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WiP Characters / Zwartz Graves [extreme WIP]
« on: December 09, 2016, 06:16:37 AM »
CHARACTER

Name: Zwartz Graves

Age: 72

Species and Gender: Human, male

Symbol:  A coffin?

Occupation: Hunter, a ways off of retirement

Appearance:

History: Sample Text

Personality: Sample Text

Aura and Semblance: His Aura is of a light turquoise color and is unbelievably powerful considering his age and stature.

His semblance is to create a ghost like clone of anyone he has met and is now dead within 30 ft of his person. These apparitions are incorporeal and have the inability to deal damage or touch anything but do sound and look exactly like the person they are based on. he can summon as many of these as he wants but they each cost a small amount of his stamina and summoning multiple increases this cost greatly for each extra. The most he has ever been able to summon was 50 at one time but he fainted 1 minute into the summoning. They last up to 5 minutes then dissipate.

Combat Behavior:  Because of his age Zwartz is not very strong or fast and prefer to either stay hidden and surprise or distract and then trap them inside his weapon, the fight is usually over at that point as he can just stab them repeatedly in the slits in the sides and front until they have no aura left. Hi s weapons can also be used to deal with Grimm by removing biting and removing limbs with the weapons.

WEAPON

Name: Entomb 1, 2, 3 and, 4 and

Primary Form: Sample Text

History: Sample Text



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Teams / Re: 1st Year Beacon Team [4/4]
« on: December 09, 2016, 05:31:45 AM »
I vote for meteor. Sorry but it does just sound cooler.

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Teams / Re: 1st Year Beacon Team [4/4]
« on: December 07, 2016, 05:53:34 PM »
I thought MOTR- Mother when I first joined the team and looked at the letters but the other two suggestions do sound a lot better.

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The Vale Region / Re: Violet Streaks Across the Water [OPEN][Limited 2/4]
« on: November 21, 2016, 02:12:53 AM »
(this is my first open thread so if I'm doing something wrong please let me know)

Fishing was such a great pass time, it was the only thing that Matih could do from his childhood that didn't make him remember the bad times. His apartment that he had bought was near to the docks so he was quickly able to make friends with the local fishermen even without the ability to speak. He enjoyed going out on there boats in the morning but was also anticipating the time where he wouldn't be able to do it anymore, because he'd be an official student at Beacon Academy.


As he was about to pull in something he saw something weird on the water, it was a girl swimming, sliding, running? across the water, whatever she was doing it was beautiful. He quickly wrote upon his white board and shoved it in the man who he was currently fishing with's face "Who is that girl?" "well, I'm not really sure. She's been doin' this ever since I was 'ere. Never really talked to 'er though. You can if you want but if you wanted to ask 'er out it seems someones already beet'n ya to it." He jokingly replied. Matih without thinking jumps in the water and swims as fast as possible to the shore to talk to this lady and now other guy who has joined her.

He springs out of the water like a majestic dolphin and runs over to where the two are holding a sign that says HELLO! in big bright letters, completely interrupting what those two were talking about.

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The Vale Region / Roinnt Punt Faoi Cabáiste [Team KABS initiation]
« on: November 21, 2016, 01:34:48 AM »
The crowd around the starting positions quiets as a small spher-like robot hovers just to the edge of the cliff, a small opening comes from the centre and a screen pops out showing a huntsman, teacher you guess by the fact that there is a crowd of students throwing paper planes and pencils at each other directly behind him, he seems to pay no attention as a spit ball hits him in the back of the head. He gives off a loud sigh and begins to explain whats happening. "Everyone take your positions on the starting platforms and prepare for initiation," a small light starts to glow around the metal plates at the edge of the cliff. Once everybody is standing on one each he begins to speak again, "now, everyone you should all know by now what happens for initiation from either older siblings or horror stories so I wont ramble. There are 8 relics you and a friend which you will have made along the way will pick up one of these relics and return here. You will make this friend very simply; the first person you see, hear or otherwise encounter will be it. No exceptions. Is everyone ready? Too bad, 3. 2. 1. bye bye." the metal plates all fire in unison launch everyone into the air at the same time."well, that's not supposed to happen... Oh well." The robot then hovers its way towards Beacon

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Teams / Re: 1st Year Beacon Team [3/4]
« on: November 05, 2016, 12:06:42 AM »
Can I have a spot in this team? (first character dont be mad) Matih Mera

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Approved Characters / Re: Matih Mera
« on: October 23, 2016, 04:00:17 AM »
Donezo

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Approved Characters / Re: Matih Mera
« on: October 18, 2016, 03:19:23 AM »
i decided to change his semblance completely as I have fallen out of love with it over time and instead changed it to be much more exclusive to what I was going to use his old one for anyway. I tried to make it more balanced by taking more inspiration from My Hero Academia, which if you cant tell is the main inspiration for him.

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Approved Characters / Re: Matih Mera
« on: October 10, 2016, 01:51:18 PM »
I have tried to fix up the problems you had with the combat behavior by removing the fact that his clothing is ripped and removing the reference to ballerinas, but I am still confused by what you meant when you talked about dodging. No where did I write that he had the ability to dodge all things, I slimply described the way he dodges. I tried to fix this by rewording the phrase and generally adding to his combat behavior.

As for his Semblance. it is said that he has a mixture of his parents abilities, not both. It then states what his ability is. the ability to gain an increase to strength (3x normal) and speed for about 30 seconds, every day. I didn't know a better way to reword it so I left it as is, thinking ou just skimmed it or something.

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Approved Characters / Re: Matih Mera
« on: October 08, 2016, 05:19:26 AM »
Added numbers to the things that needed numbers.

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Approved Characters / Re: Matih Mera
« on: October 07, 2016, 01:11:46 AM »
Fixed up his appearance section to deal with the problems you had.I Wrote most of it while tired and just thought of things that would make him stand out. Appreciate the review. :)

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Approved Characters / Matih Mera
« on: October 05, 2016, 08:55:44 AM »
CHARACTER

Name: Matih Mera

Age: 17

Species and Gender: Human, Male

Symbol: A sword hilt with a shield instead of blade

Occupation: 1st year student at beacon

Appearance: A small guy with a very delicate frame. his face is soft with large amounts of freckles under his eyes but surprisingly tanned skin and an orange scarf around his neck. He has long straight red hair falling just bellow his shoulders. His clothes are rather large and unfitting  wearing an orange t shirt and white jeans with a white dress shirt over top and then a large white robe over the top of that.

History: From a small fishing village off the west coast of Vale. Matih was always very close to his family. His parents were hunters and there parents before them. so he new from about the age of three what he was going to do with his life and was even the first to discover his semblance, as disappointing as it was. One day when he was 7 years old his parents went away for a mission and he was living with his Aunt a knock was heard at the front door, when he opened it he found his parents squad mate standing at the door holding his parents weapons with tears rolling down his eyes. After this moment it almost scared him away from the entire thing. For years he seemed to wander around with no idea what to do until one day an alarm was set off, a Grimm was attacking his town and before he even knew what was happening it was standing right in front of him mauling someone he barely knew but something re-awoke inside of him right at that moment and he charged right at it and punched it square in the jaw. The Grimm replied in kind knocking him unconscious and Shredding his neck. He woke up in a hospital bed with the inability to speak but something else. He was going to be a huntsman again. Armed with his parents weapons and a handheld white board he felt like he could do anything, so he made into beacon.

Personality: With everything Matih has gone through he has learned to see the positive in every situation. Living his entire life so far in a close knit community he has trouble speaking to new people and often seems way too forward ( which is surprisingly hard to do when you speak with a white board.) Being an honest person, he finds it extremely hard to tell if someone is lying or being sarcastic. With no ability to show sarcasm or obvious ways to show emotion in his voice he is known to either be very nice or very blunt but will always try to do right by people.

Aura and Semblance: Matih's aura is a very pale orange and is otherwise very average.His semblance was surprisingly disappointing when discovered but he has figured out how to take full advantage of it. He has the ability to drastically increase the strength of a single hit (almost 5x) but doing this consumes almost his all his stamina as well as his strength for a short period of time (10 minutes) leaving him unconscious.


Combat Behavior: With his light nature and baggy clothing it looks likes he almost floats around the battle field. With the size of his weapons he is often over balanced and rather slow. With rather elegant movements it almost seems taunting when he dodges enemies attacks. He often plays a more defensive role in combat having the ability to easily create and destroy cover and platforms. While alone he will always wait for his opponent to come to him, no matter how long it takes. Having not had many battles against things other then Grimm he often does not expect ranged weapons and is easily caught off guard when they are used. His semblance allows him to turn the tide of a battle with only one swing but afterwards he has no more ability to fight.

WEAPON

Name: Cinta and Perang

Primary Form: They are weapons that normally take the from of a normal two-handed sword and shield. The shield(Cinta) is a normal slightly curved White rectangle with a sword logo imprinted on the front. the Sword(Perang) is a long sword with an orange blade and a small shield engraved onto the hilt.

Secondary Form: they both have the ability to transform into there exact opposites. The sword becomes a shield by expanding outwards and having the hilt fold inwards to create a handle and brace.and the shield becomes a sword by elongating and folding over itself to make the handle and brace create the hilt while the rest becomes the blade.

Dust Functions: Cinta, while in shield form has the ability to create a larger Rock barrier  in front of it that only lasts for a short time before crumbling using earth dust.and Perang while in Sword form has the ability to super heat the blade to cut through rock with ease using fire dust for about 2 minutes. He can do each of these 4 times per battle.

History: These weapons were those of his parents and were passed down to him after there deaths. They were crafted together by his parents who had known each other since primary school and thought it would be cool if they had the same weapon.

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WiP Characters / Matih Mera (moved to creation)
« on: October 05, 2016, 08:52:29 AM »
CHARACTER

Name: Matih Mera

Age: 17

Species and Gender: Human, Male

Symbol: A sword hilt with a shield instead of blade

Occupation: 1st year student at beacon

Appearance: A small guy with a very delicate frame. his face is soft with large amounts of freckles under his eyes but surprisingly tanned skin and a large metal plate across his neck to hide the scars. With his hair so long it hits the floor he often wears more like a scarf. His clothes look rather large an oversized wearing a large white robe and skirt like thing over a simple dress shirt and White jeans. He often keeps the hood up on his robe because he thinks it makes him look taller. It doesn't. He wears an orange belt and has an orange t shirt on too.

History: From a small fishing village off the west coast of Vale. Matih was always very close to his family. His parents were hunters and there parents before them. so he new from about the age of three what he was going to do with his life and was even the first to discover his semblance, as disappointing as it was. One day when he was 7 years old his parents went away for a mission and he was living with his Aunt a knock was heard at the front door, when he opened it he found his parents squad mate standing at the door holding his parents weapons with tears rolling down his eyes. After this moment it almost scared him away from the entire thing. For years he seemed to wander around with no idea what to do until one day an alarm was set off, a grimm was attacking his town and before he even knew what was happening it was standing right in front of him mauling someone he barely knew but something re-awoke inside of him right at that moment and he charged right at it and punched it square in the jaw. The grimm replied in kind knocking him unconscious and Shredding his neck. He woke up in a hospital bed with the inability to speak but something else. He was going to be a huntsman again. Armed with his parents weapons and a handheld white board he felt like he could do anything, so he made into beacon.

Personality: With everything Matih has gone through he has learned to see the positive in every situation. Living his entire life so far in a close knit community he has trouble speaking to new people and often seems way too forward ( which is surprisingly hard to do when you speak with a white board.) Being an honest person, he finds it extremely hard to tell if someone is lying or being sarcastic. With no ability to show sarcasm or obvious ways to show emotion in his voice he is known to either be very nice or very blunt but will always try to do right by people.

Aura and Semblance: Matih's aura is a very pale orange and is otherwise very average.
His semblance is a mixture of his parents. His dad's increase to speed and strength for an hour and his mothers ability to create an explosion of energy around her for about 30 seconds. creating the ability to gain an increase to strength and speed for about 30 seconds.

Combat Behavior: With his light nature and baggy clothing it looks likes he almost floats around the battle field. With the size of his weapons he is often over balanced and while not using his semblance is rather slow. dodging with the style and grace of a ballerina it almost seems taunting every time he dodges something. while he may be small his clothes are not being usually mangled in fights. leaving only his jeans and shirt remaining. Which does take its toll on his bank account.

WEAPON

Name: Cinta and Perang

Primary Form: They are weapons that normally take the from of a normal two-handed sword and shield. The shield(Cinta) is a normal slightly curved White rectangle with a sword logo imprinted on the front. the Sword(Perang) is a long sword with an orange blade and a small shield engraved onto the hilt.

Secondary Form: they both have the ability to transform into there exact opposites. The sword becomes a shield by expanding outwards and having the hilt fold inwards to create a handle and brace.and the shield becomes a sword by elongating and folding over itself to make the handle and brace create the hilt while the rest becomes the blade.

Dust Functions: Cinta, while in shield form has the ability to create a larger Rock barrier  in front of it that only lasts for a short time using earth dust.and Perang while in Sword form has the ability to super heat the blade to cut through rock with ease using fire dust.

History: These weapons were those of his parents and were passed down to him after there deaths. They were crafted together by his parents who had known each other since primary school and thought it would be cool if they had the same weapon.

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