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Steel Herron
« on: October 21, 2016, 08:21:16 PM »
CHARACTER

Name: Steel Herron

Age: 17

Species and Gender: Male wolf faunus

Symbol: a crescent moon with a wolf howling at it.


Occupation: 2nd year hunter student studying at Beacon

Appearance:   About 5'11 and almost 175 lbs. Short, curly blond hair with wolf ears protruding from the top of his head. Blue eyes that change to yellow when he gets angry.  His usual clothing is a blue hoodie and some faded jeans with a hole ripped for his wolf tail. He usually wears a graphic tee shirt of something that reminds him of Vacuo. When hunting or fighting he likes to wear two layers leather armor to move quickly in but it can also stop a sword. He also wears high friction boots for extra speed. These help him cope with ice dust attacks and slick obstacles.

History: Steel was born in Vacuo along with his sister Khloe. Vacuo was where he had mostly grown up and learned to pick pockets and fight. He loved hunting and did it as much as possible. He loved hunting in a small team almost as long as hunting or fighting alone. But being a faunus was hard. his family was constantly moving across Vacuo as the white fang was growing in popularity. Most humans in Vacuo treated them like theives and pickpockets but steel only stole to feed his family. His father was killed fighting for faunus rights and steel had to take over as the father figure of the family. This meant that he had to protect his family.As he honed my skills as a warrior Khloe dissapeared after the rise of their new leader. She tried to change their way back to the more peaceful ways and was never heard from again. He has since cut ties to any members to the organization and left as far away from them as possible. He applied to Beacon last year, was accepted, and has made it to his second year.

Personality:   Random in almost everything he does. Never backs down from a challenge or dare. This has lead him to be the center of attention. He doesn't mind but also doesn't want to be a sort of "trick dog". But he is generous. Always putting others before himself. This has lead to many friends all of which he trusts.

Aura and Semblance:
Color: Orange
Semblance: Future sight. This allows him to see a short distance to the future to scope out his opponents moves about five minutes in an instant. This has lead to multiple guessing games and card games being won. But he uses it subtly so he can have more fun with people.

Combat Behavior: He has a strategic battle style but loose and headstrong. He likes a challenge and will test his own limits. He will make his opponent as mad as possible before fighting. This gives him enough fun that he gets every aspect of a good fight. And also insures that his enemy gets mad enough that they become reckless and this makes it so he can win.

WEAPON

Name: Kindness

Primary Form: nunchaku made of a hard wood found in Vacuo.

Secondary Form: the two nunchaku come together to form a longbow. This fires any kind of arrows with any type of dust. They can detach back to the nunchaku.

Dust Functions: Dust arrows for any occasion. But his favorite is the fire. He uses kinetic arrows as propeltion and for keeping enemies at a distance so be can taunt them to make them more angry or to use his semblance.

History: He built his weapon three years before he started studying to be a huntsman, he made it such as is because he needed a weapon that was as versitile and durable as he has proven to be. His favorite use of it is his bow function as this is how he carries it.
« Last Edit: November 04, 2016, 09:05:55 PM by N1netales »

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Re: Steel Herron
« Reply #1 on: October 23, 2016, 12:07:46 AM »
Ah, quick tip, this isn't a site where you only have one character and have to be that character fully. You can have multiple, and can actually talk as your own self outside of rp... So you might want to change this into 3rd person.

Also I assume this is just an outline, right? Just checking to make sure.

Also also, *nunchaku, or just nunchucks. (And this looks kinda like Sun's weapon, with the pistols...)
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Re: Steel Herron
« Reply #2 on: October 23, 2016, 06:37:29 AM »
Actually, if I remember correctly, Sun's weapon can have its two ends locked together to make a staff, not a bow.

Speaking of copies, you're gonna need to not only expand on pretty much everything (as Mythic said, this is probably just a temp thing), including the semblance as "like Blake" is incredibly close to copy-pasting.
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Re: Steel Herron
« Reply #3 on: October 24, 2016, 01:06:26 PM »
Thanks for the tips. This is the first online rpg that looked interesting so i'm kinda new. I also liked how Sun's weapons were and i make it into a bow for my own added touch.
« Last Edit: October 24, 2016, 01:09:09 PM by N1netales »