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Re: Rustled Feathers [4/4 FULL]
« Reply #45 on: April 24, 2017, 12:01:31 AM »
Cat breathed out and smiled as he saw his big attack connect and his opponent lost one of his weapons.
He kept up his attempt at kiting and reacted to the jab with another hops backwards getting scratched by the side dagger attack. He changed his way of holding his weapon now with the head facing inwards. He tried a simple stab to the throat with the sharp muzzle.
Then Catalina took a glance to the other battle and wondering how much that semblance concentrated can do.
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Re: Rustled Feathers [4/4 FULL]
« Reply #46 on: April 24, 2017, 12:37:55 AM »
Rightly proud of his reflexes Calen was only barely to deflect the first attack with his own sword. The projectile slammed into his shoulder but Calen knew worse to come. Seeing the flames Calen stood his ground as the inferno spread around him. Pausing for half a moment as he allowed the pain to focus before unleashing a storm of heavy two handed strikes at his opponent, even using the inferno to disguise some of his movements.

Unlike before Calen doesn't dance backwards and continues to presses on determined to finish this fight as quickly as possible regardless of the outcome.

Heavy Strikes 3x9%

Calen's Battle data: Aura: 33%(Half the Concentrated Aura attack+fire)
                               Fatigue: 70%(No Change)
« Last Edit: April 24, 2017, 12:44:01 AM by Kingnoname1 »
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Re: Rustled Feathers [4/4 FULL]
« Reply #47 on: April 24, 2017, 09:12:27 AM »
Reggie's attack hadn't entirely succeeded, but he continued to press his attack. He knew retaliation was coming, and it was coming hard, but he wasn't gonna retreat. It would only put him at a disadvantage due to his weapon's length. Instead, the boy went low.

Reggie figured the boy was going for a stab when he changed his grasp on the weapon. He had little time to react, so he went for what he thought was reasonable - he ducked low, letting the blade graze his back, while going for a hard stab at his foe's gut, wielding the dagger with both hands. He put a lot more force into this attack than he had with his previous ones, meanwhile activating his semblance so that his opponent's weapon would likely be pushed upwards by a flow of air. Not enough to disarm him, but at least it was something.

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Re: Rustled Feathers [4/4 FULL]
« Reply #48 on: April 24, 2017, 09:41:23 AM »
Akel worked her opponents latge attacks against him, they were easy to see ahead and she took advantagr of this. Her agility and flow worked better like this. She pressed her advantage in this situation, she went low and ducked under the first strike and used her ninjato to direct the second strike into the ground.

She went behind his back and while going for a stab, extended the lenght of the ninjato to add a bit of extra power to her strike while pressing the palm of her free hand against the bottom of the handle for more force behind the stab. Whether the strike made contact or not she kicked off of him to push him forward and her away to break line of sight using the fog.

(I'm thinking his strikes are at a similar speed to Jaune in the end of volume 4. Similar height between hin and Calen and the transformed state bring roughly the sword lenght. (I think))

P.S. Happy to discuss if you think this is unfair.

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Re: Rustled Feathers [4/4 FULL]
« Reply #49 on: April 24, 2017, 11:23:30 AM »
Catalina almost panicked when his weapon was pushed up. Unable to parry the attack he did the exact opposite of what he did before.
Stood still was Cat when he unleashed another barrage of semblance move. Spikes flew out from him. A total of six, two going for the front, one at each side and one going over for behind, homes on this boy.
Yet another use of his semblance instantly summoned the headache back, this time stronger, making his vision field contract, his head shaking from the pain. But aside from that, he tries not to show that he is pushing his limits.
(Aura: 56%, will deduct the damage if Reggie still went through the attack)
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Re: Rustled Feathers [4/4 FULL]
« Reply #50 on: April 24, 2017, 03:45:52 PM »
Grining as he saw Akel duck the first strike Calen attempted to exploit the advantage. Extending the haft of his glaive as the weapon passed over her for a stunning strike on the back of her head. Calen then continued his storm of heavy attacks.

'So do you want me to stop when I wear out your aura or do you think you deserve a scar for your troubles' Calen rasped menacingly

Head hilt hit 2%
Heavy strikes 3x9%

Calen's Battle data: Aura: 33%(no change as attacks counted)
                               Fatigue: 65%(no change)


I think you missed this line 'even using the inferno to disguise some of his movements.' as such the attacks shouldn't be easy to see and this isn't a fighting game so heavy attacks aren't any slower they just have more force behind them. But you don't need to change anything not all gambits are supposed to pay off and it might still work out.
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Re: Rustled Feathers [4/4 FULL]
« Reply #51 on: April 25, 2017, 05:06:08 AM »
Reggie was not backing off. At this point, the pompous dipshit had actually heated up, the spikes striking his sides not stopping him from driving the dagger into his opponent. He was not finished, though.

Wincing just slightly from the pain, he pulled the blade up to meet his opponent's chin while keeping his push going, intending to either slice his opponent's face with his dagger or force them on the ground, where Reggie would have a clear advantage with his dagger. Reginald had gotten more used to his blades during this fight, now using them similarly to how he'd use the bayonet on his rifle. That is, straight charge followed by lots of stabbing.

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Re: Rustled Feathers [4/4 FULL]
« Reply #52 on: April 25, 2017, 05:29:02 AM »
As soon as Akel received the hit from the back of the head she backed off, stumbling away for a few steps before running off into the mist, not wanting to extend the fight any longer she backed off before the other strikes could hit her. She quickly got out of Calen's range. She quickly grabbed 4 throwing knifes from her belt and threw that at him all at once before he disappeared from her view as she exited the mist.

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Re: Rustled Feathers [4/4 FULL]
« Reply #53 on: April 25, 2017, 05:54:46 AM »
Catalina groaned at the stab, and guessed he have enough aura to fight whoever is left standing at the other fight. So he caught the wrist waving the dagger and pushing back against his shoulder with his other hand, one leg of his rooting against the ground behind him and the other raising to knee his opponent in the stomach.
The headache is slowly being recovered from, his vision now contracting less and his head stopped shaking.
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(Knee: 7%)
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Re: Rustled Feathers [4/4 FULL]
« Reply #54 on: April 25, 2017, 06:41:05 AM »
Calen rocketed after Akel before she had thrown her knives. Launching himself low and horizontal with his semblance Calen is still forced to take a knife to keep his trajectory but he retaliates with a savage blow to her knees as he flies past. Now landing in front of Akel, Calen continues his onslaught of attacks hoping to gradually grind the huntress in training down.

'You can't escape me little girl. Surely you have never won a fight by running away. You have won a fight before right?' Calen continued his taunting. The mist was doing a lot for helping his voice recover but it still lacked the smooth overtones it had previously.

Secret speedy strike 12%
Continued Onslaught 9%

Calen's Battle data: Aura: 29%(one dagger)
                               Fatigue: 60%(one semblance use)
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Re: Rustled Feathers [4/4 FULL]
« Reply #55 on: April 25, 2017, 09:25:54 AM »
"I won't lose to you, peasant!" Reggie shouted out just as his dagger hand was grabbed. The walking skid mark's other, empty hand was ready for action.

When he realized his opponent was going for a kick, which had enough of a windup for him to realize it, Reginald, rather than blocking or simply dodging it, kept his push going. He grabbed his foe's leg with his free hand and pulled it up and to his side. By this point, with Cat on one leg, it would be less of a push and more of a fall, with Reggie on the top. Reggie's own knee was raised now, intended to slam on his opponent's other leg to pin it down.

[AURA: 25%]

(Leg slam is 4% aura damage)
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Re: Rustled Feathers [4/4 FULL]
« Reply #56 on: April 25, 2017, 10:18:22 AM »
Thankfully Akel was looking where she was throwing her knifes, which did allow her to see the incoming Calen along the ground. His low strike allowed her to jump over his low strike that was aimed for her knees. As Calen started his onslaught again she placed her free hand against the blade of her ninjato. Blocking the attacks with her aura taking a bit off due to directly taking the force through her ninjato.

A brilliant idea came to mind. He was within range of her semblance. So she smalled her ninjato against his blade. Shoving his blade and her ninjato away and gaining as close as possible to him. The limited distance of her omnidirectional attack hopefully would of shut his mouth up. So she let her semblance at him. The spikes limited (1-2m) distance only had Calen within its range to actually hit. But luckily she was just about pressing up against his chest.

[Aura=38%] 3% for aura bracing against attacks.

[Damage 4% per spike. Same as before] All spikes hit at once so he can't die from the semblance.

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Re: Rustled Feathers [4/4 FULL]
« Reply #57 on: April 25, 2017, 11:04:34 AM »
"Hmph! It'll be the peasant who you think so lowly about who beat you up fair and square! Eat this!-" He is somewhat angry about this insult to his family. Even though he has a disregard for the so-called "social hierarchy", he still represent his family at the huntsman front.
But Cata can only put up a suitable "oh crap" reaction when his leg is grabbed. Indeed he tumbled as this disrespectful adversary tried to make him.
Now with him on the ground he is at a more than little bit of disadvantage. Especially so when one of his legs was pinned down. Not forgoing his hand with the dagger his other hand also retaliated.
Punching him on his throat rapidly three times Cat tried to get up by all means. The most obvious one is straight up defeating him. So that's what he's trying to do.
Meanwhile he can finally open his eyes completely normally, but the headache is still staying.
(Aura: 42%)
(Punches: 6% each, three strikes)
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Re: Rustled Feathers [4/4 FULL]
« Reply #58 on: April 25, 2017, 05:52:23 PM »
As Akel forces their swords away Calen orientates the hilt of his soon to be glaive for another extend retract hilt strike before rushing backwards with his semblance for a follow up when Akel's semblance shot out. The added distance allowed Calen to thread himself over the volley with another application of his semblance 

His first strike appeared to be going diagonally up from Akel's left waist to right shoulder but it was another feint and Calen actually delivered another extend retract hilt strike aiming for Akel's head. Calen then spun in for two lighting fast strikes; a slash of Akel's right side followed by a stab aimed at her gut.

Calen then dances back maintaining a delicate balance of enough distance to avoid further spike barrages while not losing his opponent in the fog.

hilt strikes 2x2%
slash 5%
stab 6%

Calen's Battle data: Aura: 29%(no change)
                               Fatigue: 50%(two semblance uses)
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Re: Rustled Feathers [4/4 FULL]
« Reply #59 on: April 26, 2017, 09:09:06 AM »
Reggie's move had succeeded, at the very least, but now he had one problem: Attacking from here on. His other arm moved to pin down his opponent's open arm, instead ending up having to block the oncoming punches. He purposefully activated his semblance, sending gusts of wind all around him and likely right in his opponent's face to throw him off.

With his elbow now lifted, Barney the dinosaur's gayer cousin decided to elbow-slam his foe in the chest. He might lose at this point, but he wasn't going to let this one win, damn it!

Silica, meanwhile, had put down her magazine and was watching the fights with amusement. It seemed like the other one was more like a show and all, while the one between Cat and Reggie was... Special.

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(Elbow slam is 5%)
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Reginald Royale - 1st year snotty brat of team RBLS. "I'm telling father about this!"

Rufus Chocla - 2nd year freestyle rapper of team APRC. "Rap comes from the Soul, don't mess with the Flow, if you can't take no more, don't wait for Encore!"

Anza Burgundy - 1st Year archer of team CRSA. "War eagle, feller!"

Silica Methiviola - Assistant to the Royale Family/Reginald. "Suck my metaphorical dick, nerd."

Coconut Cream - 1st Year pervert of team CASA. "B-before we fight could you just like... nyah once for me?"

Tiber Rostrum - 1st year Bea(k)on student. "*Unintelligible, birdlike gibberish*"

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