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CHARACTER

Name:
Airgid Vidro

Age:
24, 3rd of Arashi

Species and Gender:
Human Female

Symbol:
A shield made of shattered glass

Occupation:
4th Year at Beacon

Appearance:
Rather pale skinned and a bit skinny due to how she lived until now, Airgid is 5'3" tall and weighs 125lbs. She has long white hair and amethyst eyes. She is rather pretty but doesn't dress to look good. Mostly wearing a loose white blouse and a small black vest with a pair of jeans Airgid tries to just be comfortable. She often has silver headphones on. She also is always eating a lollipop that is some of her medication so it isn't obvious. She also wears a necklace of beads and a ring of gold with amethysts and a blue gem.

History:
Airgid was born with severe combined immunodeficiency so she is almost without an immune system. Her parents tried to get her a bone marrow transplant, the best way to heal this, however Airgid reacted badly to the transplant and thankfully no lasting damage was done but they knew that wouldn’t work. Her parents decided for her safety she would stay in an isolated set of rooms at a hospital in quarantine so that she wouldn’t get sick and she would be kept safe there. They would visit as often as they could and there would be doctors and nurses always in the area. This is how Airgid grew up until she was 9. Home schooled there by a private tutor and she spent most of her free time reading and learning about the world. One day she saw a boy in the area around her isolation block from the large glass wall she had to see people and communicate. He walked by everyday and always was smiling and helping others. Eventually she called for him and they started talking. His name was Frelsari and was helping at the hospital to become a doctor. He wanted to try and save everyone. The two hit it off instantly and became good friends. They would talk for hours everyday whenever Frelsari had time. He told her all about the real world and they were near inseparable. This lasted for three years. The day before their 3rd anniversary of being friends Frelsari told her he had a gift for her that he would bring tomorrow. However he didn’t come back. After two days Airgid started asking everyone she could until after asking one nurse the nurse suddenly looked sad, “Oh you didn’t hear… He died, there was a violent White Fang demonstration and he rushed in to save the injured. He died during the commotion. Im sorry.” After this Airgid went into her room and stayed there for days. After three days she came out and asked her parents if there was any way for her to go out into the world. They said yes but why that would be dangerous and she would no matter what live a shorter life and need to be on huge amounts of medication. Airgid told them she wanted to become a Huntress so she could carry on Frelsari’s dream of saving people in her way. She would go to Haven and study there. Her parents reluctantly agreed but would only let her go out into the world a year before school started hoping she change her mind by then. For the next five years she studied fighting as much as she could and got her semblance unlocked and learned to control it. She studied hard and prepared herself for the real world. After those five long years she was ready to see the real sky and breath real air at least. After being told exactly what drugs she needed and when and the risks she took her first free step. The rest of the year was a blur learning about the world and training. When it came to the Haven tests to get in she nailed the academics due to how much she had learned in her room. Her combat scores were lower than most though and she barely made it in with one of the lowest possible scores. The next three years were spent with her team learning to fight and work together until towards the end of her 3rd year her team leader was found to be working as a spy for the White Fang and expelled. After this Airgid’s team dissolved and due to some personal issues Airgid transferred schools to complete her training at Beacon and to prepare to become a full fledged huntress.

Personality:

Aura and Semblance:
Aura is amethyst
Semblance is that she can summon mirrors that when something enters one it exits another. She can summon 3 large mirrors with an area of 6ft and 5 small ones with areas of 2-3 feet. She uses these to protect herself and attack back while attacking from different directions. The mirrors can be destroyed when attacked from angles other that the mirror side and she can only have them up for around 10 minutes at a time before needing to rest. She can summon any number but not more than the max.

Combat Behavior:
Airgid fights by using her mirrors to block as many attacks and redirect them as she can while attacking from many angles with her guns, she is relatively fragile so she relies on using her mirrors as shields and keeping some distance. She relies heavily on her team mates who she tries to help by giving them information and will do her best to protect anyone around the fight with the mirrors as well. Fast foes are difficult to block with her mirrors as well as very large attacks that won't fit in a mirror. For these enemies Airgid will focus on predicting attacks and trying to keep them off balance by shooting from as many angles as she can with her mirrors and try to be more aggressive. Normally she relies heavily on beating the enemy with their own attacks and is defensive.

WEAPON

Name:
Xustiza

Primary Form:
30 round clip sub machine gun, is small and able to be wielded one handed. It is black with purple writing in an ancient script saying The life of the dead is placed in the memory of the living

Dust Functions:
Lighting bullets for a shock, 1 clip
Fire bullets for igniting, 2 clips
Frost bullets for freezing, 2 clips

History:
She trained first to unlock her semblance then designed a weapon to use with her semblance so she can attack shooting through the mirrors and shoot from many angles at once

Spoiler: Show

...Maybe try to break up the big blocks of text by making paragraphs? I'm mostly certain mods will appreciate.

Welcome to the site Sank :D Saw you in the Discord but still the first post on the site so I'll take it.

First off nice to see that you've gone through the template guide, good start!

You're more than welcome to have a fourth-year student however it is worth knowing that about 90-95% of characters are 1st years so you will have a harder time finding a team and such, but again that's entirely up to you.

Appearance is good, could be a bit longer but doesn't have to be. Anything that can help us picture her the way you do.

I'm a bit reluctant to do much of a review on the history in regards to her immunodeficiency as it's something I have (partially) studied and I'll just get hung up on details that aren't that important from a narrative point, so I'll leave that to someone else.
Wasn't entirely clear how old Frelsari is? (Not a major point)
Again I won't comment on the details of the treatment as that isn't actually important for the character.
The timeline between deciding to be a huntress and current day could do with a rephrasing. 'She would be let out one year before school, then she trained for 5 years before she was let out, then she went to Haven for 3 years?
Would be nice to see an expansion on why she wanted to go to Beacon then, outside of personal reasons?
Regardless a good start that could do with being a bit more detailed, and as Nathan said using a few paragraphs to avoid text blocks.

Minor point but pick a hex color for the aura and make the text said color. Example

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[color=#9966cc][/color]
Creation semblances are fine as long as its made of aura and disappears afterward, though the specific balancing details I'm not experienced enough to really comment on. Am I correct in understanding that they are mirrors but act more as portals? (If she has 3 up how does that work?) And how far away from her can they move?

Not really familiar whit the template you had in the spoiler, where is it from (or your own system)?

A very good start and there people here who will do their best to get your character ready for review ^^ Again welcome!

the spoiler is something for writing one of my roleplaying friends found, i just include it cause it has so much useful info

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RPG Creations => Character Creation => WiP Characters => Topic started by: Sank180 on June 08, 2017, 03:02:55 PM