Setsuna tries to make time to meet up with all his fans IRL, but since he does his best to make each interaction enjoyable he ends up being a bit swamped as he doesn't just want to do a short meet-and-greet.

Tina spends all her time online in conversation. Actively avoids IRL fangroups.

Kei knows he has a fanbase, but ignores both IRL and online groups. This, unfortunately, only provides them with a incentive to get his attention / get a one-on-one meeting.

Graham would interact with his fans by arranging times to meet and show off his flashy moves.

Jocelyn wouldn't say much online, but would try and help any potential medics that reach out to or were inspired by her.

Both Yu and Rachel are entirely ignorant of the fact that they even have fans. One because he doesn't know what a "fan" is, the other because they avoid humans they don't know.

At Prism's order, Jocelyn's sniper rifle extends into its active form at the same time that Steam Flower's mechanical wings snap into place and Hyacinth's safety trigger is turned to 'Open'. The remaining winds created by Prism's Semblance tugs impatiently at her own wings, as if urging her to take to the skies, but Jocelyn remains grounded for the time being by kneeling on the floor and resting Hyacinth on her other knee.

Seeing her leader's absolute concentration, she ups her focus as well, eyes trained on the scope in front of her, aiming directly at Azure's head. Without Azure knowing her Semblance's capabilities, there wasn't much risk of being immediately targeted as the medic, so she was free to execute cover fire. "In position." Jocelyn says curtly, without taking her eye off Azure - the other is closed in preparation.

At the slightest movement, she'll fire.

Jocelyn's Combat Log:
  ● Aura: [██████████] 100%
  ● 7/7 bullets in mag

"Dust almighty-" Setsuna let go of his saber and threw himself to one side, with the end result of the kick half-connecting on his thigh. With no time to really control where he was going to land, the boy landed roughly in the snow and rolled a little before getting back up, pulling a dagger bit from his shield to replace his sword, now buried in the snow next to Shiroe. "That wasn't very nice of you." Setsuna remarked, holding the dagger in front of his chest as he gave Shiroe enough time to stand back up - daggers were even worse against a prone opponent, though he should have taken a different approach in the first place.

Regardless of whether Shiroe decided to take the opportunity to stand, Setsuna swept forward again, aided by his Semblance's speed to once more dive on his opponent. With his right hand he aimed two fast, darting cuts at his opponent's waist while his left reached for his sword before bringing it down diagonally across Shiroe's chest.

Setsuna's Stats:
  ● Aura: [█████████-] 85% [7% from rune-boosted kick]
  ● Weapons: Discord, Harmony

Combat Data:
  ● Attacks: Twin quick cuts (4% x 2), diagonal overhead slash (6%)
  ● Semblance: ACTIVE - 50/60 seconds

"Aye, ma'am!" Jocelyn salutes semi-mockingly, before another trigger on her jumppack sends her soaring through the air in a backflip to land a good distance away from where the fight would take place. She couldn't help but think to herself that the new teammate was somewhat arrogant and reckless, but first impressions didn't always define the person underneath. "Come on, Coco. Give the two some space, you heard Prism." That was in case Coco was still busy staring at Azure - the stare didn't go unnoticed.

As Steam Flower's wings folded into their compact position, Jocelyn took a seat on the hard floor, sitting cross-legged and placing her rifle to her right in case of an emergency application of her Semblance. From what she could see initially, Azure came with nothing but her guitar, so either she was a brawler or that guitar transformed in some way. Dustthrower perhaps? Jocelyn had seen some heavy metal shows being broadcasted on scroll before - reruns, she wasn't particularly interested in that genre and wouldn't go out of her way to watch one - and there had been a flamethrower mounted on the lead guitarist's electric guitar. Spewed flame whenever they strummed chords repeatedly. Most importantly, she was interested to see how Azure would handle Prism's whole flying battle style. "Standing by for medical assistance. Ready when you are."

The overextended hunter-in-training barely had time to finish cutting through one Creep before its companions joined the fray, a tail lashing through the smoke created by the dissipating corpse to sneak around his legs and knock Tieren on his back. It succeeds, but not before Tieren is able to take a firm grip on the tail and slam the offending Grimm hard onto the floor next to him. "Lookie here, I got a morningstar and I'm not afraid to use it!" Tieren grins before swinging the unfortunate Creep in circles around his head, potentially giving the other two Creeps bitchslaps across the face depending on the distance before hurling it high in the sky. An easy target for their team's sniper to take - provided she was paying attention to the entire battlefield.

Clearing his immediate surroundings by swinging his sword a full circle around him before standing up, Tieren takes a battle-ready stance, left hand held in front with fingers doing a recognisable "come on" gesture while his right held his fully extended sword behind his back.

Tieren’s Stats:
  ● Aura: [█████████-] 95%
  ● Semblance: 0% active [0% DMG reduction]

Now that the site’s fixed I can finally go back to typing my posts out on the site directly. (Thanks Vox). It’s actually quite rare, across the site and the spreadsheet recordings I haven’t come across many lefties at all.

My Graham was designed as a left-hander but the rest are all rights. Purely in combat there’s much that changes if you’re fighting a left-handed swordsman in melee, in the same way you’d play a leftie in racket sports. In theory it would completely throw another swordsman off balance, their training would normally be done against another person who’s right-handed so everything would feel different.

In normal lives you could find things to write about how literally everything’s designed for right-handed people. Door handles, mouses for computers (if they existed), handshakes, stuff like that.

Can you tell I want more left-handed people? And no, adding it as an afterthought doesnt’t really count, the character kinda needs to be designed with it in mind.

Personally I would like to see some more detail on everything, that’s the only major gripe I have with Roux. Even though you’ve read our advice, it still feels barebones but it is an improvement upon the previous iteration.

One thing I will ask is that the weapon description be more than a namedrop of what it’s supposed to be. For example, is there any decorations on the hook? How large or long is it? Is there any sign of previous use eg. dents or scratches? How does the weapon transform/parts-form into its machine gun form? Etc, etc. I know Reaper has already mentioned this but it does bear repeating.

Hello and welcome to the site! It seems you've gotten a chance to read through the rules for creating a character, and I understand that this may well be still incomplete, but there are some things I’d like to point out in order to help you create a character you can be proud of.

Firstly, it’s generally more helpful to the people you’ll be RPing with if they can visualise your character in better detail. This includes some more description for Roux’s appearance, like a general height, what his body shape is like, etc. Simply putting down barebones descriptions is fine but what makes your character stand out instead of looking like a general NPC?

The same would apply to Roux’s history and personality. Apart from more detail, teams are created by asking around and agreeing with others on the site, not defined in the profile. For Roux’s aura, it’s good to define a colour to work with, considering speech on the site is done “like this”. Otherwise, people will struggle to differentiate what Roux is saying and what you’re writing.

For his semblance, I'm not a mod but I do believe that something with the power to kill a dragon, even with severe drawbacks, is not something a 1st year can do. You'll have to ask mods for the details, but I'd recommend changing that for now.

You’ve got the basics down and I look forward to seeing how you continue to develop Roux! There are plenty of approved characters you can examine to get a better grasp on what the general standard of characters on the site are, and please feel free to ask the community for help (we don’t bite, mostly)