[Draven45]

Name: Mordecai Alodis

Age:16
Birthday:Tulikuuma 13, 89 AC

Species and Gender:
Human Male

Symbol:
A coiled black Dragon that has two swords sticking into it.

Occupation:
Year 1 Beacon Student (Achieved high marks on Hunter tests.)

Appearance:
Everyone thinks that he would've been fat if it wasn't for his mother. But he stands at a healthy 187 Lbs. and has a brown holster for his weapons. Has Dark Blue eyes149 cm. Teenager with a torn brown hoodie. Has a Black and White skull T-shirt and his jeans are torn at the knees.

History:
The Alodis family. A family that has been shrouded in mystery and secrets. People never have met any of this family that don't seem to have secrets. All those that do know about this family have either met an 'unfortunate' fate or went missing. But notes have said that the family has connections with some very powerful and very dangerous criminals. But the only boy, Mordecai, the Slacker Prodigy in fighting, was a strange case. He was an open book compared to the rest!
His mother, Marilenne, trained him in the art of using two daggers in combat. His father Damian, however, was a Hunter that had tried to get Mordecai to get serious about becoming a Hunter. He was against it until his father passed and his mother went missing. Fatherless at age 10, he promised his father's grave that he would become a Hunter!

Personality:
A slacker like mentality with a whole lot of, 'I'll do it later.' And 'What a pain.' with some 'Why do I care?'  Prefers to sleep and play Creek Fighter all day.
While he does care about fighting Grimm, he sort of really doesn't want to fight. He just wants a slacker life filled with video games and food. But if someone that's allied to him gets hurt, he snaps into his serious side and starts fighting.
Aura and Semblance:
Aura: Blue
Shielding(Passive), Blast(Trained).
Semblance:
Enlightenment. By focusing some of his aura into his speed, everything around Mordecai starts to slow down around him, giving off that he's slowing down time, but he's actually moving faster than everyone else. allowing him to dodge or attack his foes in the slowed down world. This ability can be drawn out longer, but it drains Mordecai's Aura. Can currently use this for 6 seconds without draining.

Combat Behavior:
This is where his entire demeanor changes. It's almost like he's another person. He gets into a stance, dashes in and attacks at openings and sometimes head-on.



WEAPON

Name: Black-Talons
Two Machine gun Pistol-Daggers that have a Black and Silver color scheme.


Primary Form
Two black Daggers with a Silver Streak going down the blade. Has a chamber for three types of Dust Powders. The Dust can be used to amplify attacks, like Wiess' Myrtnaster.

Secondary Form
Two Machine-gun Pistols that uses the three types of Powder for Ranged attacks. The streak now covers the middle part of them.

Dust Functions
Fires one of the three types of Dust: Fire, Lightning, Ice.

[nathan67003]

You're gonna want to check the bold- and underline-defining bits.

[Kingnoname1]

The appearance section is a bit weird. Like how does his mother make him not fat? It's also strange using imperial measurements for weight and metric for height. I'd check BMI indexes to better find a good weight/height balance because Mordecai being smaller than 5' and almost 90kg makes him basically a dwarf.

You might want to include the secrets Alodis family had, it could explain why the mother taught him weapons to begin with rather than his hunter father.

The semblance seems fine, you should mention how long Mordecai can hold it a day to help with balancing and I also don't see how it mirrors his personality. A 'I'll do it later' character isn't one who gains enlightenment so why is that a reflection of his soul?

I'd read some of the accepted profiles just to get an idea of what the moderators are expecting from each section but the rest of it seems fine.