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Obadia Corcra/ A.C.D.C.
« on: September 12, 2016, 09:36:21 AM »
CHARACTER

Name: Obadia Corcra (Corcra meaning purple in Irish)

Age: 21 Born Hitahita 12, 61 AC

Species and Gender: Male, Human

Symbol: A broken white beaker releasing a purple/black liquid and smoke on a blue background

Occupation: Third year beacon student, Crazy scientist/Medic

Appearance: Obadia is kind of a smaller man standing five foot five inches tall and weighing about 138 pounds, his brown shoulder length is almost never combed as that would just be a waste of his time, but he always wears a small black top hat, with three purple pocket watches held on the lip of the hat by small pockets, on his face is a brown leather mask with bronze studs, switches, and dials, it covers his entire face except for his forehead, the goggles that cover his eyes can increase his vision tenfold but the lenses have different settings, normal, thermal(tracking), night(military grade), zoomed(scouting, sniper spotting), and X-ray(broken bones), also his left lenses has five health bars so he can monitor his teams standing(but only two have pictures at the moment A.C.D.C. & himself),  he uses the dials next to his eyes to switch between the modes, the mask also covers over his ears and they two have settings, normal, and heightened(near faunus), this he switches by a switch near his right ear, the respirators are filtered to prevent gas attacks but also heightens his sense of smells, although it has one set back he can not eat with the mask on although he can drink by taking off the left filter and drink through that, his main reason for wearing the mask is to cover his scarred face, the rest of his attire consists of a black shirt and pants, he wears a dark purple trench coat partially covered in bronze gears and has many pockets holding different medical supplies(needles, thread, burn salves), he also carries a purple backpack with most of his supplies in there(his rounds for his weapon, plenty of notebooks filled with designs and algorithms, a laptop, and other medical supplies).

History: Obadia was born in Atlas to a couple scientists who came from wealthy families they worked on military projects they spent most of their time away in labs or workshops so they hired a babysitter who was a battle medic, until he turned ten, during their time at home his parents taught him about history, math, science, and Grimm but didn't teach him hardly anything about aura or combat so it came down to the sitter to teach him what little she knew about aura but not combat as she noticed something was not right with the boy and didn't want him hurting anyone instead she taught him how to heal people with medicines and conventional ways. When Obadia turned ten the military suggested to his parents that they show their son around the labs and lower security projects, seeing as some of the prototype drawings that he had submitted to them were fixing some of the problems that they had in their own designs, his parents agreed to it and brought him the next day showing him various things they had worked on, the one that really caught his eye was a prototype called automated combat defense (A.C.D.), it was about the size of a full grown man but had armor and was based off a computer targeting system, he watched at it obliterated a target at the far end of a firing range.

That night he broke into his father's lab section of the house hacked his computer, and downloaded the plans for A.C.D. to a flash and took it to his own room and using his parents family funding he started ordering the parts he would need to build himself one but in many small amounts as not to attract any attention from the military or his parents, when they finally asked him why he was buying all these random parts he told them he was working on a prototype and it was a secret until it was finished this was not his first project that he hid from his parents so they didn't press the matter, the hard part was rewriting the original program it took him over three years to finally finish all the coding, he finished the body soon afterward and uploaded the program into the body then the military targeting system, but the robot freaked out at the upload and it took Obadia a few days to fix the major bugs in the programming, when he finished and the robot ran without freaking out he went to his computer and plugged the robot in and uploaded the entire known history of the four kingdoms, he also figured his friend would need a name together they came up with a very unoriginal one, they based it off the military name A.C.D. but he was also a thinking being now so they chose A.C.D.C. adding Companion to the end of the original acronym.

The next day he brought A.C.D.C. out to his parents they nearly died of shock that their son had stolen designs from them but the quickly got over it as he told them about the AI program that he designed himself they wanted to reverse engineer it but Obadia wouldn't allow it and that was that, after hearing what Obadia had done from his parents, the military decided to offer him a job but he declined, he wanted to explore the world instead of reading about it so he decided to become a hunter, and went to Atlas's combat school he was doing OK as far as a student but he couldn't fight worth a damn, so he trained with A.C.D.C. at night and even though he got better he still sucked at close quarters, but was a good shot with an his automatic rifle.

After his years of training at the combat school he graduated to the academy in Atlas with just high enough combat scores and that is where he got his first team COLD, but they didn't like the way Obadia fought or acted although he had his uses, he was great at healing wounds and patching them up in the field, which happened often as he would end up shooting them when they moved into his line of fire but they blamed him, near the end of their second year they were sent on a mission into the mountains on a search and destroy that should have been a simple in and out but they were ambushed during the night by a group of Grimm, during the fight there was an explosion of fire dust that killed Candy, Lie, Denise, and the all Grimm but left Obadia alive but burning, luckily for him the hunter they were with put the fire out saving his life, but leaving his face severely burned, his mind had snapped that night as he blamed himself for their deaths and when he got back to the school he had A.C.D.C. had the designs to help Obadia create a mask that covered his face and ears, the one that he created had some bonuses to it his scenes could be heightened to extreme levels, after he finished the year he requested to be transferred to Beacon academy in Vale to get away from the people who knew him and were worried about his mental health, after his transcript was accepted he packed his things and both he and A.C.D.C. left for Vale for their third year.

Personality: Obadia is a complete nutcase after his accident and it's often a wonder as to how he was let into Beacon in the first place, some speculate that he just absent mindlessly wandered in, he spends most of his time reading, drawing designs, inventing, or experimenting, he doesn't like talking to people much as he finds that conversations with them are generally a waste of his time but when you do get him to get engaged in a conversation he is either speaking complete nonsense or pure knowledge, if you try and talk about his past he will do everything possible to get out of talking about it, he has no care for his own safety but he cares about his team whether they like him or not, he doesn't get offended easily unless a touchy subject is being touched upon.

Aura and Semblance: Healing Shield: Obadia can bring up a dark purple, force field that will completely heal the minor wounds and partially heal the major wounds of anyone inside of it for thirty seconds after that it will dissipate, each field costs Obadia 5% of his aura, while the field is nearly impenetrable to light attacks and most rounds, explosions or heavy attacks will bring it down, but it has some drawbacks while inside any attack will ricochet and potentiality hurt the person inside(think drop shield from Halo), if the field is destroyed Obadia will get a severe migraine for a minute, it takes him two minutes before he can use another field.

Combat Behavior: Obadia uses a mix of long range shooting and heavy hammer blows to confuse enemies and in his mind he has a sound structured attack but if you would ask anyone who watches him fight they would probably say he is unpredictable or inconsistent, he made his weapon's change time as quick as he could so he could quickly go between a ranged rifle and a devastating war-hammer.

WEAPON

Name: Grunts Bane

Primary Form: A fully automatic, belt fed, assault rifle holstered horizontally on his lower back right under his backpack which holds 500 .223 rounds

Secondary Form: If he runs out of ammo for his rifle the belt is removed and set in his backpack(if he has time), and he presses a button on the barrel that shifts everything excluding the barrel to the stock, the parts collapse onto themselves creating a thick metal war hammer.

History: Obadia needed a weapon to fight with during his training but he wasn't a good close quarters combat so he designed a weapon that he could utilize but he also knew that it would need to be used as a melee weapon when he ran out of ammo so he redesigned it so the weight would shift to the stock giving him a war hammer.

COMPANION

Name: A.C.D.C. (Artificial. Combat. Defense. Companion.)

Appearance: Standing five foot nine inches tall, A.C.D.C. is made of the strongest metal alloy that Obadia could get his hands on it is similar to titanium that is painted woodland digital camouflage, aside from his paint job he looks like a human but his face is completely digital so he can show facial expressions without difficulty.

Personality: Although originally designed to be a defense mechanism by the Atlas military A.C.D.C. has been reprogrammed by Obadia for support on the field, he loves to smack Obadia upside the head whenever he starts being an ass, he also apologizes for him since its in his programing. When Obadia adds to his memory banks the robot powers down and sorts through all the info, he has a slight problem with correcting other people which can be annoying and has a tendency to over analize for even the simplest problems.

Weaponry: A.C.D.C. is equipped with two weapons, first is off he can switch his right fist out with a broadsword attachment that is holstered on his back by retracting his hand into and empty section set aside for this very reason, the sword locks into place where the hand used to be, second is a pair of desert eagles that are hidden in his "thighs" the compartments slide open and he pulls them out.

Combat Behavior: As a robot ACDC does not have any nerves and therefore feels no pain unless he is his with an electric attack which could possibility of shorting his systems, ACDC relies more on his close combat keeping the enemy engaged and eliminating the possibility of armor piercing rounds, he is more like a tank taking small amounts of damage then dealing a few large crippling blows to take the enemy out of the fight quickly, if he needs to he can use his pistols but has a hard time hitting anything over twenty yards.
« Last Edit: October 15, 2016, 04:55:53 AM by 00Mogar »
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Obadia Corcra/A.C.D.C."Never any interesting people."Third year Mad scientist--
Eddy Midori"You're never ready for me."-- First year Cocky Monk
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Re: Obadia Corcra/ A.C.D.C.
« Reply #1 on: October 12, 2016, 01:05:49 AM »
After the staff came to the conclusion of "WAIT, FUCK AI!" we're removing from approval. Remove the AI or properly explain WHY we should let you keep it. This falls under the umbrella of super tech and far exceeds what we've seen in terms of AI in the show. Penny does not count as she was one of a kind and does not exist in our universe. If you need more explained, ask.

You may keep using this character until the process finishes up but we WILL expect a response soon.
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Re: Obadia Corcra/ A.C.D.C.
« Reply #2 on: October 12, 2016, 10:43:39 AM »
I would like to keep A.C.D.C. mostly cause I haven't even played him as a true AI but more like an Atlesian knight, memory bank that slaps Obadia upside the head and apologizes for him when he says something offensive in other words.... he is just a military robot that is programed different then the rest. If you need me to modify the profile to better show that then I will or if nothing else I views I can go back to the drawing board (that is gonna be HELL fun)
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Obadia Corcra/A.C.D.C."Never any interesting people."Third year Mad scientist--
Eddy Midori"You're never ready for me."-- First year Cocky Monk
Alice Kasshoku/Schwarz -- "You just need to chill."-- active huntress

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Re: Obadia Corcra/ A.C.D.C.
« Reply #3 on: October 12, 2016, 02:41:31 PM »
Editing the profile to reflect that would be good.
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Re: Obadia Corcra/ A.C.D.C.
« Reply #4 on: October 15, 2016, 04:59:43 AM »
Ok edited it so he is no longer an AI but more of a modified combat unit that slaps him around when he is being an ass.

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A.C.D.C's combat behavior.

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Obadia Corcra/A.C.D.C."Never any interesting people."Third year Mad scientist--
Eddy Midori"You're never ready for me."-- First year Cocky Monk
Alice Kasshoku/Schwarz -- "You just need to chill."-- active huntress

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Re: Obadia Corcra/ A.C.D.C.
« Reply #5 on: October 24, 2016, 08:04:44 PM »
Moving to editing to clean up creation. I'll hopefully be able to get to this today! Sorry about the overly long wait.
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Re: Obadia Corcra/ A.C.D.C.
« Reply #6 on: October 25, 2016, 03:21:13 PM »
Its not a problem
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Obadia Corcra/A.C.D.C."Never any interesting people."Third year Mad scientist--
Eddy Midori"You're never ready for me."-- First year Cocky Monk
Alice Kasshoku/Schwarz -- "You just need to chill."-- active huntress

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Marcus Bomvu-"Is there a forge nearby? I prefer to keep working."-- First year craftsman of team SMMR