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« on: October 01, 2016, 02:10:08 AM »
CHARACTER

Name: Vahn Crimson

Age: 18 years old, Machlud, Welsh of Sunset, 80 AC

Species and Gender: Human Male

Symbol: The usual Beowolf Grimm symbol but with a blood red x over it

Occupation: Freelance Wannabe Hunter, Grimm researcher

Appearance: Black messy hair, pale white skin, black eyes with three claw-like scars over his right eye.  Usually wears a black trench coat but under it is a crimson red body armor that resemble an Alpha Beowolf which gives him a slight muscular build (without it, he has a skinny body without him being bony).  Three blades on each of his forearms that shifts to create claws on top of his knuckles.  When in a fight, he will usually take off his coat and a full helmet with a visor covering his face.  He was a large belt around his hip with a revolver on one side and a small collection of dust in small canisters made with the same material as his armor surrounding the rest of the belt.

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History: Vahn was born with an illness that drains his stamina to the point that an hour of constant physical stress will cause him to start coughing up blood and possibly pass out.  Besides that, he lived a normal life in Vale until the age of ten.  When arriving back to his house, he found a crime scene replace the safe atmosphere.  Furniture tossed around, TV broken and blood clear as day without his parents to be found.  After a year of waiting, all the authority could do was reveal that his parents were ex-Huntsmen, who seemed to have quit the day he was born.  After being informed of this, he started to look for any trace for himself.  He tried to assign into any one of Academies but his illness held him back.  Lost, Vahn tried his luck in the Forest to try to mold his body and mind himself.  After a few days, he found himself at death's door after barely running from packs of Boarbatusks and killing a Creep with his family's revolver, his body finally starts to give out until an ex-Huntsmen saved him.  The man claimed to have known Vahn's parents before their disappearance and has been looking into it himself.  After that day, Vahn was taken under his wing for the next six years, giving Beacon academy level training inside the Forest, which includes the training to use SCF for his semblance.  While hunting and studying Grimm, he finally surpassed his teachings so he can prove himself as a Huntsmen.  This is when his master gives him information by his master that his parents might be still alive.  After obtaining this new-found knowledge, Vahn moved on to help others the same as his parents did while holding hope on finding them again. 

Personality: Vahn has a big heart, carefree and protective.  He is happy to make friends with anyone as long as they are willing.  He isn't one to hold a grudge for anything less than someone trying to hurt anyone without a good reason.  He is willing to put his life on the line for his allies or anyone in need.  Although he is calm in nature once a girl try to flirt with him,he will try his best to look cool while with a bright blush and a smile on his face.

Aura and Semblance: His Aura is red.  His Semblence is to take his Aura off his body and form it into a ball in his hand.  If he toss it at himself, it manifest as a bubble shaped barrier to protect him.  If he throws it at something else, the barrier will form to protect allies or detain enemies.  Depending on the size of the bubble, he can move it with ease when it's half the size of a human, to having to struggle when moving it a foot at a time at it's maximum size.  It can expand as big as a Death Stalker and is twice as strong as the average Hunter's Aura.  He can enlarge and stricken the barrier as much as he wants by opening or closing his fist.  Once Vahn has something in his barrier and he close his fist, the barrier will start to slowing crush them to the point that it starts cracking their defenses.  This however, weakens the barrier itself and makes them easier to break when attacked.  Sadly this leaves him without an aura and needing to keep an arm up towards the barrier to keep it going if away from him, leaving with one arm to defend himself. The barrier can be destroyed and leaves him without an aura for half an hour.  Vahn can infuse the barrier with any dust to give it different properties before and after it has formed: Fire and Lightning will surround the target in a ball of the selected element but quickly eats away the barrier.  Ice and Earth each makes a solid barrier of their respected elements and stays even without Vahn's semblance active but its impossible for him to change it's size or move it after surrounding something.  Air, Steam and Gravity will make the barrier and anything inside levitate, making it easy for Vahn to move them but just as easy for the thing to escape.  Water completely change the barrier into a giant bubble of water, easy to swim out of and just pops once he tries to change it's sizes.  This will empty the entire canister and prove difficult for Vahn to get a refill, since he isn't exactly licensed to carry them.

Combat Behavior: Vahn is mostly a close-ranged fighter but will use his gun to either attack far targets or surprise someone up close.  While in his training, Vahn learns to observe his enemies carefully for signs of weakness or to predict their moves for a counter-attack.  If he is facing something for the first time, he will attack first but hold back to watch their movements and actions before going all out. He is willing to use any of his forms or dusts at the right time for a surprising reveal.  He is more used to fighting Grimm but new and advanced types outside of the Forest will usually surprise him.  Vahn doesn't usually try to kill anyone unless they killed an innocent or ally.

WEAPON

Name: Hunter's Grimm

Primary Form: Dark red armor made with something similar to a Death Stalker's shell. It is outfitted with a set of claws on each of his forearms that shifts to Vahn's knuckles when he is ready to fight.  The full-faced visor that appears on his face is able to nullify the effects of blinding light and gives him a resistance to gas.  Hunter's Grimm has a slot in the center of the armor to insert a dust canister and/or change it's form depending on the dust.  Vahn's Aura goes over Hunter's Grimm to act as a last wall of defense.  If too much damage is inflicted on it, it will start to crack and break.

Secondary Form: Tank Form- If an Earth or Ice Dust is inserted, a layer of the element appears on Hunter's Grimm.  It will have a double in his armor and strength but slow him down greatly

Tertiary Form: Free mode - A button is located in the slot and when pressed, Vahn's armor will shift to his arms and legs.  His claws forms into two long swords.  His mobility and reach increases with the price of defense, it is still able to use dust.

Dust Functions: Vahn can only use most of the other dusts on his belt three times per action because of their size.  Wind or Gravity can blast Vahn toward the direction he wants to go for three steps he takes.  Fire unleashes flames on his blades until it makes contact with anything three times.  Steam gives off a large thick gust of steam to distract enemies once.  Lightning is the combination of the first two functions with the same actions draining the dust just as fast.  Water is mostly used with his semblance, making a ball of water to put out flames.

History: On the later years of his training, Vahn and his master decided to create a weapon fitting for him.  Since Vahn saw the Huntsmen as superheros, he took that to heart as he starts to design it while the ex-Huntsman helps him on improvements.  After a long and intense search for materials, they were able to craft the armor themselves.  The Huntsman was the one that suggested and provided the dust and his Focus canisters.  Til this day, Vahn continue to advance the suit himself.

Claws (minus the skulls)


Swords


WEAPON

Name: Six Crimson

Primary Form: A large revolver with six shots and a slot by the cylinder for a dust canister.

Dust Functions: Once he shoots a bullet with a canister installed, the shot takes the same element as the dust.  It uses up the whole canister per shot.

History: The Crimson Family Revolver that Vahn took with him into the Forest when finding it untouched at his house. It has been improved by Vahn after finishing his training.

« Last Edit: August 18, 2017, 06:02:04 PM by Vahn »
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Re: Vahn Crimson
« Reply #1 on: October 01, 2016, 06:54:58 AM »
If you could, please fix the formatting. Everything is bold and underlined, kindly move the actual content outside of the bbcode.

like this
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[b][u]Name:[/u][/b] (Name here)
so that it would appear as

Name: Vahn

Also please note if this is a transfer from the previous board or not, with a link the older one if possible. Just gotta make sure. Transfers get moved easier
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Re: Vahn Crimson
« Reply #2 on: October 01, 2016, 02:36:14 PM »
Done.  It's kinda a transfer but I changed a few things so I just rebooted him to fit a better image on what I wanted him to be like.
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Re: Vahn Crimson
« Reply #3 on: October 01, 2016, 07:26:35 PM »
Considering the amount of edits this will need two approvals.

History. A few grammatical errors I guess. Address them to the best of your ability.

Semblance, consider taking the crushing part out or keeping it but weakening the constitution of the shield. A bit inconsistent if you could crush one thing but not another. Also, can the shield bubble be moved?


Weaopon.

The thing about armors is that while they may be useful in mitigating damage Aura is usually there and way more reliable. Best use of it is when his aura is out, and during grimm hunting I guess that could be a thing. Just not sure how aura affect stamina in general. Good that you didn't outright say 'deathstalker's shell' because grimm cannot be harvested for materials.
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Re: Vahn Crimson
« Reply #4 on: October 01, 2016, 09:35:59 PM »
History. Sorry about the errors, I'll look in to the History. 

Semblance.  I wanted to include the crushing on only human-sized robots because I didn't want the power to be too OP and the factor of other's Aura and heavily armored beasts/robots kinda made me iffy.  How about the crush effect stays but depending on the size and amount of enemies/ armor/ aura it starts to decay?  Still damaging but doesn't fully takes out the target while giving Vahn a choice to continue crushing but leaving him with no aura or pulling out just in case.  Will him being able to move the bubble be a problem?  If not, then yes as long as he keeps his hand up towards it and moves his arm to where he wants it to go.  If it's around him, it moves as fast as he can walk.

Weapon.  I wanted to do something different with a Rwby character and I haven't seen anyone with armor as their weapon.  Of course I didn't want to go full Ironman but since he is at a disadvantage with his Semblance and the illness, I think it balance it out a little.  And yes I'm willing to add that it can start to break with more stress and damage inflicted to it if that might be an issue.
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Re: Vahn Crimson
« Reply #5 on: October 02, 2016, 07:43:32 PM »
Hmm, so basically let's say it could crush but as it's crushing it becomes more vulnerable to breaking? Also, best not make it completely crush something into non-existence. Just up the the point that it'll force a person into a crouching position at most. Also, make the bubble avoidable somehow. It'll be hard if it suddenly appears out of nowhere around someone. Maybe he makes it near himself and throws it, choosing what it can keep inside or outside. For instance, throwing it at a grimm he can either make it bump off or swallow it to contain it till it dies or the bubble breaks.

Moving the bubble? It's fine if it's just slightly fast. No need to be a snails pace but no baseball throws either. How bout, the bigger it is the slower it travels?

Weapon is fine I guess, as long as you acknowledge that aura is still damaged even with that armor on.
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Re: Vahn Crimson
« Reply #6 on: October 02, 2016, 11:01:12 PM »
History- checked

Semblence- Fixed with being able to move, crush feature effects the defense of the enemy than the body itself and thrown before barrier appears.

Weapon- Aura over the armor
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Re: Vahn Crimson
« Reply #7 on: October 03, 2016, 05:10:31 AM »
Hmm, those are some major drawbacks but it seems fine enough for me.

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Re: Vahn Crimson
« Reply #8 on: October 04, 2016, 01:49:29 PM »
I do have some questions in regards to the weapons, but they're mostly cosmetics or technicalities. Being that this is your first character, I won't make a big deal about it. Everything for the most part looks good and balanced.

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Re: Vahn Crimson
« Reply #9 on: August 13, 2017, 09:09:54 PM »
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CHARACTER

Name: Vahn Crimson

Age: 18 years old, Machlud, Welsh of Sunset, 80 AC

Species and Gender: Human Male

Symbol: The usual Beowolf Grimm symbol but with a blood red x over it

Occupation: Freelance Wannabe Hunter, Grimm researcher

Appearance: Black messy hair, pale white skin, black eyes with three claw-like scars over his right eye.  Usually wears a black trench coat but under it is a crimson red body armor that resemble an Alpha Beowolf which gives him a slight muscular build (without it, he has a skinny body without him being bony).  Three blades on each of his forearms that shifts to create claws on top of his knuckles.  When in a fight, he will usually take off his coat and a full helmet with a visor covering his face.  He was a large belt around his hip with a revolver on one side and a small collection of dust in small canisters made with the same material as his armor surrounding the rest of the belt.

History: Vahn was born with an illness that drains his stamina to the point that an hour of constant physical stress will cause him to start coughing up blood and possibly pass out.  Besides that, he lived a normal life in Vale until the age of ten.  When arriving back to his house, he found a crime scene replace the safe atmosphere.  Furniture tossed around, TV broken and blood clear as day without his parents to be found.  After a year of waiting, all the authority could do was reveal that his parents were ex-Hunters, who seemed to have quit the day he was born.  After being informed of this, he started to look for any trace for himself.  He tried to assign into a Hunter Academy but his illness hold him back.  Lost, Vahn tried his luck in the Forest to try to mold his body and mind himself.  After a few days, he found himself at death's door after barely running from packs of Boarbatusks and killing a Creep with his family's revolver, his body finally starts to give out until an ex-hunter saved him.  The man claimed to have known Vahn's parents before their disappearance and has been looking into it himself.  After that day, Vahn was taken under his wing for six years, teaching him the same as a Hunter in training inside the Forest while hunting and studying Grimm.  When he finally surpassed his teachings, Vahn was given information by his master that his parents might be still alive.  After obtaining this new-found knowledge, Vahn moved on to help others the same as his parents did while holding hope on finding them again. 

Personality: Vahn has a big heart, carefree and protective.  He is happy to make friends with anyone as long as they are willing.  He isn't one to hold a grudge for anything less than someone trying to hurt anyone without a good reason.  He is willing to put his life on the line for his allies or anyone in need.  Although he is calm in nature once a girl try to flirt with him,he will try his best to look cool while with a bright blush and a smile on his face.

Aura and Semblance: His Aura is red.  His Semblence is to take his Aura off his body and form it into a ball in his hand.  If he toss it at himself, it manifest as a bubble shaped barrier to protect him.  If he throws it at something else, the barrier will form to protect allies or detain enemies.  Depending on the size of the bubble, he can move it with ease when it's half the size of a human, to having to struggle when moving it a foot at a time at it's maximum size.  It can expand as big as a Death Stalker and is twice as strong as the average Hunter's Aura.  He can enlarge and stricken the barrier as much as he wants by opening or closing his fist.  Once Vahn has something in his barrier and he close his fist, the barrier will start to slowing crush them to the point that it starts cracking their defenses.  This however, weakens the barrier itself and makes them easier to break when attacked.  Sadly this leaves him without an aura and needing to keep an arm up towards the barrier to keep it going if away from him, leaving with one arm to defend himself. The barrier can be destroyed and leaves him without an aura for half an hour.

Combat Behavior: Vahn is mostly a close-ranged fighter but will use his gun to either attack far targets or surprise someone up close.  While in his training, Vahn learns to observe his enemies carefully for signs of weakness or to predict their moves for a counter-attack.  If he is facing something for the first time, he will attack first but hold back to watch their movements and actions before going all out. He is willing to use any of his forms or dusts at the right time for a surprising reveal.  He is more used to fighting Grimm but new and advanced types outside of the Forest will usually surprise him.  Vahn doesn't usually try to kill anyone unless they killed an innocent or ally.

WEAPON

Name: Hunter's Grimm

Primary Form: Dark red armor made with something similar to a Death Stalker's shell. It is outfitted with a set of claws on each of his forearms that shifts to Vahn's knuckles when he is ready to fight.  The full-faced visor that appears on his face is able to nullify the effects of blinding light and gives him a resistance to gas.  Hunter's Grimm has a slot in the center of the armor to insert a dust canister and/or change it's form depending on the dust.  Vahn's Aura goes over Hunter's Grimm to act as a last wall of defense.  If too much damage is inflicted on it, it will start to crack and break.

Secondary Form: Tank Form- If an Earth or Ice Dust is inserted, a layer of the element appears on Hunter's Grimm.  It will have a double in his armor and strength but slow him down greatly

Tertiary Form: Free mode - A button is located in the slot and when pressed, Vahn's armor will shift to his arms and legs.  His claws forms into two long swords.  His mobility and reach increases with the price of defense, it is still able to use dust.

Dust Functions: Vahn can only use most of the other dusts on his belt three times per action because of their size.  Wind or Gravity can blast Vahn toward the direction he wants to go for three steps he takes.  Fire unleashes flames on his blades until it makes contact with anything three times.  Steam gives off a large thick gust of steam to distract enemies once.  Lightning is the combination of the first two functions with the same actions draining the dust just as fast.  Water is mostly used with his semblance, making a ball of water to put out flames.

History: On the later years of his training, Vahn and his master decided to create a weapon fitting for him.  Since Vahn saw the Hunters as superheros, he took that to heart as he starts to design it while the ex-Hunter helps him on improvements.  After a long and intense search for materials, they were able to craft the armor themselves.  Til this day, Vahn continue to advance the suit himself.

WEAPON

Name: Six Crimson

Primary Form: A large revolver with six shots and a slot by the cylinder for a dust canister.

Dust Functions: Once he shoots a bullet with a canister installed, the shot takes the same element as the dust.  It uses up the whole canister per shot.

History: The Crimson Family Revolver that Vahn took with him into the Forest when finding it untouched at his house. It has been improved by Vahn after finishing his training.
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Re: Vahn Crimson
« Reply #10 on: August 14, 2017, 02:48:23 AM »
Look at all the pictures/ links I added for his overall appearance and weapons!

Oh and I also added how his semblance reacts to certain dusts.
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Re: Vahn Crimson
« Reply #11 on: August 16, 2017, 04:26:45 PM »
My concern with these changes is that he's being given a substantial boost to his semblance, but A) he doesn't have professional training and B) there's no mention of SCF* and he's definitely not a caster.

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Re: Vahn Crimson
« Reply #12 on: August 16, 2017, 07:44:38 PM »
I can add on to the History that his mentor taught him about SCF within the 7 year gap and the canisters on his belt are the Focus, since they're usually a one time use until he refills them. Or just scrap it if it seems too much and just keep the links since I just came up with the semblance/ dust idea on the fly to give him more options and thought it was cool.
« Last Edit: August 17, 2017, 02:58:31 AM by Vahn »
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Re: Vahn Crimson
« Reply #13 on: August 18, 2017, 09:22:02 AM »
After talking it over with some others, we've decided it's fine, with one little condition. SCFs usually go to people with huntsmen license or academies, thus it would probably be hard to get your hands on them as a civilian. As long as Vahn has a relatively limited amount, it's all good.
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Re: Vahn Crimson
« Reply #14 on: August 18, 2017, 05:59:36 PM »
Alright!
History: made sure to add that the Huntsman thought SCF to Vahn

Aura and Semblance: added that he needs to insert one of the canisters into his semblance before use, It empties the focus, and he can't just walk into a store and get a refill.

Weapon History: added how he even got the Focus and the dust without being a huntsmen in the first place
Freelancer: Vahn Crimson ~ Wannabe Hunter, Grimm researcher, Protector