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WiP Characters / Re: Rai Foudsol
« on: February 03, 2017, 01:51:18 PM »
Will do. And, thank you.
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WiP Characters / Re: Rai Foudsol
« on: January 30, 2017, 10:19:27 PM »
Ah yes, Thank you. I did not mean to cause a height discrepancy, that was my mistake. I will be sure to remedy that, as well as take more time to write about his appearance (my first draft got deleted to to inactivity while writing it so I did it as quick as possible). As for the weapon descriptions and history, I did not think of putting WIP in instead of the half attempt at a joke (clearly that failed and was redundant).
As for his semblance I am still working on it. When I first thought of his semblance I wanted it to be electricity related. It wan't until later that I realized that it was quite similar to Nora's semblance. Hence I made the distinction that it enhanced his agility instead of his strength. I might end up changing it all together later on. I will still keep the electric fox theme tho, as I was inspired by the raiju thunder beast of Japanese mythology.
Hopefully this youngin will get better at this, and I thank you for the critique.
As for his semblance I am still working on it. When I first thought of his semblance I wanted it to be electricity related. It wan't until later that I realized that it was quite similar to Nora's semblance. Hence I made the distinction that it enhanced his agility instead of his strength. I might end up changing it all together later on. I will still keep the electric fox theme tho, as I was inspired by the raiju thunder beast of Japanese mythology.
Hopefully this youngin will get better at this, and I thank you for the critique.
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WiP Characters / Rai Foudsol
« on: January 30, 2017, 12:55:44 AM »
Rai Foudsol
Name: Rai Foudsol
Age: 19
Species and Gender: Male Faunus-Fox
Symbol: A silhouette of a stylized and pointy fox head. Where the right eye would be, a horizontal lighting bolt is found.
Occupation: Freelancer/Wanderer
Appearance: Rai is 67in (172cm) tall lithe faunus. He wears some very heavy combat boots with some very dark blue jeans. he typically wears his nearly black, with a bit of blue, leather hoodie that has coverings for his ears. he also has finger-less gloves to make him look even more like a "bad boy". he has very long, dark silvery hair that when drenched hides his narrow face completely. his hair parts mostly in the middle, with most of his bangs swooshed of the right of his face. the other half id swooshed of to the left with the hair from the sides of his head and from the back, spilling down out of the hoodie.
History: he hasn't told me yet (sorry)
Personality: he realy doen't want to tell me his history.
Aura and Semblance: Color:Royal Azure
Surge: his body Is quite electrifying. both to women and his opponents, or that's what he would lead you to believe. His semblance give him an innate connection to electricity, allowing him to adsorb and store electricity. when he taps into his supplies, his body gets shrouded in intimidating, but purely aesthetic, electricity. It also make lightning flow from his eyes all scary like. When Surge it triggered he gain increased agility as long as it it leaking from him, making him a rather quick foe on the battle field.
(notes: potentially have him carry a batterie. Surge might have a time limit like 5-10 mins or something)
Combat Behavior: uh... he won't tell me that eaither.
WEAPON
Name: he is touchy about his guitar
Primary Form: he won't let me touch it.
Secondary Form: like I said.
Tertiary Form: he won't.
Dust Functions: let me.
History: touch it.
Name: Rai Foudsol
Age: 19
Species and Gender: Male Faunus-Fox
Symbol: A silhouette of a stylized and pointy fox head. Where the right eye would be, a horizontal lighting bolt is found.
Occupation: Freelancer/Wanderer
Appearance: Rai is 67in (172cm) tall lithe faunus. He wears some very heavy combat boots with some very dark blue jeans. he typically wears his nearly black, with a bit of blue, leather hoodie that has coverings for his ears. he also has finger-less gloves to make him look even more like a "bad boy". he has very long, dark silvery hair that when drenched hides his narrow face completely. his hair parts mostly in the middle, with most of his bangs swooshed of the right of his face. the other half id swooshed of to the left with the hair from the sides of his head and from the back, spilling down out of the hoodie.
History: he hasn't told me yet (sorry)
Personality: he realy doen't want to tell me his history.
Aura and Semblance: Color:Royal Azure
Surge: his body Is quite electrifying. both to women and his opponents, or that's what he would lead you to believe. His semblance give him an innate connection to electricity, allowing him to adsorb and store electricity. when he taps into his supplies, his body gets shrouded in intimidating, but purely aesthetic, electricity. It also make lightning flow from his eyes all scary like. When Surge it triggered he gain increased agility as long as it it leaking from him, making him a rather quick foe on the battle field.
(notes: potentially have him carry a batterie. Surge might have a time limit like 5-10 mins or something)
Combat Behavior: uh... he won't tell me that eaither.
WEAPON
Name: he is touchy about his guitar
Primary Form: he won't let me touch it.
Secondary Form: like I said.
Tertiary Form: he won't.
Dust Functions: let me.
History: touch it.
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