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Noctis Quartz
« on: September 11, 2016, 11:59:49 PM »
CHARACTER

Name: Noctis Quartz

Age:  18, Frost 27.

Species and Gender:  Human Male

Symbol: Vicus Nocte
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Occupation: First year Huntsmen student, Beacon Academy

Appearance:

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Noctis is 5í11 ft with crystal blue colored eyes. He has peachy pale skin along with a birthmark located on his right collarbone. He has starlight white hair with a thin patch of black hair in his bangs. His body is an average build. He wears a light grey shirt with a black and white jacket matched with black jeans.
 To the right of his hip is the case for his blade Divine. He wears white high top lace shoes and a crystal black quartz necklace.

His formal wear consists of a black dress shirt, a white tie and vest.

Noctisí battle wear is the same as his everyday, around his left thigh and right he carries handguns. To his back, right he has an ammo bag. 

School Uniform is the standard Beacon issued. Minus the blazer and loose tie.

Voice claim:  Nero from Devil May Cry, Voiced by Johnny Yong Bosch

History:
There were defiantly things Noctis did not want to do. He was sure that he was not going to become something as mundane as a doctor like his mother did and older brother, not that there was anything wrong with that it was just not for him. It wasnít as exciting as becoming a hunter; being a hunter meant saving lives, traveling and most importantly protecting those who cannot protect themselves. He was well aware that at times, he would need to make hard choices but that is what separated him from his family, he had hard time making choices like that. Small details like that made his mother want him to reconsider his profession.

Months after he entered Sanctum his mother constantly would find a reason to tell him why being a hunter was not for him. When he graduated, she tried everything to stop him from leaving Mistral however; Noctis told her that this is his dream, not hers. It was shame in her eyes because Noctis had a natural talent in medicine but she was no one to clip his wings.

Growing up was a bit difficult due to the lack of a father figure. Noctis' father passed away just a few months after his birth. His original name was Cerulean- because of his eye color, but then changed to Noctis to honor his father. He and his brother are four years apart making it difficult for Scepter to get use to having a younger sibling. Scepter had felt that it was Noctis fault that their father died making it difficult to get along with.

When he was 9 his mother adopted a Faunus child that was admitted into her hospital. She looked to be the same age as Noctis. Turns out, this girl was serving under a wealthy aristocratic family who tossed her out when they decided they didn't want her anymore.

A month into the adoption process the family who tossed her out tried to claim her as 'property' but knowing how to swindle them, Rose told them that she would take her off her hands. Clearly there was a reason they tossed her out in the first place, she was a bit of a trouble maker. In reality that didn't bother Rose one bit. Her two boys caused more catastrophe than this girl could. Agreeing to the terms, the family released the child to Rose.

When he turned eleven he and his family moved from Atlas to Mistral for the safety of his new sister. There, Noctis made his memories and eventually attended Sanctum with his sister. Noctis picked up drawing along with gaining some medical knowledge from his mother's workplace. He didn't have many friends because he was too shy to talk to anyone. That changed drastically when he started high school. Suddenly he was more open to talk and throw around his ideas regardless if not one agreed with him.

After he turned 15 the fight and struggling relationship with Scepter seemed to dwindle slightly. Since the new addition to the family some of the pointless bicker haltered. Noctis wasn't one to envy what others had, however he became a bit more snappy at his sister for being able to talk to Scepter and actually spend time with him. Other times he would just feel left out and usually just joins his mother at her work. There. he learned how to properly control his semblance.

When it came time for Noctis and his sister to leave to Vale to attend Beacon, Scepter was already a finishing his doctorate degree to work alongside his mother at the hospital. Scepter made sure the two had nothing to worry about, letting them leave with a worry free mindset.

Personality: Noctis is described to be a well-tempered male who rarely lashed out his emotions or lets his bad moods affect others around him. He is a social butterfly who loved to make new friends and learn new things. Noctis is aware that he is sometimes too calm about situations that would require him to make drastic choices. He still manages to make the best choice but in the order he does them is a bit out of his style.

When he is pushed at his limit- assuming someone really offended him, which is rare, he will speak as if he detached with his warm, fun loving self. After the dark episode, he will not apologize for his words.

In times where he is shy or nervous, Noctis will make an utter complete fool of himself. He will trip and drop things along with miss pronouncing words.

He likes to sleep, eat, draw in his free time and his favorite color is purple.

He dislikes people being rude to him, getting in his business and people who make fun of his hair.   

Aura and Semblance:

Aura is purple with light white and black accents.

His semblance is healing. He can create translucent barriers to heal a personís whole body or just small sections. It can heal major injuries, but not severed or open fractured limbs. He can only heal one person at a time.

Broken bones take 10 to 20 minutes takes 5% aura. Can only be used 20  times a day. Max 22

Deep gashes take 5 to 10 minutes 2% aura. Can be used 50 times a day. Max55

Bruises take 2 minutes 2% aura. Can be used 50 times a day. Max 60

Whole body 30 minutes 50% aura. Can only be used twice a day. Max 3

Combat Behavior: In combat he is very straightforward and focused. He likes to sometimes taunt his opponents out of his own personal enjoyment.

-Fast reactions
-Skilled Swordsmanship
-Expert marksmen


-Gets too confident
-Gets Distracted
-Is a bit too calm



WEAPON

Name: Divine

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Primary Form: A four foot stainless steel blade. The handle measures 12 inches wrapped with white Kevlar. Where the gear shift is located there is a white plate with the name Divine written in cursive along with Noctisí symbol. 

Dust Functions: Tiny channels breaking from the main channel down the blade allows dust to engulf the blade in whatever chosen dust element. The dust releases into the chamber with a lever and gear shift attached to the top left of the blade. First, the lever needs to be pushed then the handle needs to be twisted to force the dust down the blade. Grounded up dust is the only type the blade will take. It can be inserted by a channel in the handle. One type of dust can be used at a time or the gear system will jam.

Ice Dust will Freeze upon contact

Fire Dust explodes and sets things on fire upon contact

Lightning with Stun upon contact

History: The blade was made by a teacher in Sanctum who gave it to Noctis because he thought it suited him better. The symbol on the blade is something Noctis carved himself.

WEAPON

Name: ROSE

Primary Form: Semi automatic M1911 pink handgun with gold accents with pivot style trigger. They have a ported muzzle compensators that reduce recoil and counteract muzzle flip. Barrels are extend through the compensators and are ported to match the cuts in the compensators. This gunís ejection port on the left side so the bullets eject away from Noctis. Uses double stacked magazines. This gun is meant to hit exact targets.

Dust Functions: It can fire Dust based bullets.

Fire dust creates a bit of a heavier impact and sets targets on fire

Ice Dust will Freeze opponents

Gravity Dust will suspend opponent in the air for 2 minutes

History: A handgun made custom to suit Noctis taste. Named after his mother Rose Quartz

WEAPON

Name: SCEPTER, Scep for short.

Primary Form: Semi automatic M1911 silver handgun with gold accents with pivot style trigger. They have a ported muzzle compensators that reduce recoil and counteract muzzle flip. Barrels are extend through the compensators and are ported to match the cuts in the compensators. This gunís ejection port on the right side so the bullets eject away from Noctis. Uses double stacked magazines. This gun is meant to fire rapidly.

Dust Functions: It can fire Dust based bullets.

Fire dust creates a bit of a heavier impact and sets targets on fire

Lighting will stun opponents

Gravity Dust will suspend opponent in the air for 2 minutes

History: A handgun made custom to suit Noctis taste. Named after his brother Scepter Quartz

« Last Edit: September 27, 2016, 03:21:38 PM by MissyMidna »
Noctis Quartz#8E44AD - 1st yr Beacon student, Medic of Team ASPN "This might hurt...a lot. So don't cry"

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Re: Noctis Quartz
« Reply #1 on: September 12, 2016, 03:54:36 PM »
A few things:

Age:
I don't have anything against him being 22 years old, but it is strange that he's that old and only a first year student at Beacon. Usually first years are 17-18 years old.

History:
Slightly lacking. Please include things about his childhood: where he's from, what did he do growing up, and a little more about his family.

Semblance:
A little more detail is needed here. How long does it take to heal different types of wounds? How often can he use his semblance before it tires him out?

Combat Behavior:
You'll need to add more details here: is he a strength-based or speed-based fighter? Letting people see his strengths (he should have at least 3 strengths) and weaknesses (at least 2-3 weaknesses) in a fight will help fill your character out and make it a better character.

Weapon:
In regards to both weapons: what type of dust do they use and what are the affects? Please include those.

That's about it that I can see. A rather well-rounded character if I do say so...just needs a little filling out with the details.
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Re: Noctis Quartz
« Reply #2 on: September 12, 2016, 05:50:13 PM »
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Noctis Quartz#8E44AD - 1st yr Beacon student, Medic of Team ASPN "This might hurt...a lot. So don't cry"

Vidalia Umbra#FBF9AB- 1st yr Shade Academy student, Overactive child of Team VLPS "Maybe you can give me a cupcake."

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Re: Noctis Quartz
« Reply #3 on: September 12, 2016, 08:11:41 PM »
Ahhhhh......you have no idea how much more pleasant it was to read that. Well done. You've got my approval. You just need another mod to take a look at it now.

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Re: Noctis Quartz
« Reply #4 on: September 13, 2016, 02:55:57 PM »
All good. Approved 2/2
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Re: Noctis Quartz
« Reply #5 on: September 25, 2016, 10:01:59 AM »
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CHARACTER

Name: Noctis Quartz

Age:  18, Frost 27.

Species and Gender:  Human Male

Symbol: Vicus Nocte
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Occupation: First year Huntsmen Student Beacon academy

Appearance:
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 Noctis is 5í11 ft with crystal blue colored eyes. He has peachy pale skin along with a birthmark located on his right collarbone. He has starlight white hair with a thin patch of black hair in his bangs. His body is an average build. He wears a light grey shirt with a black and white jacket matched with black jeans. To the right of his hip is the case for his blade Divine. He wears white high top lace shoes and a crystal quartz necklace. His formal wear consists of a black dress shirt, a white tie and vest. Noctisí battle wear is the same as his everyday only on around his left thigh and right he carries handgun. To his back, right he has an ammo bag. 

History:
There were defiantly things Noctis did not want to do. He was sure that he was not going to become something as mundane as a doctor like his mother did and older brother, not that there was anything wrong with that it was just not for him. It wasnít as exciting as becoming a hunter; being a hunter meant saving lives, traveling and most importantly protecting those who cannot protect themselves. He was well aware that at times, he would need to make hard choices but that is what separated him from his family, he had hard time making choices like that. Small details like that made his mother want him to reconsider his profession.

Months after he entered Sanctum his mother constantly would find a reason to tell him why being a hunter was not for him. When he graduated, she tried everything to stop him from leaving Mistral however; Noctis told her that this is his dream, not hers. It was shame in her eyes because Noctis had a natural talent in medicine but she was no one to clip his wings.

Growing up was a bit difficult due to the lack of a father figure. Noctis' father passed away just a few months after his birth. His original name was Cerulean- because of his eye color, but then changed to Nocits to honor his father. He and his brother are four years apart making it difficult for Scepter to get use to having a younger sibling. Scepter had felt that it was Noctis fault that their father died making it difficult to get along with.

When he turned eleven he and his family moved from Atlas to Mistral. There is where Noctis made his memories and eventually attended Sanctum. Noctis picked up drawing along with gaining some medical knowledge from his mother's workplace. He didn't have many freinds because he was too shy to talk to anyone. That changed drastically when he started high school. Suddenly he was more open to talk and throw around his ideas regardless if not one agreed with him.

After he turned 15 the fight and struggling relationship with Scepter seemed to vanish. The older of the two learned that he could not continue to bicker and blame the younger for something he had no control over; it was also the same time Rose, their mother lost her job. In that same year Scepter started medical school and promised to take care of Rose so Noctis could leave to Vale with a worry free mindset.


Personality: Noctis is described to be a well-tempered male who rarely lashed out his emotions or lets his bad moods affect others around him. He is a social butterfly who loved to make new friends and learn new things. Noctis is aware that he is sometimes too calm about situations that would require him to make drastic choices. He still manages to make the best choice but in the order he does them is a bit out of his style.

When he is pushed at his limit- assuming someone really offended him, which is rare, he will speak as if he detached with his warm, fun loving self. After the dark episode, he will not apologize for his words.

In times where he is shy or nervous, Noctis will make an utter complete fool of himself. He will trip and drop things along with miss pronouncing words.

He likes to sleep, eat, draw in his free time and his favorite color is purple.

He dislikes people being rude to him, getting in his business and people who make fun of his hair.   

Aura and Semblance:

Aura is purple with light white and black accents.

His semblance is healing. He can create translucent barriers to heal a personís whole body or just small sections. It can heal major injuries, but not severed or open fractured limbs. He can only heal one person at a time.

Broken bones take 10 to 20 minutes takes 5% aura. Can only be used 20  times a day. Max 22

Deep gashes take 5 to 10 minutes 2% aura. Can be used 50 times a day. Max55

Bruises take 2 minutes 2% aura. Can be used 50 times a day. Max 60

Whole body 30 minutes 50% aura. Can only be used twice a day. Max 3

Combat Behavior: In combat he is very straightforward and focused. He likes to sometimes taunt his opponents out of his own personal enjoyment.

-Fast reactions
-Skilled Swordsmanship
-Expert marksmen


-Gets too confident
-Gets Distracted
-Is a bit too calm



WEAPON

Name:  Divine

Primary Form: A four foot stainless steel blade. The handle measures 12 inches wrapped with white Kevlar. Where the gear shift is located there is a white plate with the name Divine written in cursive along with Noctisí symbol. 

Dust Functions: Tiny channels breaking from the main channel down the blade allows dust to engulf the blade in whatever chosen dust element. The dust releases into the chamber with a lever and gear shift attached to the top left of the blade. First, the lever needs to be pushed then the handle needs to be twisted to force the dust down the blade. Grounded up dust is the only type the blade will take. It can be inserted by a channel in the handle. One type of dust can be used at a time or the gear system will jam.

Ice Dust will Freeze upon contact

Fire Dust explodes and sets things on fire upon contact

Lightning with Stun upon contact

History: The blade was made by a teacher in Sanctum who gave it to Noctis because he thought it suited him better. The symbol on the blade is something Noctis carved himself.

WEAPON

Name: ROSE

Primary Form: Semi automatic M1911 pink handgun with gold accents with pivot style trigger. They have a ported muzzle compensators that reduce recoil and counteract muzzle flip. Barrels are extend through the compensators and are ported to match the cuts in the compensators. This gunís ejection port on the left side so the bullets eject away from Noctis. Uses double stacked magazines. This gun is meant to hit exact targets.

Dust Functions: It can fire Dust based bullets.

Fire dust creates a bit of a heavier impact and sets targets on fire

Ice Dust will Freeze opponents

Gravity Dust will suspend opponent in the air for 2 minutes

History: A handgun made custom to suit Noctis taste. Named after his mother Rose Quartz

WEAPON

Name: SCEPTER, Scep for short.

Primary Form: Semi automatic M1911 silver handgun with gold accents with pivot style trigger. They have a ported muzzle compensators that reduce recoil and counteract muzzle flip. Barrels are extend through the compensators and are ported to match the cuts in the compensators. This gunís ejection port on the right side so the bullets eject away from Noctis. Uses double stacked magazines. This gun is meant to fire rapidly.

Dust Functions: It can fire Dust based bullets.

Fire dust creates a bit of a heavier impact and sets targets on fire

Lighting will stun opponents

Gravity Dust will suspend opponent in the air for 2 minutes

History: A handgun made custom to suit Noctis taste. Named after his brother Scepter Quartz
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Re: Noctis Quartz
« Reply #6 on: September 26, 2016, 11:36:37 AM »
Edited his History and added some pictures
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« Reply #7 on: September 27, 2016, 03:24:06 PM »
Added a voice claim too
Noctis Quartz#8E44AD - 1st yr Beacon student, Medic of Team ASPN "This might hurt...a lot. So don't cry"

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Re: Noctis Quartz
« Reply #8 on: September 27, 2016, 04:50:56 PM »
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Izumi Cremisi - Member of Obsidian Rose, Assassin, Thief, Arcade Enthusiast
Airi Fogden Bicardi - Second-Year Atlas Student, Family Heiress
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