy to keep an eye on them so they grew up relying on each other. It was a mostly normal childhood for the three. Yona was focused on her academics mostly during this time and always strived for the best grades to get her parents approval. While her older sister was an aspiring musician and the younger was learning the best way to appear in high society.
However even as they grew up and began needing to chose which way they would go in a few years they stayed close. One night when Yona was 12 and her sisters were 11 and 19 they were in the city and Amor, the eldest sister, was playing at a local restaurant. Afterwards on their way home a man attempted to rob them at gunpoint. Amor knew she had to protect her siblings and tackled the man getting shot in the process. Seeing this Yona tackled the man before he could try anything else and with the weakened Amor’s help managed to wrestle the gun away. By the time the police got there Amor had passed out and was in grave condition. They quickly rushed to a hospital and Amor went into emergency care. Three long hours later they were told that despite the hospital’s best efforts Amor was in a coma and it was unknown how long this would last. She was lucky to even be alive they said. Shocked the two remaining sisters sat in the family waiting room unsure what to do.
After two more hours passed their parents showed up having just gotten off of work and having found out what happened. The first thing that happened was that instead of making sure the kids were ok or what exactly was going on their father slapped Yona and her younger sister while yelling at them how dumb they were to have broken a rule and gone into the city and that this would make the entire family look bad. Later that night when they all returned home Yona wandered the house unable to sleep. All around her were memories of her sister and that combined with how much Yona hated her parents for how they treated her and her siblings and how her father had reacted to her sister’s coma Yona decided she would leave. The question was what could she do. She wanted to go out and help people and use her smarts for something other than the military and adding to the cycle of white collar Atlas people. Then she remembered that the military academy allowed one to go abroad for Huntsman schooling. This way she could leave Atlas and help others. The next day Yona waited for her parents at the door until as soon as they came home from work she told them that she needed space and was going to apply for combat school. Her parents were of course against this idea. After hours of arguing Yona finally got her father to tell her that she could do whatever she wanted but that she would need to leave their family name behind and that she was effectively disowned. He would provide her with enough money to make it through her schooling but then she was on her own. He was done with her.
Crying Yona gathered her things and left saying goodbye to her younger sister promising to do her best to help others and that she would come back. Going to a friends house from school for the rest of the summer, the next school year Yona applied to join the combat school and was allowed in. Once there Yona learned how to fight and help others.It was here she unlocked her semblance. Although anything physical or athletic she failed her smarts and strong use of her semblance helped her through the years. Once those four years of hard work were over Yona applied to Beacon knowing that Vale was a very liberal kingdom with lots of music and skilled huntsmen. Making it into Beacon she now wishes to improve her music and become the best huntress she can. Cut off from her family Yona is still trying to adapt to the real world but is ready for anything that comes her way.
 
Personality:
 Yona is a kinda and caring girl. She loves trying to help others. She does however end up on the foolish overly emotional end of things a lot of the time. She can’t really keep herself from acting on impulse but is a good strategist in combat because when she is fighting she focuses much more and is able to mostly control her emotions then. She loves to laugh and will make a joke about anything if she feels like it, even at the not so good times for said joke. She can be a bit of a drama queen to get a laugh. Yona loves music and hanging out with friends but also works hard on school. She isn’t a party girl and focuses on school first and friend time 2nd but thankfully she has enough time for both. Her life philosophy is laugh learn and love and she tries to live up to these as best as she can. She doesn't talk to her parents at all really. She only talks to her mom on her sister's birthdays and never with her dad. She does talk almost daily with her younger sister. Yona tends to relax around her friends and will bore anyone to death with information about her favorite bands Anyone that is that isn't a cute boy. She has issues talking to them. She likes to meet new people and tries to really get to know people. Yona is very timid when anti-faunus things come up she tries to get away as fast as she can. She is really bad at standing up against bullying because it was so common in Atlas due to how anti-faunus everyone there is. She does get very protective of her friends or most any girl she sees because she is used to defending her sisters.

 
Aura and Semblance:
Aura white

Shadow puppeteer

Can control and animate shadows into creatures to fight for her. The shadows must be of a living creature (Human, Grimm, animal, ect..) and become 3d warriors for her to control. She can only take a human or around human sized creatures right now so max is a small Ursa. She steals their shadow and while she controls the shadows the owner no longer has a shadow. She must either give them voice  commands or mentally control them but while mentally controlling one she cannot move. She can give commands vocally like attack this person or defend me but not too specific. She can only mentally control one at a time and when mentally controlling she can control all of the shadow. Shadows once given an order will follow it so she can give an order to some and then control another mentally and the voice commanded shadows will continue to follow their orders. These shadows have little to no mass they can attack and hurt but only hurt about half as badly as what they are shadows of and one hit just goes through them and makes them disperse and need to be re summoned. Summoning a shadow takes a few seconds each. These shadows do have a little mass so they can hold or push things however they are not strong. If a shadow goes more than 100ft away from her it disappears as her semblance loses control. She is a caster and often adds dust abilities to her summons by giving them elemental damage to their attacks so when they hit things it hurts more and inflicts the dust type of damage for three hits before running out of dust and becoming a normal shadow (fire or lightning) or giving them more mass thus making them both stronger and able to take more damage and take 3 or 4 hits instead of the normal one also making them hurt a bit more until they are killed (earth or ice). Her shadow is almost always summoned with her but asleep so she can call it quickly. She can summon up to 7 shadows at a time excluding her personal shadow.
 
Combat Behavior:
Yona fights by summoning shadows to fight for her and infusing them with different dusts to deal damage or to keep the shadows around. She then shoots her gun from a distance and tries to avoid combat because she is physically not the best and her combat skills are a little lacking, however her control of shadows is very good. She is weak if caught off guard without a shadow she is very weak. She keeps her shadow ready and summoned so that when she has a fight her shadow holds the enemy off long enough for Yona to bring up a few more to fight. Yona is hindered as well by needing to be able to give orders to her summons and can’t do that well if she is being attacked. She will often rely on her team to keep her covered while she mentally commands her best summons and sends simple commands to the rest. When fighting without her semblance Yona mostly blocks attacks with her umbrella and tries to stall and wait to see a chance to fire off shots out of her weapon. She is much weaker but can fight off a beowolf or two. She can fight but mostly tries to hold the enemy off until she can get enough easy shots off at the enemy or run away. She also always has her shadow ready to fight with her so she will use that to mess the enemy up by grabbing their legs or striking out and attacking when enemies are open. She is a pretty good shot with her weapon. She can't shoot the apple off someone's head from a mile away but at medium range where she is best at she is a good enough shot to hit most of her bullets.
 
WEAPON
 
Name:
Zontik
 
Primary Form:
A mid to long range caliber rifle. It is black and fires from the end of the umbrella. Not meant for close range combat this is used to help support others from a short distance away often. The bullets are able to pierce weaker grimm armor easily but a large Ursa may take multiple shots to hurt. It has a 15 shot clip.
 
Secondary Form:
The secondary form of her weapon is an umbrella. This is an all black umbrella that Yona uses as a melee weapon and when opened gives her a large almost shield like weapon to help her defend herself when her shadows are unable to. The umbrella is bullet proof. The rifle shoots from the tip of the umbrella and loads with a cartridge coming off the bottom of the handle. The trigger pops out near the handle so the handle acts like a grip to shoot. The weapon looks like a normal umbrella with a weird handle and only reveals what it is when she aims it and opens fire. The umbrella is about 48" in diameter and 2' long.
 
Dust Functions:
Has ice dust bullets that can freeze enemies, she normally carries 2 clips with her. The freeze mostly slows down enemies and forms a small amount of ice where they hit so she can with a few shots freeze someone's foot to the ground.
 
History:
Made while in combat school, Yona wanted a weapon that could allow her to assist her shadows in combat and wasn’t too big or hard to use. It was made from an umbrella because it was raining and Yona had forgotten an umbrella and since she wanted her weapon to be something that worked as everyday attire she chose an umbrella.

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Character Chart
Character’s full name: Yona Ngeā
Reason or meaning of name: Yona is night and Ngeā is shade or shadow
Character’s nickname:
Reason for nickname:
Birth date: 13th of Saaral
 
Physical appearance
Age: 17
How old does he/she appear: 16-18
Weight: 113 lbs
Height: 4’11”
Body build: skinny and small
Shape of face: narrowish
Eye color: Dark Hazel
Glasses or contacts: none
Skin tone: light
Distinguishing marks: Has a tattoo of a bird on her left shoulder, the bird is a scarlet macaw that is colored like sunset
Predominant features: none
Hair color: raven black
Type of hair: long straight
Hairstyle: a loose braid over the right shoulder or just down
Voice: quiet and smooth
Overall attractiveness: a bit above average
Physical disabilities: none
Usual fashion of dress: loose black pants and a tank top to show off her tattoo or a light jacket, often her tank is a bit short
Favorite outfit: what she wears every day, it is comfy and easy to move in plus looks nice, loves crop tops
Jewelry or accessories: a pair of red sunstone (feldspar) earrings that she loves to wear along with a bunch of bracelets on her right arm
 
Personality
Good personality traits: Kind, caring, loving, open, helpful, compassionate, self confidant
Bad personality traits: foolish, impulsive, overly emotional, stubborn
Mood character is most often in: happy fun
Sense of humor: Laugh at it
Character’s greatest joy in life: seeing new things, having fun, laughing with friends, playing music
Character’s greatest fear: dropping out of school
Why? It means she failed and she’ll need to go home
What single event would most throw this character’s life into complete turmoil? Dropping out of school
Character is most at ease when: hanging and listening to music or playing her own music
Most ill at ease when: talking to guys because she hasn’t done that much
Enraged when: someone makes fun of her or her friends
Depressed or sad when: gets a B or worse on a test, when something is too hard for her
Priorities: having fun and laughing and school
Life philosophy: laugh learn love
If granted one wish, it would be: not sure, she doesnt think about that much. She likes her life right now
Why?
Character’s soft spot: cute things, if is cute she wants it
Is this soft spot obvious to others? Yes very
Greatest strength: her confidence
Greatest vulnerability or weakness: confidence and trusting plus emotions
Biggest regret: what happened with her family
Minor regret: not being there more for her younger sis
Biggest accomplishment: getting into Beacon with a high score
Minor accomplishment: playing music in a few joints around her hometown when she snuck out
Past failures he/she would be embarrassed to have people know about: her family situation
Why? It is a mess and she hates it
Character’s darkest secret: she may have been able to save her older sister
Does anyone else know? no
 
Goals
Drives and motivations:
Immediate goals:
Long term goals:
How the character plans to accomplish these goals:
How other characters will be affected:
 
Past
Hometown: Atlas
Type of childhood: strict
Pets: none
First memory: listening to her older sister play the guitar and sing
Most important childhood memory: laying in the grass with her sisters playing music and laughing
Why: she loved her sisters more than anything and music connected them
Childhood hero: great musicians and her older sister
Dream job: musician huntsman
Education: private schools and combat school to Beacon
Religion: none
Finances: Great
 
Present
Current location: Beacon
Currently living with: her team
Pets: none
Religion: none
Occupation: student musician
Finances: ok, parents give her enough but not too much extra
 
Family
Mother: Niyantran
Relationship with her: stretched, they dont talk much after the incident
Father: Borracho
Relationship with him: they dont talk at all
Siblings: Amor (older sister) and Estrela (younger sister)
Relationship with them: Tries to keep in touch with Estrela but it is hard, Amor is in a coma. They were super close once upon a time and love each other dearly
Spouse: none
Relationship with him/her: n/a
Children: none
Relationship with them: n/a
Other important family members: none
 
Favorites
Color: sunset
Least favorite color: brighter to neon green, most neon actually
Music: popular style music
Food: OMG GIVE ME CHOCOLATE, or you know anything sweet
Literature: love stories she is a sucker for those or mystery
Form of entertainment: music playing and listening, reading, hanging with friends
Expressions:
Mode of transportation: walk or public transit
Most prized possession: her guitar from her older sister
 
Habits
Hobbies: playing music, reading
Plays a musical instrument? Yes guitar
Plays a sport? nope
How he/she would spend a rainy day: guitar and read
Spending habits: doesnt have too much but loves to buy food or cute things
Smokes: no
Drinks: no
Other drugs: no
What does he/she do too much of? Books way too many
What does he/she do too little of? She has enough of everything to get by, money is there but not much extra
Extremely skilled at: well she is a pretty good guitarist and controls her semblance really well
Extremely unskilled at: anything physical she is a wimp
Nervous tics: plays with her bracklets
Usual body posture: relaxed
Mannerisms:
Peculiarities:
 
Traits
Optimist or pessimist? Optimist mostly
Introvert or extrovert? extrovert
Daredevil or cautious? Daredevil often
Logical or emotional? Emotional way too much
Disorderly and messy or methodical and neat? More disorderly but in the middle
Prefers working or relaxing? Relaxing or doing school work, anything manual hell no
Confident or unsure of himself/herself? Pretty sure
Animal lover? Cute ones yes otherwise eh
 
Self-perception
How he/she feels about himself/herself: she is rather self confident and likes who she is
One word the character would use to describe self: kind
What does the character consider his/her best personality trait? How caring and smart she is
What does the character consider his/her worst personality trait? Her emotions control her
What does the character consider his/her best physical characteristic? She loves her tattoo does that count? If not it would be her hair
What does the character consider his/her worst physical characteristic? She doesnt like her eyes or her height
How does the character think others perceive him/her: small fragile but nice girl
What would the character most like to change about himself/herself: grow 2 more inches and talk to guys better and stop stuttering around them
 
Relationships with others
Opinion of other people in general: they are decent but some are jerks
Does the character hide his/her true opinions and emotions from others? No she cant
Person character most hates: her father
Best friend(s): team
Love interest(s): none yet
Person character goes to for advice: was her older sister now she doesnt really have anyone
Person character feels responsible for or takes care of: younger sib
Person character feels shy or awkward around: cute guys
Person character openly admires: most pop music groups
Person character secretly admires: those leading simple lives with their families
Most important person in character’s life before story starts: sisters
After story starts: we will see



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