Pyrite is 5'1" and weights 106bls. She has short blonde hair that goes down to her shoulders. She has beautiful blue eyes. Her skin is a little lighter then normal but not pale. Her only animal like traits are a long fluffy black and white tail and a pair of fluffy dog ears. Pyrite rarely wears makeup or anything that most girls might consider pretty,unless its a school uniform and your into that thing.
Pyrite wears a white coat with a silver buttons. Underneath her coat is a green button down shirt. She usually wears black pants and boots. During the summer when its to hot for her normal attire, she tends to lose the coat and only wear the green button down shirt with the first couple top buttons undone. She still wears the black pants and boots. During school hours she wears the uniform.
History:
Personality: Erica is a happy go lucky, bubbly and playful young women. Erica is mainly characterized by her boundless enthusiasm, and Cheerful behavior. When Erica talks, many of her words may sometimes come out randomly without her actually giving much thought to anything she comes up with. This is caused by her rather peculiar imagination, and her free-spirited attitude. However, Erica is more insightful than one would think and is capable of being serious when mostly necessary.
Eric is very open with people she meets and will quickly grow fond of them. Because of her motor mouth, she is very open to conversation and tends to play pranks on her friends and squad,making her a very social and likable person if not at times a little of a nuisance. She also appears to be good at reading people.
Erica become rather nervous and flustered around a specific individual. If these person ever acknowledges them, she becomes rather frazzled, and flustered. Her words can begin to studder, as well. Erica would do anything to make these individual happy, seeing them in a good mood makes her feel Excited and lewd. But if someone was to hurt them, then Erica would be ready to protect them.
Aura and Semblance: Eric aura has always been seen as unrestrained and destructive. Its color when shown is a light purple color, and also seems to smell of taffy. Unfortunately due to the nature of her aura she actually can not shield herself with it nor heal herself like normal ,however it makes up for it with its unrestrained power. Her semblance is Energy manipulation the ability to, create, shape and manipulate energy, these power is mainly used by her to create beams of energy, which she normally channels through here weapons. However these beams unlike her weapons is raw and destructive energy, and rarely does she like using it because of the amounts of collateral damage it causes.
Combat Behavior: Erica is quite skilled with her pistols, and an expert marksman in general. She is also ambidextrous, dual wielder her guns with precision and quick reflexes allowing her to drew and switch her pistols very repeatedly. Her Pistols also give her a versatility,depending on the situation. Erica strength comes from the speed and versatility of her weapons and when in a pinch she can use her Semblance to obliterate anything in her way. But her greatest weakness is the very destructive powers she weaponize, she is unable to regenerate using aura, these leaves her getting exhausted fairly quickly and if she uses her semblance she probably collapse from overexertion from just two shots. WEAPON
Name: Los Lobos
Primary Form: Los is a beautiful ornamental pistol,(looks like these
, except the ornaments are a magenta color instead of silver). Los Lobos fires condensed beams of energy,the beams fired From Los are a Magenta color. After six shots Los Lobos must recharge by being holstered for 1 post
Dust Functions: Los has a three charges of yellow dust attached to the holster when applied to the Pistols it consumes one charge. These causes the weapon to fire a blast of lighting that stuns and electrifies the energy hit but the shot. The dust charge last until the pistol need to be recharged
Name: Cero Metralleta
Primary Form: Cero looks identical to Los Lobos except the ornaments of these pistol is Indigo. Cero fires condensed beams of energy,the beams fired from chase are a violet color, the shots from Chase are shorter and have a wider arcs then Cero and Los . After 8 shot Chase must be placed in its holster for a recharge.
Dust Functions: Cero has a three charges of blue dust attached to the holster when applied to the Pistols it consumes one charge. These causes the weapon to fire beams that freeze a small area where ever it hits. The dust charge last until the pistol need to be recharged
Name: Give Chase
Primary Form: Chase looks identical to Los Lobos except the ornaments of these pistol is Violet. Chase fires condensed beams of energy,the beams fired from Cero are a indigo color and fire in three round burst. After 12 shot Cero must be placed in its holster for a recharge.
Dust Functions: These Pistol has a three charges of green dust attached to the holster when applied to the pistol it consumes one charge. These causes the weapon to fire concussive burst of air that knocks enemies off there feet. The dust charge last until the pistol need to be recharged.
Name:Colmillo
Primary Form: Colmillo looks identical to Los Lobos except the ornaments of these pistol is Pink. Cero fires condensed balls of energy that explode on impact like a granade,the balls fired from Colmillo are a pink color. After 2 shot Colmillo must be placed in its holster for a recharge.
Dust Functions: These Pistol has a three charges of red dust attached to the holster when applied to the pistol it consumes one charge. These causes the weapons shot to become Incendiary causing a fire where it explodes.
History: Erica's weapons were created in her time at Signal, the weapons creation was design to be a more concentrated version of her own semblance. Its said each pistol is a refined version of her failures to create Los Lobos.
Note: if you haven't noticed or never watched Bleach i'm trying to make Coyote Stark Resurrection into a weapon here's an example
Title: Re: Erica Lavender (WIP)
Post by: Kingnoname1 on May 31, 2017, 11:38:30 PM
I've seen you on the discord so someone probably said welcome there but if not, welcome to the site.
I like the character but I have a pretty big concern about not being able to use her aura to shield herself. This will not only make her able to take very little damage before she would be permanently injured but also would likely disqualify her from the academy. All the fights are until aura break as the risk of permanent injury is too high.
Everything else seems pretty good so well done.
Title: Re: Erica Lavender (WIP)
Post by: Xarias Fury on June 01, 2017, 08:24:29 PM
I might have to deny energy manipulation on grounds that you couldessentially take any object and convert its potential energy into something elae entirely. For this to be feasibleyou may need to specify what kind of energy is being transformed into. Electric? Mechanical? Nuclear? Too many factors and the energy released isn't specified as to what type and for some reason is severely destructive without any mention of source. Its not defined and there are too many factors as is please change.