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Occupation: Student at Beacon AcademyWhat year of student?
Crimson is about 6’1- 6’5That's... a rather glaringly large range. It's best to settle on an exact height, to be honest. If you go for the higher ranges, be aware that being tall isn't always a great thing; there's issues with blood circulation, and... well, I won't get too picky right now, we're working on the more obvious things immediately.
within battle and or out of combat at a rarity her eyes shows a strange symbol with a light purple outline around the symbol that fills the iris
The color of her air is a purple-black with hints of blues and silvers...of her air?
“spikes”So are they spikes then? Are they actually just bananas shaped to look like pointy metal objects?
50-100 light compact arrowsThat's a lot of arrows. They won't be particularly powerful if you mean to fit that in to a leg-quiver; after all, if it's more than a certain size you won't be able to bend your legs at all.
all forms of dustThere's a lot more types of Dust in the RPG; usually mixtures of the main ones. Best to specify you have only the main ones, or main ones and a few mixed, etc. Also, be aware if it's powdered Dust, you'd blow up if it's poked around too much in combat; even crystals could go kaboom if it's hit directly.
nearly categorizedI think you meant "neatly categorized" here.
Her mother and father were huntresses and huntersPlural? They were more than one? :P
As a child, she was taught how to fight grimFirst thing's first, 'Grimm'. Secondly, if you meant she fought them as a seven-year-old child, then no. That's not especially a thing. If the town was...
full of huntresses and hunters who helped her trainThen they'd be very unlikely to take a child straight into combat. Combat training, on the other hand, that's totally fine. However, she wouldn't have mastered all of them if so many were being taught; basic knowledge of each, sure. A child's body wouldn't be able to handle quite the level of exercise I'm thinking you are imagining, however, without damaging the muscles severely - even with aura, I'd imagine.
The town was prosperous….You don't need quite so many full stops. A better way to put it would be: 'The town was prosperous for many years, until... Until that day. The day the village went into shambles, the village she once grew up in was gone, destroyed, vanished.'
Many different faunus members, of all different types, from the White Fang including their leader began to slaughter, burn, steal things from every single man, woman, and child until nothing was left of their village to show Vale how the White Fang have been treated throughout regions.Hwut
Their leader commanded his men and woman, to start attacking the village. All of the huntresses and hunters, one-by-one, fell to their death along with many grim and White Fang members.Where'd the Grimm come from? How did all the hunters and huntresses fall?
Crimson’s parents fought against the leader as for Crimson, she helped to defend the village from grimm that joined the fight later on and White Fang.
Within many hour of fight of Crimson’s village, the leader of the White Fang slaughtered Crimson’s parents as Crimson was looking at them being killed. Crimson fell to her knees as her father looks at her as say in great pain, “We love you, so much. Stay strong with your head held high. Never give up and never forget your...village. Crimson. Remember…we are always….here for... y-y-you…..”
Crimson faints from exhaustion. She woke up in a city far away from the main city in Vale. She was rescued by multiple groups of hunters and huntresses that where on patrol in the forests that saw the black smoke from fires and grimm.
They were actually the trainees of the first huntresses and hunters including the huntresses and hunters as well. She told them all her story, even the first hunters and huntresses.
Crimson was devoted to getting revenge. Crimson vowed an oath that she will live long in the name of her village and get vengeance on the leader of the White Fang for killing her parents and destroying her loved village.Interesting.
Cool, rarely shows emotion but sometimes when you get to know her is nicer, introvert, mature, serious during combat, strong willed/strong hearted, tends to get sidetracked in her thoughts, has a evil side to her, cautious around/ near faunus, hides many secrets, wise, stubborn at timesHow does the evil side act? How is she mature and wise but is completely driven to revenge and has an evil side to her?
trustworthy, never lies, listens to other within school and or combat, strategic in combat/class, ,patient, ambidextrous, adapts to her surrounding easily than others, skilled with almost every weapon, her vision is sharper/faster than an average human/faunus, has a large amount of aura so wounds heal fast depending on how bad it is but leave scars,
emotionless at times, does not talk much, pessimistic in combat, a bit cocky in training and or combat but it rarely shows, shallow, small PTD (post trauma disorder), hand-to-hand combat,
Crimson has deft enough control over these that she could form them to a creature that used for both combat and non-combat uses.Cool. When did she learn how to? How did she learn it?
then the user has little extra power to draw on, thus leaving them with the shadows they can create themselves with their Aura, as well as what few are left around.So it uses aura, or stamina? How much? What's the difference and scale?
also has made her develop a sixth sense to detect different grimm types and aura of multiple people.
when someone is in need in combat she doesn’t give up to try to save them but it she fails she fells a small burden put upon herself, tends to get caught up in the fight, when fighting her personality gets “more grim” and becomes a little creepy/demonic (meaning menacing, twisted)This is additional information. Combat behavior means how does she fight, you can put this information in but it describes nothing of how she actually fights.
emotionless at times, does not talk much, pessimistic in combat, a bit cocky in training and or combat but it rarely shows, shallow, small PTD (post trauma disorder), hand-to-hand combat,
Corrupted destiny (Bow), The Blades of Judgement (Complete set), Broken Promise/Destiny's Song (Swords), Soul Reaper/Eternal Harmony (Katanas), Heaven's Judgment (staffs)
Crimson forged it by hand
She forged it around 10 years ago when she was around the age of 7-8So she was five years old when she fought Grimm?