Well, this character has been waiting in approval limbo for a good while, so it might be pointless to comment - but your last time active on the board was about a week and a half ago. Aethon, if you're still around, shoot me a message and I'll do what I can to get this guy approved.

Now for the actual review bits:

Cyrus has a really strong profile, especially for a first character! There's just a couple notes to make, and most of them involve his history.

Appearance: We operate by a certain degree of real-world logic here. If you're gonna have a character that's 7 feet tall (and still growing, if he's only eighteen), that means he's gonna be suffering from some form of gigantism. Our official cutoff height for that is at 6'11" if I remember correctly - so if you knock him down an inch or two, that shouldn't be an issue. Or it can be if you want! Character flavoring is always neat.

History: This part's a quick bullet-point list of fixes to flesh out a few gaps I spotted in his history.

- If Cyrus ran away from home around age fourteen, how come his family didn't make any effort to go after him? They're all highly-skilled huntsmen who're ages older. They likely have the tracking capabilities and the resources to find him.

- How'd Cyrus fair in the streets as a fourteen year-old? Was he taken in by someone, what type of place would hire a fourteen year-old? Was it under the table? Just a sentence or to can help with that.

- How'd he convince the Irregulars to take on a fifteen year-old kid? If it's honestly just a lack of caring on the part of the band members, that's a reasonable explanation and unfortunately on-par for the music industry.

Combat: You probably read our three weakness rule, and you've hit on two out of three - the thing about his wings is that they'd be covered by aura. If you're looking for a third, he probably isn't the fastest fighter out there - the sheer power and brawn he brings would make it a struggle.

Overall, Cyrus has a lot of potential. If you're looking for someone to rp with, feel free to hit me up! I've got a angsty birdie of my own and I think their personalities could clash in a really interesting way. We've also got a discord where most of us hang out, so feel free to hop in and say hi sometime. The link is kicking around... somewhere...

Hey y'all - it's been a hot second since I've posted on site, but I'm starting to get back into the swing of things and I want to try my hand at running a plot thread again. Is there anything that y'all would be interested in playing in particular? Let me know!

Sorry for the wait! You've got a cool character here, and I spot no immediate issues. +1 from me.

In agreement with Reaper here- more detail in the combat session. We still have a rule about 2-3 weaknesses, and she currently only has one. Maybe something about being a short-range fighter, and having difficulty against long-range enemies?

Freefall is deliciously brutal. The wind's so strong that it press her wings flat to her back, her outermost feathers whipping about uselessly. When she needs to slow down it'll be a struggle to get them outstretched in time, but that really doesn't matter when she's still this high up. Her slightly outstretched arms guide her instead, dodging through wispy clouds and sending herself into spirals that bring about a bevy of giggles that disappear into the sheer white noise of the rushing sky. With the sky below and the ground above her, it fills up every nook and cranny of possible feeling and simply lets her enjoy a singular, beautiful moment and watch the uninterrupted horizon whip by-

...

The.

The interrupted horizon, actually. Rapidly filling in with an unfamiliar humanoid figure.

Dark hair. A farmer's outfit. Definitely bigger than her (even if everyone was). No apparent means of how the fuck he got here.

Grey eyes blink at him in confusion as he literally falls in alongside her. There's pure concern sprawled out across his unprotected features, and- as a quick once-over of his form confirms- absolutely nothing else. She tilts her head "up" towards her feet. There's no drop shipo roaring off into the distance. However he got here, he did it with nothing but the clothes on his back.

The stranger mouths something to her that she can't make out over the roaring wind, even with her sensitive hearing. It's worrisome that he's concerned about her- the one who very evidently has wings- when he doesn't seem to have anything on him that insures he'd survive freefall.

Prism flashes him one moment in return to the thumbs up, before stretching her arms out in front of her. Taking a deep breath of freezing air, the woman closes her eyes- before a sudden, unbidden rushing sound fills the space between them for half a second, and air goes silent.

There's no longer freezing air beating against the both of them. Prism's eyes blink open again. There's a white, wispy aura flying off of her hands and shoulders, trailing slowly behind her like a comet. The air's moving with them now.

"Nice, that worked! Uh, hi there. Where the genuine fuck did you come from?"

Edits are all in order, you get a +1 from me.

"Hell yeah, you'll get this down!" She chirps, grinning up at him. "The advantage of being a sniper is that precision is a necessary specialty, so you'll have that down to a cutting edge in no time. Smashing through shit is effective, but when you can do both- well, why not? That type of broadbank attack could be good for even just knocking enemies off-kilter if you like, put a bit less aura into it too. Regardless- if I could teach Coco, I can teach you!"

She shifts again, hopping a few feet back and holding her glaive out to demonstrate again. "Getting it down to a cutting edge is... well, in my mind, is the manifestation of intent. You want to be sharp, fast, and brutal- so with your weapon as part of your body and an extension of your will, that gets... concentrated down even more. Does that make sense?" She rocks a bit on her heels, rubbing the back of her head. "This is just how I figured it out, mentally and then physically, so it may not apply, or if you've got a different take, go ahead."