Joshua reads the message, and hides his smile. in his head, he thinks about what a good opportunity this is too start his training* i finally get to take part in a mission, a pirate capturing mission nonetheless * Joshua checks that he has his weapon attached to his deployment mechanism, picks up his helmet and walks at a quick pace to the bulkhead, whilst thinking about the note reviewing it to himself in his head *four huntsmen in training AND a teacher? seems like overkill, but it is not my place to criticise the decisions of people more experienced and trained than me, so i am guessing these "immortal Lancers" must somewhat live up to their name* By the time he gets to the ramp that leads to the Bulkhead, he sees three people standing there. He guesses that the tall one standing sensibly next to the bulkhead is the teacher. Once he reaches the bulkhead, he greets everyone with handshakes and a simple "hello". He then stands there calmly, waiting for the last teammate to arrive.

i vote for the second grey and ill post it to the teams board once rook gets his second approval.

I like the sound of the cinereous too. I guess that means Rook is on the team as our leader if he wants to be. I am very glad to see that there were 8 replies to be on this team. Though,  and I hope the people who applied and didn't get in the team,  will find another very soon.

Beacon, First Year

Name: Joshua Schwarz [Link]; http://rwby-rpg.rwbyfanon.com/index.php?topic=1410.0

Human, Male

Background: He came from Atlas and was meant to go to Atlas academy, like the rest of his family did, however, some personal events lead to him joining Beacon instead and moving to Vale.

Personality: He is a quiet, intelligent man who does not insult faunus or people who are different than him because he feels everyone is equal and dislikes people who don't think the same way.

Combat: In combat, he will use his scoped pistol weapon form at medium-short range, his Rifle variation at a longer range and his sword variation at melee combat. He will not hold back in combat and only fights to win or lose.

In this team, i do not care if i am the leader of the team or not, and if anyone else wants to be leader, then they can be.

I have finished making the changes i said i had made before, and remembered to save this time.

i have added the brief explanation and i have rewrote my semblance to try and complete the two points you have made on that

i've removed Adam from the history and i have changed faunas to faunus, it changed it to faunas in the spell checker

thanks for telling me what more i need to include. i have edited the profile, and await review