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Kenny Tihanu
« on: February 05, 2017, 06:26:28 AM »
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(First of all, English is NOT my first language...)

CHARACTER

Name: Kenny Tihanu

Age: 17

Species and Gender Kenny is a Human girl

Symbol Her symbol are two wings with goat horns on the top. The symbol is on the back of her locket and the back of her hood

Occupation: She is a first year student at beacon academy

Family:
Mother- ?
Father- ?
Adoptive Mother- Mika Tihanu - Human
Adoptive Father- Juri Tihanu - Goat Fanus
Adoptive brother- Yannic Tihanu - Goat Fanus (Death)
Her Family: ShowHide


Appearance:
The first thing, that might be confusing is her young apperance. Kenny lookes really young for her age and people often assess her around the age Fourteen to fifteen years old. She has chin long, brown hair.
Her eyes have a deep red color, she wears a green pullover with a big yellow strip around it, a dark brown, short jeans and brown boots.
Sometimes she prefer to a green hoodie without the yellow strip.
Around her neck she has a large golden heart locket. She got it from her adoptive brother.
In the back of the locket his her Family symbol.
The Symbol are two wings with goat horns on the top
She have a rainbow colored scarfe bound around her right shoulder, which she got from her death brother.

History: For all her life Kenny was abused by her parents. She got hit and was treatet like dirt, so she run away with the age of 6 and never looked back. She didnīt know where she is running to, but she just did go forwart. Of course it happend what alwas happend. The creature of Grimm. She was like breakfast for those monsters but in the last second she was safed by a goat Fanus.
He said that his name were Juri and he asked Kenny why she was alone outside this late. She told him everything, and so they began to talk.
They told each other about themselves.
Juri was a Huntsman, who lived with her wife Mika and son Yannic in the south of vale in a little village which was locatet in a big Forest.
After hearing that Kenny now more or less is a orphan he decidet to adopt her, he coudnīt just leave her behind.
They weren't the richest of people but the lived happely and Yannic and Kenny did everything together.
But one day, when Juri and Mika were away, some people broke into the house. Kenny were 11 at this time and it was probably bad luck for Kenny that those bandits have picked the house where she lives.
They found Kenny and Yannic in the livingroom, and there it happend. Two humans hold Kenny down while someone else brutally stabed Yannic. After him, it was her turn.
They tuned to kenny and in this second the door flew open and loud noises filled the room. Her parents were back. From the eye angle out she could see, that they weren't alone. In the time Kenny had lived with them, she learned a lot about them. Juri was a Hunsmeen who had his own team. He meet Mika through a mission and they got married later on. And his old team had picked this day to visit.
Nearly everybody was fighting. Besides one person. This person didnīt want to fight, it want to kill. He startet to stabb Kenny over and over again, but not so, that she can die. He always hit the shoulder or her arm. She wantet her to die slowly and painfully. After a couple of stabbs the person was pushed away and Kenny colappsed. Still conscious she crawled to Yannic, but everything was to late.
Kenny with the death Yannic: ShowHide






Since that day, Kenny wanted to be a Huntress. Not just to help kill grimm, but to be fast enough to help people, so they don't have to go through hell like she did... And because Yannic always wanted to be a Huntsmen...

Personality:
Kenny is a friendly and kind human, who gives everyone a chance.
She really hates the humans who are against Faunus and in her opinion, it doesnīt metter if you are Human or Faunus, you are still a person.
She isn't that good in making friends, not because she is shy, it is just that she don't know what to say to start or continue a conversation.
After she knows the person that will change, than she can't keep her mouth shut untill someone tells her to slow down.
She gets pretty angry when she see or hear someone getting bullied and she will always step in and help the person who really need it.
Kenny is royal and if you have her trust once, she never let anything get you.
She also is stubborn but foxy. Doing bad puns are involved for every person who tries to life with her.
By the way, Kenny really likes chocolate. And you better donīt take it away from her.

Aura: Kennyīs aura color is red.
She doesn't use her aura that much and all in all it isn't that strong, but she can still block simple attacks with it. For stronger attacks it isn't that easy. It may isn't as strong as the ones of the other first year students, but after all, her Aura is more into healing than blocking.

Semblance: Kennyīs Semblance is a little flying heart named Kuma. It isnīt a semblance that you just can activate, because Kuma always is flying besides Kenny.

All in all:  'Kuma' is a red flying heart. It is Kennys best friend and she cares a lot about her. It has the size of Kemnys hand.

Kuma is all over about healing and protection. If Kenny, or whatever person Kuma stays with, will be attackt, she can be used as shield. Kuma will be the center of this shild, while around her is a red, transparent wall, which is 1 meters long and 2 meter high. She is able to dodge directly attacks and attacks from the distance.
How strong Kuma is while fighting, depends on how long the fight already gone and how much she already took.
Of course, she canīt dodge permanently and will need her rest.
Kuma still can be a protective shield when Kenny is unconscious or far away.

Kuma will follow everything what Kenny says, even if she knows how bad this idea is.
Outside of battle, Kenny can be able to "understand" Kuma. Kuma may canīt speak, but because itīs still Kennys semblance, Kenny can problem-free understand Kuma.
Unlike other things, Kuma just floats besides Kenny the hole time and don't have something like a weapon bag.
It is also a disadvantage that she flys beside Kenny. Kuma will turn white as soon she gets knocked out. Kuma can't die, but get hurt badly and will have to recover from injures like everybody else. How log this will take depends on how bad it is.

The first time Kenny used her semblance was shortly after her brother died.  She was training outside with her father as some grimm showed up. Is wasn't a dangerous situation, because Kenny knew her father would easily kill every one of them. Still, he wantet Kenny to try it out. Back then, she already had her weapon shattered, but five beowulfes were to much for the beginning. She killed two of them, but the third got her from behind and thats when her semblance activated. The shield hold the beowulf back, while her father took care of the last three.
After that, her semblance didn't disappear and followed Kenny everywhere.
Since then she decidet to call her Kuma and they became best friends


Combat Behavior: Kenny fights a lot of defensive, and because of that, her dodgin skills are pretty good. She canīt take too much damage at once and is quickly out of battle if she donīt dodge.
Kenny never just rushes into a fight without thinking, however, she canīt improvising.
Also does she never get tiered easely. She divides her strenght so she can fight a long time without to be exhausted.
Kenny tries not to draw any attention to her and while fighting she prefers to remain in the shadows.
She is good in climbing, and use high places to hide for the right time to strike.
She isn't a strong fighter and her attacks aren't that strong, but that doesn't mean that she is weak.

Weapon:

Weapon Name: Shattered Klinge
Form: Shattered Klinge looks like a normal knife
All in all: "Shattered Klinge" is a knife which can be used with every kind of dust. At first it looks like a normal knife, but with the right dust it can be much more dangerous than you think.
(A bit like pennyīs weapon) can one of her knifes turn to many others, which are connected.
Shattered Klinge: ShowHide


Theme: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FNe4DyW7hGI

Little gif serie: ShowHide












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I used pictures from Undertale and the Undertale AU Storyshift
« Last Edit: February 08, 2017, 03:16:10 PM by PegasusCat »

Kenny Tihanu - First year at beacon | Team ----  "Donīt you dare take my chocolate!"
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Re: Chara Dreemurr
« Reply #1 on: February 05, 2017, 09:17:44 AM »
I don't  know how much of the rules you have read, but it looks to me like you're basically ripping a character out of one series and placing them here. Just so you're aware, the mods will never accept this app as is, because you are not creating an original character.
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Re: Chara Dreemurr
« Reply #2 on: February 05, 2017, 09:23:31 AM »
The thing is,
Chara is a character of a game and there she just says 5 lines. The hole story of Chara and the hole AU Storyshift (from where I got the pictures and idea)
is made by the community and is not actually so in the game.
Also I did make up a lot of things. Like that chara were absurd by her parents or the party where Asriel and Frisk died.
Thats why i thought it would be okay doing it like that.

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Re: Chara Dreemurr
« Reply #3 on: February 05, 2017, 09:32:24 AM »
The thing is,
Chara is a character of a game and there she just says 5 lines. The hole story of Chara and the hole AU Storyshift (from where I got the pictures and idea)
is made by the community and is not actually so in the game.
Also I did make up a lot of things. Like that chara were absurd by her parents or the party where Asriel and Frisk died.
Thats why i thought it would be okay doing it like that.


So you basically just admitted to ripping a character and using them here, with a few additions in order to suit the universe of RWBY. The mods have disallowed characters for less; I would suggest taking a look through the accepted characters area to skim over some of the reasons why some of the players had to modify their characters. There was a character, I can't remember who it was off the top of my head, but she had a similar appearance to Jinx, similar personality, similar weaponry, a symbol replicating her personality and weapons, and I guess her semblance catered to all of these things? She was asked to change all of it in order to be accepted. And that was just for being similar to a character from another universe, not a straight rip.

Also, I might add, that teleportation type semblance are fairly common, as are speed and strength type semblances, just as a heads up.
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Re: Chara Dreemurr
« Reply #4 on: February 05, 2017, 09:40:05 AM »
Well, i guess I can change a lot of it, like  family and the story .
Stuff like age , personality and weapon still is something that i made up but i guess i can mage a few little changes so that it would fit in more.

Also, that with the rules. Like I said, English isn't my first language. maybe I overlooked or didn't understand this topic exactly. Was it with the canon characters? Because  i through that they mean canon from RWBY, that I can't make an character canon to the actual RWBY timeline. Like I would make a daughter of Yang
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Re: Chara Dreemurr
« Reply #5 on: February 05, 2017, 09:54:43 AM »
It's  okay, you're doing very good with English so far. But yes, we do not use Cannon RWBY characters on this site. However, we also don't need Master Chief, Doctor Who, Aizen,  Natsu Dragneel, or Chris Redfield walking around either, if you understand. This site, at least insofar as the regular content and character creation,  is for Original Characters within the RWBY universe. You can have influences from the above mentioned characters, but that's it.
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Re: Chara Dreemurr
« Reply #6 on: February 05, 2017, 09:57:28 AM »
Than I just go editing the profil so that it will be a new story. I guess i still will use the pictures, but the rest i will rewrite

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Re: Chara Dreemurr
« Reply #7 on: February 05, 2017, 10:08:36 AM »
http://rwby-rpg.rwbyfanon.com/index.php/topic,751.0.html

Take a look up there, it's pretty handy for avoiding things the mods will disapprove of. If you need any further assistance, don'tbe afraid to ask.
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Re: Chara Dreemurr
« Reply #8 on: February 05, 2017, 10:41:04 AM »
Okay, I did change a lot of stuff. The age, The name, The Family and the whole story.
The weapon and semblance I didn`t change because they arenīt really from the game, especially the thing with the heart is made up

Welp, i hope it will work like this

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Re: Kenny Tihanu
« Reply #9 on: February 05, 2017, 10:54:23 AM »
Firstly, you should utilize the character template they present to the players in the character creation guide. If you do not use it, the mods won't even look at your application.

For KUMA: If it is not a weapon, then what is it doing in the weapon section? How does it give her all these crazy powers? How do the poems themselves actually work? I see what they do, but it doesn't describe at all how it goes about doing these things. Honestly, This looks more like a semblance than anything, and would be far more interesting than simple teleportation.
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Re: Kenny Tihanu
« Reply #10 on: February 05, 2017, 11:41:47 AM »
Okay, hopefully its is ok now.
Itīs kinda annoying eding it over and over again

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Re: Kenny Tihanu
« Reply #11 on: February 05, 2017, 12:11:26 PM »
Put large images under spoilers. Just a friendly suggestion.
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Re: Kenny Tihanu
« Reply #12 on: February 05, 2017, 12:11:52 PM »
Okay, hopefully its is ok now.
Itīs kinda annoying eding it over and over again

Trust me, better to edit it here than in character creation. You want to make your character as airtight as possible before moving it there, because it can take a long time for even a single mod to approve something if there is a myriad of problems, and all apps require TWO approvals.

I understand that English is not your first language, but for native English speakers, reading some of what you wrote can make it feel a little disjointed and take away from an otherwise smooth and easy read. I recommend using a spell-checker first, and when that is finished, to ask for one of us to go through and help your sentence structures. The easier and more enjoyable it is for the mods to read through, the more likely you will be approved.

For combat behaviour, you mention she is a sneaky fighter that can fight for long periods of time, right? And that she can't take too many hits? What makes her sneaky? Does she employ traps, or strike from long distance? Does she prefer to stay in the shadows, or does she like to actually shadow her target? These are just personal questions I'm curious about.
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Re: Kenny Tihanu
« Reply #13 on: February 05, 2017, 12:48:21 PM »
better now?

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Re: Kenny Tihanu
« Reply #14 on: February 05, 2017, 12:57:35 PM »
There is still reference to  Chara in your app.

Who were these people that wanted to kill faunus? Did they specifically seek out the family? Was it random? Where did Kenny's adopted family live? Why did they choose to adopt Kenny in the first place? What happened to her biological parents? Who was this gang of people that tried to kill a six year old girl, for seemingly no reason? Why did the faunus family decide to save her? How did they save her? Two people vs. A gang? The numerical odds aren't in their favour, considering a 'gang' is usually comprised of more than 2 people. Were the faunus Huntsman and huntress? Is that why they were able to defeat the random malevolent bloodthirsty gang members?

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