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Kenny Tihanu
« on: February 09, 2017, 09:05:06 AM »
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(First of all, English is NOT my first language...)

CHARACTER

Name: Kenny Tihanu

Age: 17

Species and Gender Kenny is a Human girl

Symbol Her symbol are two wings with goat horns on the top. The symbol is on the back of her locket and the back of her hood

Occupation: She is a first year student at beacon academy

Family:
Mother- ?
Father- ?
Adoptive Mother- Mika Tihanu - Human
Adoptive Father- Juri Tihanu - Goat Fanus
Adoptive brother- Yannic Tihanu - Goat Fanus (Death)
Her Family: ShowHide


Appearance:
The first thing, that might be confusing is her young apperance. Kenny lookes really young for her age and people often assess her around the age Fourteen to fifteen years old. She has chin long, brown hair.
Her eyes have a deep red color, she wears a green pullover with a big yellow strip around it, a dark brown, short jeans and brown boots.
Sometimes she prefer to a green hoodie without the yellow strip.
Around her neck she has a large golden heart locket. She got it from her adoptive brother.
In the back of the locket his her Family symbol.
The Symbol are two wings with goat horns on the top
She have a rainbow colored scarfe bound around her right shoulder, which she got from her death brother.

History: For all her life Kenny was abused by her parents. She never understood why her parents were like this. Her father drunk alot and her mother always complaned about her look. She got hit and was treatet like dirt, so she run away with the age of 6 and never looked back. She didnīt know where she is running to, but she just did go forwart. Of course it happend what alwas happend. The creature of Grimm. She was like breakfast for those monsters but in the last second she was safed by a goat Fanus.
He said that his name were Juri and he asked Kenny why she was alone outside this late. She told him everything, and so they began to talk.
They told each other about themselves.
Juri was a Huntsman, who lived with her wife Mika and son Yannic in the south of vale in a little village which was locatet in a big Forest.
After hearing that Kenny now more or less is a orphan he decidet to adopt her, he coudnīt just leave her behind.
They weren't the richest of people but the lived happely and Yannic and Kenny did everything together.
But one day, when Juri and Mika were away, some people broke into the house. Kenny were 11 at this time and it was probably bad luck for Kenny that those bandits have picked the house where she lives.
They found Kenny and Yannic in the livingroom, and there it happend. Two humans hold Kenny down while someone else brutally stabed Yannic. After him, it was her turn.
They tuned to kenny and in this second the door flew open and loud noises filled the room. Her parents were back. From the eye angle out she could see, that they weren't alone. In the time Kenny had lived with them, she learned a lot about them. Juri was a Hunsmeen who had his own team. He meet Mika through a mission and they got married later on. And his old team had picked this day to visit.
Nearly everybody was fighting. Besides one person. This person didnīt want to fight, it want to kill. He startet to stabb Kenny over and over again, but not so, that she can die. He always hit the shoulder or her arm. She wantet her to die slowly and painfully. After a couple of stabbs the person was pushed away and Kenny colappsed. Still conscious she crawled to Yannic, but everything was to late.
Kenny with the death Yannic: ShowHide






Since that day, Kenny wanted to be a Huntress. Not just to help kill grimm, but to be fast enough to help people, so they don't have to go through hell like she did... And because Yannic always wanted to be a Huntsmen...

Personality:
Kenny is a friendly and kind human, who gives everyone a chance.
She really hates the humans who are against Faunus and in her opinion, it doesnīt metter if you are Human or Faunus, you are still a person.
She isn't that good in making friends, not because she is shy, it is just that she don't know what to say to start or continue a conversation.
After she knows the person that will change, than she can't keep her mouth shut untill someone tells her to slow down.
She gets pretty angry when she see or hear someone getting bullied and she will always step in and help the person who really need it.
Kenny is royal and if you have her trust once, she never let anything get you.
She also is stubborn but foxy. Doing bad puns are involved for every person who tries to life with her.
By the way, Kenny really likes chocolate. And you better donīt take it away from her.

Aura: Kennyīs aura color is red.
She doesn't use her aura that much and all in all it isn't that strong, but she can still block simple attacks with it. For stronger attacks it isn't that easy. It may isn't as strong as the ones of the other first year students, but after all, her Aura is more into healing than blocking.

Semblance: Kennyīs Semblance is a little flying heart named Kuma. She activated herself as soon as Kenny gets into trouble, a fight or when she is really nervous/scared.

All in all:  'Kuma' is a red flying heart. It is Kennys best friend and she cares a lot about her. It has the size of Kemnys hand.

Kuma is all over about healing and protection. If Kenny, or whatever person Kuma stays with, will be attackt, she can be used as shield. Kuma will be the center of this shild, while around her is a red, transparent wall, which is 1 meters long and 2 meter high. She is able to dodge directly attacks and attacks from the distance.
How strong Kuma is while fighting, depends on how long the fight already gone and how much she already took.
How long she can hold the shield depends on the strength of the attack, but normally she can take about 10-15 powerful hits.
Of course, she canīt dodge permanently and will need her rest.
Kuma still can be a protective shield when Kenny is unconscious or far away.

Her healing abillitys are way not as strong as the shield, but Kuma is able to heal bruses and cuts in a few seconds. Kuma can also heal some deeper wounds, which accordingly can take a couple of minuts.

Kuma will follow everything what Kenny says, even if she knows how bad this idea is.
Outside of battle, Kenny can be able to "understand" Kuma. Kuma may canīt speak, but because itīs still Kennys semblance, Kenny can problem-free understand Kuma.
Unlike other things, Kuma just floats besides Kenny the hole time and don't have something like a weapon bag.
It is also a disadvantage that she flys beside Kenny. Kuma will turn white as soon she gets knocked out. Kuma can't die, but get hurt badly and will have to recover from injures like everybody else. How log this will take depends on how bad it is.

The first time Kenny used her semblance was shortly after her brother died.  She was training outside with her father as some grimm showed up. Is wasn't a dangerous situation, because Kenny knew her father would easily kill every one of them. Still, he wantet Kenny to try it out. Back then, she already had her weapon shattered, but five beowulfes were to much for the beginning. She killed two of them, but the third got her from behind and thats when her semblance activated. The shield hold the beowulf back, while her father took care of the last three.
After that, her semblance didn't disappear directly and followed Kenny everywhere for the next hours befor disappearing.
Since then she decidet to call her Kuma and they became best friends


Combat Behavior: Kenny fights a lot of defensive, and because of that, her dodgin skills are pretty good. She canīt take too much damage at once and is quickly out of battle if she donīt dodge.
Kenny never just rushes into a fight without thinking, however, she canīt improvising.
Also does she never get tiered easely. She divides her strenght so she can fight a long time without to be exhausted.
Kenny tries not to draw any attention to her and while fighting she prefers to remain in the shadows.
She is good in climbing, and use high places to hide for the right time to strike.
She isn't a strong fighter and her attacks aren't that strong, but that doesn't mean that she is weak.

Weapon:

Weapon Name: Shattered Klinge
Form: Shattered Klinge looks like a normal knife
All in all: "Shattered Klinge" is a knife which can be used with every kind of dust. At first it looks like a normal knife, but it can get really dangerous.
And (A bit like pennyīs weapon) can one of her knifes turn to many others, which are connected.
Her father helped her back then to "build" Shattered Blade. He understands a lot of technology and put little chips into the knives, so that they look like they move.
Dust can not be used, as long shattered is split. For  dust her weapon has a little room in the bottom.

Dust:
Fire
The Blade starts to light up and burn

Earth
As soon as the blade is rammed into the bottom, it will cause a weak earthquake

Electricity
When the blade is loaded with electricity it can shoot little shock waves

Kenny is good at dodging attacks with shattered and all in all can handle her weapon well

Shattered Klinge: ShowHide


Theme:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FNe4DyW7hGI

Little gif serie: ShowHide












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Used pictures from Undertale and the Undertale AU Storyshift
« Last Edit: February 22, 2017, 02:31:58 PM by PegasusCat »

Kenny Tihanu - First year at beacon | Team ----  "Donīt you dare take my chocolate!"
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Caro Hopplen - First Year at beacon | not accepted yet *Howls at the moon*

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Re: Kenny Tihanu
« Reply #1 on: February 09, 2017, 03:03:25 PM »
It might be helpful to a reader if you elucidated on why your character was mistreated by her birth family.  That's optional and totally up to you, but it's just a question I formed upon reading this and which didn't get resolved.

As for the semblance, I have no problem with the effect of the semblance, but I don't think it would be right for Kuma to always be present, because semblances take aura to project and maintain, so having Kuma always present would be a drain.  It would probably be better if Kuma appeared when needed or perhaps whenever she enters a fight.

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Re: Kenny Tihanu
« Reply #2 on: February 10, 2017, 07:12:12 AM »
Edit:

(History)
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"She never understood why her parents were like this. Her father drunk alot and her mother always complaned about her look."

(Semblane)
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"Kennyīs Semblance is a little flying heart named Kuma. It isnīt a semblance that you just can activate, because Kuma appears by herself and not just when Kenny wants her to."

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Re: Kenny Tihanu
« Reply #3 on: February 10, 2017, 11:49:06 AM »
I did read that about the semblance.  I'm telling you it doesn't comport with the general idea of semblances as requiring aura.  Apart from Qrow, there doesn't seem to be a character with a perpetually-present semblance.

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Re: Kenny Tihanu
« Reply #4 on: February 10, 2017, 12:10:25 PM »
Welp,
I did rewrite it so, that it says "Kuma can appear without Kenny wanting it but it isnīt permanent"

But I now changed it to

"Semblance: Kennyīs Semblance is a little flying heart named Kuma. She activated herself as soon as Kenny gets into trouble, a fight or when she is really nervous/scared."

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Re: Kenny Tihanu
« Reply #5 on: February 14, 2017, 01:38:40 AM »
+1

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Re: Kenny Tihanu
« Reply #6 on: February 17, 2017, 10:13:40 AM »
one done, one to go

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Re: Kenny Tihanu
« Reply #7 on: February 20, 2017, 04:20:02 PM »
I'll do your second review. Normally, I would make a comment about grammar, but since you've stated that english isn't your first language, I'm not going to make a big deal. That said, here we go:

Semblance:
There are a few things here:
1. How many attacks can Kumi take before the shielding breaks or it's out of energy?
2. You went into detail about Kumi's defensive abilities, but didn't explain much about its healing abilities. Please explain how fast it can heal wounds and how big of a wound it is capable of healing.
3. Just to note: semblances don't have personalities, which it seems like you're trying to make this one have a personality and mind of its own. Semblances like this one are tied to the user's mind so that they do what the user wants it to do and not just have free will to do whatever it wants. Just wanted to make that clear to you.

Weapon:
A couple things here:
1. You're going to have to explain in more details about her weapon, particularly the part where the one blade can turn into multiple blades.
2. Please list what dust types she uses and the effects each dust type has with her weapon. Just simply saying that she can use every and all dust with her weapons is just not going to fly.

That's about it for me. Feel free to PM me if you have any questions.
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Second Year Beacon Student: Jett Davenport - The Playful Shadow Knight of Team MLDC (Melodic)

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Re: Kenny Tihanu
« Reply #8 on: February 22, 2017, 08:05:57 AM »
Edit:

Semblance:

-How long she can hold the shield depends on the strength of the attack, but normally she can take about 10-15 powerful hits.
-Her healing abillitys are way not as strong as the shield, but Kuma is able to heal bruses and cuts in a few seconds. Kuma can also heal some deeper wounds, which accordingly can take a couple of minuts.

Weapon:

-Her father helped her back then to "build" Shattered Blade. He understands a lot of technology and put little chips into the knives, so that they look like they move.
Dust can not be used, as long shattered is split. For  dust her weapon has a little room in the bottom.

Dust:
Fire [/ red]
The Blade starts to light up and burn

Earth [/ black]
As soon as the blade is rammed into the bottom, it will cause a weak earthquake

[Yellow]Electricity [/ yellow]
When the blade is loaded with electricity it can shoot little shock waves

Kenny is good at dodging attacks with shattered and all in all can handle her weapon well

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Re: Kenny Tihanu
« Reply #9 on: February 22, 2017, 02:14:27 PM »
Your colors for the dust types got messed up and isn't reading correctly. Can you fix those please? If not, I can fix them, but let me know.

Other than that, everything is fine. Just fix that and we're good.
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« Reply #10 on: February 22, 2017, 02:32:49 PM »
Oh, uuuuups.
Oke, fixed it

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« Reply #11 on: February 23, 2017, 12:21:44 PM »
Approved 2 of 2.
First Year Beacon Student: Rackley Winchester - The Hawkeye Sniper of Team CRSA (Crystal)

Second Year Beacon Student: Jett Davenport - The Playful Shadow Knight of Team MLDC (Melodic)

Third Year Beacon Student: Suntalia Lyn Ryker - The Voice of Thunder of Team PLSM (Plasma)

Fourth Year Beacon Student: Savas Carnelian - The Quiet Berserker Leader of Team SARK (Stark)

Beacon Professor: Oberon Falcov - The Man With A Plan / Team Strategy Teacher of Beacon