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Ceramite Gunmetal
« on: November 21, 2016, 01:34:07 AM »
CHARACTER

Name: Ceramite Gunmetal

Stage Name: Raijin

Age: 29

Species and Gender: Male Kangaroo Faunas

Symbol: Crossed drumsticks with a lightning bolt striking behind them

Theme: Fireflight-Ignite

Occupation: Drummer for Grimm Omen. Bar worker. Huntsman.


Appearance: Standing at 180CM and weighing 95KG Ceramite is a little bit larger than average. He has a slender build but when seen without clothing it is obvious that his skinny frame is completely packed with muscle.  This combined with his Deep red almond shaped eyes, large scar on his lower back and blue chinese dragon tattoo snaking around his torso and arms a shirtless Ceramite is very intimidating but a fully clothed one looks incredibly unassuming. He has long black hair that is loosely tied up behind his head to keep out of his eyes.
When not performing Ceramite dons rectangular framed glasses, a brown long sleeved coat that reaches the top of his thighs in length, along with a white dress shirt and jeans. He also wears bandages over his hands at all times.

When he is performing Raijin wears a mask that covers all of his face except for his mouth which is almost always bearing a twisted smile. This mask is red and white in colour and has shaded glass over the eye holes which both act as glasses for him to see with and conceal his eyes from the view of onlookers. His long black hair flows out the back of the mask.  He wears a black and white haori when onstage usually with the top shrugged off and around his waist which reveals his muscles and tattoo. This tattoo also has electric dust in it which when activated makes it appear as though Raijin is crackling with electricity. He also has a revolver on his person when performing as he uses it when performing "Bullet Atonement" and has used the remaining rounds for firing at Mr. Scratch should he be the one to catch him. 


History: Ceramite was born a faunas in Atlas which is far from ideal circumstances. Having a massive kangaroo tail that couldn't be easily hidden made life even harder as unlike many others in the slums that he called home he couldn't pass as human in order to avoid the discrimination that he and his species faced and as a result found himself spending most of his time with his father who was a dust dredger as at least that way the majority of the people around him were fellow faunas. However being there was unsafe so he would stick close to his father. Which is how he came to be in a mine shaft when a panic caused by a Grimm attack lead to the cavern caving in around him and some others in the cavern.

 In the initial cave-in he was caught in the rocks and for his fellow survivors to free him he had to have his tail amputated in the dark of the cave with minimal tools. Even with his many subsequent injuries in his training and career as a huntsman this was easily the worst pain he had ever felt. He would have died there in the cave if a group of students from Atlas academy, one of which was a faunas hadn't heard voices and dug them out while fighting the Grimm. With their help the majority of the dredgers made it out alive and Ceramite recieved the medical attention required to keep himself alive.

 Once he had fully recovered Ceramite begged that his family allowed him to train to become like the people who had saved their lives and having been faunas and living in slums they already knew how to fight. As a result once he was old enough Ceramite went straight into his primary years at Atlas academy and during his time there even managed to avoid the majority of the discrimination that the faunas faced due to having lost his tail. He did however face enough that his time at Atlas was difficult and enough to deter him from joining the Atlesian specialists once he graduated.

 Once he had graduated he moved to Vale having no reason to stay in Atlas seeing as his parents had died of natural causes during his time at Atlas academy. When his parents died had been the first time he had picked up drumsticks which served as an outlet for his grief in their passing as it was not only a creative medium but it basically was just hitting things and those things weren't other students. When he arrived in Vale he quickly became involved in faunas rights and attended many rallies. It was at one such rally that he met the outspoken faunas who would change his life (whether it was for the better depends on when you ask him.) Cherry Chainsaw. Along with Kerri and Justin.

 Despite being much older than them they found themselves getting along and eventually formed a band. When the band formed Ceramite adopted his stage name of Raijin and along with these new friend formed the band Grimm Omen. With their band formed the group found themselves rocketing into news and media on many occasions for unsavoury acts usually instigated by Cherry. While avoiding involvement with these things as much as possible and making a considerable effort to prevent Cherry's antics from setting off too massive a media firestorm Ceramite had to admit it was working in Grimm Omen's favor. That combined with their uncompromising tone of justified rage at humanity and Ceramite's own responsibilty for their songs targeted specifically at Atlas they found themselves quickly achieving rather high levels of fame which made Ceramite glad he had ensured to keep the identity of Raijin seperate from the man Ceramite Gunmetal who had become the owner of a humble bar in downtown Vale which he ran with the help of a woman he had befriended at a faunas rally and had begun a relationship with.

 Life was good until Cherry had learned that Cheri Chanson had decided to become a huntress. After failing to prevent a catastrophe at the hotel they were staying in which he aided in the PR cleanup of the members of the band revealed his identity to the world when they cited him as an inspiration for their efforts to become hunters themselves. What followed were many long nights teaching Cherry the basics that she would need if she were to stand a chance to become a huntsman.

 Once she was finally off to Beacon though Ceramite had to admit he was glad to hear that his chaotic times were over and that he may see some peace and quiet. He took this opportunity to propose to Heather and combined with the reveal of his identity bringing in many more customers life was really looking up.


Personality: Ceramite is surprisingly quiet, softspoken and friendly considering his career with Grimm Omen. Despite this he is also incredibly stern with Cherry and the rest of the band. He sees himself as a father to the group and with such an unruly child as Cherry he knows that he has to be. Despite this he considers himself to have a good relationship with them. As previously mentioned Ceramite is usually a calm and softspoken person and although he would never admit it actually hates the constant travel that comes with his work with Grimm Omen and isn't even that big a fan of their music, preferring a softer sort himself. Usually enjoyed with a smoke or a drink along with a comment to the effect of "sure it will get me eventually. I imagine a hungry Grimm will beat them to it though."

Given his upbringing Ceramite harbors a distrust for humans however he is very good at hiding it and unless pushed to his absolute limits of tolerance it would be very difficult to discern at all.

Despite his usual nature Ceramite does have a more aggressive side which he lets escape when performing or fighting. This side is far more energetic and aggressive and when he is like this he is almost always wearing a deranged smile on his face.

Aura and Semblance: Ceramite's aura is a light blue in colour and he has a relatively high amount of it in comparison to other huntsmen. His semblance allows him to manipulate the path of a bullet before he fires it. When planning the trajectory of a shot the path the bullet will take appears as a blue streak across his left eye. Once he has finished plotting the path he wants a bullet to take the next bullet fired from the gun he is holding will follow that path. The magic bullet will glow blue and leave a trail behind it as it flies. Any direction changes made by Ceramite appear as though the bullet ricocheted off of thin air without losing any momentum. Doing this has a minimal tole on Ceramite's stamina for every shot he fires but he can only do it up to 7 times within the span of 6 hours.

Combat Behavior: Ceramite while incredibly sturdy and capable of taking enormous amounts of punishment before he falls. He fights aggressively wherever possible often rushing his opponent or opponents and crushing them with his pure strength, often capable of shattering the more armored parts of a Boarbatusk with a single blow. He can very easily crush through an opponent's guard by brute force and seldom attempts to poke around any form of defenses. Not that he would be capable of doing so as while in no way lumbering his speed is average at best and he is very unlikely to be able to dodge an attack unless it is very slow or easy to see coming.  He is however capable of blocking with good efficiency when in melee range which is where he is at his most comfortable as Ultio's only ranged abilities are it's shotgun form which while devastating is very inaccurate at even a medium range  and outright useless at anything longer than that which culminates in long range being his kryptonite as he will not only be unable to counterattack but will also be unable to close the distance with any efficacy.

While this weakness is very prevalent when fighting with Ultio. Ceramite fights completely differently when using Exitium which is unlikely to show up unless the situation requires as Exitium cannot be carried on Ceramite's person due to it's size and weight.

Ceramite uses Exitium when he is fighting overwhelming numbers or an enemy he knows specialises in long ranges. With Exitium in hand Ceramite sprays bullets until everything in sight has been utterly wiped out if possible but with the new found long range firepower comes a new set of weaknesses. Exitium is so heavy that even someone with Ceramite's might is almost completely incapable of moving while wielding it and even has a hard time turning while wielding it meaning that if an enemy can get behind him it will be a long time before he can get them back in the firing line. Also it is utterly useless at close ranges as if an opponent is shot at point blank the weapon will damage itself and possibly Ceramite. The one counter Ceramite has to this is to drop Exitium on top of his enemy and crush them with it's weight. This is ineffective for many reasons the most obvious of which being that he no longer has his gun and it is very difficult for him to pick back up. Exitium also takes an incredibly long time to reload and while a single clip contains a large amount of ammunition it burns through it very quickly.

There is however one large weakness that is shared when he is using both weapons and that is his glasses. Ceramite can't see a meter ahead of him without them so an impact to the head could send them flying from his face and completely wreck his vision.
WEAPON

Name:Ultio

Primary Form:
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Ultio is effectively 2 Machete's strapped together to make a double edged blade with a shotgun in between them. The hilt of the weapon is angled in a way that the weapon runs perpendicular to Ceramite's arm when he is holding it and he has easy access to the trigger to fire the shotgun.

Dust Functions: Ultio's shotgun is loaded with fire dust Ammo that causes the bullets to explode on impact.

History:Made at Atlas

WEAPON2

Name:Exitium

Primary Form:
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Exitium is a collosal firearm that is as long and almost as wide as Ceramite's own body. It has a black outline with a deep brown wood plating towards the centre of it. The wood is sculpted with images of huntsmen slaying Grimm. Towards the rear of the gun a red fire dust crystal is mounted on either side of the weapon. The top of the gun splits open to reveal the internal machinery of the weapon. This opening is also used for reloading the Heavy machine gun. When not in use Exitium rests in a rocket locker that Ceramite has designed to look like a coffin which has allowed him to use both it and Exitium as props in shows if it is decided they really want to turn up the pyrotechnics.

Dust Functions: Exitium primarily fires fire dust ammunition designed to explode on impact. The fire gems on the sides of the weapon can also be activated in order to allow fire to shoot through the barrel which is primarily used for clearing any blockages though it also allows exitium to function as a flamethrower.

History:Made at Atlas

Musical Career
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Grimm Omen-The front of the Album is a Beowulf Alpha perched over a rock with a backdrop of a blood red full moon. The rear art is just a bunch of glowing red eyes.

Oncoming Storm-A description of the band itself as a thunderhead rapidly approaching on the horizon. The song starts off with eerie storm sirens and builds slowly into a shredding whirlwind of guitar, vocals, and drums.

Grimm Omen-A song entirely dedicated to the horror of the Grimm. Slow, purposeful, and darkly triumphant in the way it haunts the listener, it’s widely recognized as a musical masterpiece and respected outside its genera.

The Lies that Bind-Stories of racism and discrimination against faunus that were swept under the rug. A slower song, but the scratchy vocals and heavy bass and drums make it just as hard hitting as their faster material.

Forehead Meets Concrete-A song about getting kicked around and getting right back up to swing again. The beat itself is like getting punched in the brain, and Cherry spits out the lyrics like an automatic rifle.

Kiss Me Rough-A fast-paced, provocative, highly gritty song about the self-explanatory title. Raunchy, all over the place, and messy both lyrically and instrumentally, it’s one of their most well-known hits.

Consume-A song targeted at the greed of families like the Schnees and Utsus. Ragged, violent, and heavy on the screaming, it scrapes the ears and burns the blood. Banned in Atlas.

Purge-A song for burning right through everything holding you back in life. Fast-paced, hard-hitting, and seat-of-your pants energetic, this is a song to commit arson to.

To Prevail-A song about overcoming any obstacles life sets in your path. The beat could break bricks, and so could Cherry’s screaming.

Raindance-A song about letting go of your past mistakes in preparation for all new ones. Surprisingly elegant and pretty, the tone is light by comparison to their other music, and the classical end of Cherry’s vocal range shines bright here.

Wash it All Down-A story of reckless alcohol abuse. The flow is jerky and rough, and Cherry’s voice lazily drips hopelessness and ennui throughout the song.

In the Blood-Music about the will to fight being ingrained inside you, and not letting others take it away. A knock-down, drag-out brawl of a song, with secondary vocals added by Raijin for extra depth and range.

Power Overwhelming-A description of a feeling of unstoppable strength and invincibility. While it contains a scattering of shrieks, Cherry’s voice is bombastic and angelic here, backed by an uplifting, stellar lead guitar from the Grimmwitch. It includes what is arguably one of the best modern guitar solos.

Reckoning-The front of the album is a photograph of a mob of faunus with fists, protest signs, and torches upraised. The rear cover is more of the same.

Bullet Atonement-It calls for the violent death of those who would enslave and mistreat others. Pretty standard in other ways for an angry Grimm Omen song, it does include gunfire as a musical instrument.

I Hope to Die Young-Expressing the desire to shine like a shooting star and the wish to burn up   early before the light dies out. Another uplifting song, this includes some unexpectedly sweet vocals by the Grimmwitch and relatively light guitar. Or at least as light as Grimm Omen goes.

Taste Your Heart-An accurate, poignant depiction of the desire to want to know someone’s deepest, most true version of themselves. A slow, sonorous, haunting melody where Cherry’s choral training breaks through. There are even portions of the song where her voice is the only thing that can be heard.

Broken Bars and Battered Hearts-A song about the abused breaking free of their chains and finding freedom and strength in one another. Raijin’s drum solo is top-notch, and Knives makes a brief vocal appearance backing Cherry up in the chorus.

Rebar Anthem-A call for rioting in the streets against injustice and greed. Notable both for the wanton destruction of property in its lyrics, musically it stands out because the drums are accompanied by sections of rebar slapping into garbage cans, glass, and concrete. Banned in Atlas.

Shatterpoint-A description of being pushed beyond the breaking point and then pushing back. Alternating heavily between sad, almost weepy tones and sudden explosions of sound and rage, the vocals strained Cherry to her absolute limit.

Bring the Boom-A stylized, powerful depiction of performing on stage. Happy-go-lucky for Grimm Omen, the heavy bass and drums are backed by wailing guitars and vocals that are shouted more than sung. The entire band joins in for the chorus along with the audience.

Roar-A wild, ferocious, upbeat song about faunus liberation and revolution. While in composition nothing new for Grimm Omen, the rest of the band howl and bellow a lot more in the background. Banned in Atlas.

Out from Shadows-A menacing song about slaves swarming their former masters like locusts. The twitchy guitar work emulates that feeling perfectly, and Cherry’s voice, backed by Knives and Raijin growling, brings the point home with sinister, bone-chilling perfection.

Scream for Me-A demanding, insistent call for the audience to join in the music and yell their heads off. The vocals are forceful and commanding, and the musical styling is almost symphonic and has a compelling tune to it.

Wardance-This song starts out slow and eventually builds to a thunderous finale, the lyrics are about preparations for a battle. The instruments are accompanied by a growing number of feet stomping to the tune as Cherry chants out the instructions.

Wasted-A song about being drunk, careless, and sick of everything. Upbeat and jaunty, this raunchy tune has a vigor that gets the audience dancing about and is more of a fun, solid mosh-pit song than anything else.

Walpurgisnacht-The Album art is a close-up of Cherry herself dressed as a scantily clad witch pouring something into a cauldron while voodoo dolls of the rest of the band float in the brew. The back of the album is a group shot of them all posing together in zombie-esque stances.

Walpurgisnacht-A recipe for witch’s brew with the ingredients being all the wrongs and injustices, mostly against faunus, in the world at large. Sung in iambic pentameter and with creepy instrumentals, this song cranks the freak factor past eleven, especially when the chanting starts in.

The Black Flag-A song about the banner of oppression certain factions of people hold high as they go about their day making use of those weaker than themselves. Meant to mimic a patriotic anthem, the music and vocals have a very light and noble tone that stand starkly opposite to the lyrics.

Darkness-A song about madness portrayed as Grimm stalking through the shadows of your mind, with the narrator eventually falling in with and leading the hunting pack involved. Cherry lets her voice take on an almost childlike quality for this song, and gradually becomes grittier and more guttural as it progresses until she’s just snarling at the end.

Strike to Kill-A song about the brutality of the Atlesian military and some of the bloody work it’s done on behalf of the Schnees. Tragic and moving, its plaintive tones give way to outright anger towards the final rendition of the chorus. Banned in Atlas.

Where We Belong-The song points out all the sins of man and faunus alike, and suggests that we’re most likely all meant for eternal fire with the way we behave.

Alley Rose-A surprisingly tender, but still provocative story about love between two faunus living life fast and hard on the streets. Upbeat and raunchy, this irreverent tale thumps its way through the song and rolls with the steady, almost folksy beat.

Bullet with Your Name On It-A revenge fantasy after a grievous betrayal. Slow and menacing, Cherry’s voice slides through your ears like a silk cloth cleaning the gun mentioned in the song.

Knuckle Sandwich-A description of mercilessly kicking someone’s ass. Cherry and the rest of the band do little but growl to a beat with their instruments and voices in this song.

Doomsday Device-A lyrical description of the band’s rise to fame. Essentially a bombastic heavy metal power ballad.

Countdown-A musical countdown to an unspecified revolution against an unknown, vaguely described military state. It starts of slow but picks up the pace steadily throughout until it reaches its hard-hitting crescendo. Banned in Atlas.

Lie to Me-Sarcastic and bitter depictions of fake alliances and publicity stunts in showbusiness. Sarcastic, edgy, and flippant, the song doesn’t take itself or its subject material too seriously.

Murder Most Foul-The story of a Faunas shanty-town in Atlas left to die as it was overrun by Grimm. While highly stylized, the events depicted are factual. Performed as a mournful funeral dirge, the most powerful elements are the wail of the Grimmwitch’s guitar and Cherry’s agonized, near-weeping voice. Banned in Atlas.


NPC's
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Heather Amethyst : Ceramite's fi¦an|cée is a woman of average height with a slim build. She has long Lavender hair and a brown monkey tail poking out behind her. Many would say she dresses provocatively though in truth she dresses for comfort and practicality. Much like Ceramite she is a relatively gentle person but is also incredibly stubborn and uncompromising in decisions. Once her mind is made up that's it. End of Discussion.

Mr. Scratch: Not much is known about the faunas who goes by this name. He may be some sort of large cat, or maybe a mustelid of some kind, but there really isn’t much to go on. He first cropped up in an underground fighting circuit several years back, and after some initial setbacks, clawed his way to a championship bout which he soundly won. He then promptly killed the other fighter, who was a known member of the White Fang. Since that point, he’s made a habit of leaving dead activists and enforcers belonging to that group where the police and press can easily find them, and has been accused of twenty-four deaths so far. Most of his victims had combat training, and some have been exceptionally skilled.

He’s also taken up skulking around Cherry and the band until noticed, after which he will flee before the authorities or even security can be called. A lean but powerful man, with heavy but retractable claws on his hands and a rough, tan body he usually conceals with grimy sweats and a hoody, he disappears into a crowd or an alleyway in an instant. The only sign his burning amber eyes were ever watching you from beneath his mop of shaggy brown hair and his hood are the distinct memory they leave behind. Some stories say he has a tail, others don’t, some say he has weapons, others say he fights hand to hand. Much is unclear beyond the fact that Mr. Scratch is a menace to everyone, especially the White Fang.

Mr. Zeus Cobalt   : Grimm Omen’s manager, a tall, pasty, sallow-complexioned man built like a reed with an orderly patch of red hair on top. A fastidious dresser, this human’s scruples are nowhere near as neat, and his oily charm greases the way for the band to get off scott free for a lot more than they ever should. A superb legal specialist and financier, he makes sure he gets his own cut and finances a niche but luxurious lifestyle for himself and his family. He has a slow, even way of speaking, and often pauses for a breath, as if talking required too much exertion.
 
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Re: Ceramite Gunmetal
« Reply #1 on: November 22, 2016, 11:26:30 AM »
Group review courtesy of me and JJ with guest star, Gus.

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stage name: Raijin
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Appearance: Standing at 180CM and weighing 95KG Ceramite is a little bit larger than average. He has a slender build but when seen without clothing it is obvious that his skinny frame is completely packed with muscle.  This combined with his Deep red almond shaped eyes, large scar on his lower back and blue chinese dragon tattoo snaking around his torso and arms a shirtless Ceramite is very intimidating but a fully clothed one looks incredibly unassuming. He has long black hair that is loosely tied up behind his head to keep out of his eyes.
When not performing Ceramite dons rectangular framed glasses, a brown long sleeved coat that reches the top of his thighs in length, along with a white dress shirt and jeans. He also wears bandages over his hands at all times.
Could touch up the punctuation here and there.
1. “reaches”


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History: Ceramite was born a faunas in Atlas which is far from ideal circumstances. Having a massive kangaroo tail that couldn't be easily hidden made life even harder as unlike many others in the slums that he called home he couldn't pass as human in order to avoid the descrimination that he and his species faced and as a result found himself soending most of his time with his father who was a dust dredger as at least that way the majority of the people around him were fellow faunas. However being there was unsafe so he would stick close to his father. Which is how he came to be in a mine shaft when a panic caused by a grimm attack lead to the cavern caving in around he and some others in the cavern.
1. “discrimination”
2. “Spending”
3. Capitalize
4. “him”


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In the initial cave-in he was caught in the rocks and for his fellow survivors to free him he had to have his tail amputated in the dark of the cave with minimal tools. Even with his many subsequent injuries in his training and career as a huntsman this was easily the worst pain he had ever felt. He would have died there in the cave if a group of students from Atlas academy, one of which was a faunas hadn't heard voices and dug them out while fighting the Grimm. With their help the majority of the dredgers made it out alive and Ceramite recieved the medical attention required to keep himself alive.
1. Comma after
2. “received”


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Once he had fully recovered Ceramite begged that his family allowed him to train to become like the people who had saved their lives and having been faunas and living in slums they already knew how to fight. As a result once he was old enough Ceramite went straight into his primary years at Atlas academy and during his time there even managed to avoid the majority of the descrimination that the faunas faced due to having lost his tail. He did however face enough that his time at Atlas was difficult and enough to deter him from joining the atlesian specialists once he graduated.
1. “discrimination”
2. Capitalize


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Once he had graduated he moved to Vale having no reason to stay in Atlas seeing as his parents had died of natural causes during his time at Atlas academy. When his parents died had been the first time he had picked up drumsticks which served as an outlet for his grief in their passing as it was not only a creative medium but it basically was just hitting things and those things weren't other students. When he arrived in Vale he quickly became involved in faunas rights and attended many rallies. It was at one such rally that he met the outspoken faunas who would change his life (whether it was for the better depends on when you ask him.) Cherry Chainsaw. Along with Kerri and Justin.
Where’d he get the money to move to Vale?
1. Reword


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Despite being much older than them they found themselves getting along and eventually formed a band. When the band formed Ceramite adopted his stage name of Raijin and along with these new friend formed the band Grimm Omen. With their band formed the group found themselves rocketing into news and media on many occasions for unsavoury acts usually instigated by Cherry. While avoiding involvement with these things as much as possible and making a considerable effort to prevent Cherry's antics from setting off too massive a media firestorm Ceramite had to admit it was working in Grimm Omen's favor. That combined with their uncompromising tone of justified rage at humanity and Ceramite's own responsibilty for their songs targeted specifically at Atlas they found themselves quickly achieving rather high levels of fame which made Ceramite glad he had ensured to keep the identity of Raijin seperate from the man Ceramite Gunmetal who had become the owner of a humble bar in downtown Vale which he ran with the help of a woman he had befriended at a faunas rally and had begun a relationship with.
No wiki with his full name and normal look despite his stardom? Paparazzi can be hell (not that I would know).
1. “responsibility”
2. “separate”


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Life was good until Cherry had learned that Cheri Chanson had decided to become a huntress. After failing to prevent a catastrophe at the hotel they were staying in which he aided in the PR cleanup of the members of the band revealed his identity to the world when they cited him as an inspiration for their efforts to become hunters themselves. What followed were many long nights teaching Cherry the basics that she would need if she were to stand a chance to become a huntsman.
Welp.
1. “when”


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Once she was finally off to Beacon though Ceramite had to admit he was glad to hear that his chaotic times were over and that he may see some peace and quiet. He took this opportunity to propose to Heather and combined with the reveal of his identity bringing in many more customers life was really looking up.
No consequences for identity reveal?


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Despite his usual nature Ceramite does have a psychotic side which he lets escape when performing or fighting. This side is far more energetic and aggressive and when he is like this he is almost always wearing a deranged smile on his face.
So he is actually like his bandmates, then. Where did he get this psychotic side? Why does he have it?


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Aura and Semblance: Ceramite's aura is a light blue in colour and he has a relatively high amount of it in comparison to other huntsmen. His semblance allows him to manipulate the path of a bullet before he fires it. When planning the trajectory of a shot the path the bullet will take appears as a blue streak across his left eye. Once he has finished plotting the path he wants a bullet to take the next bullet fired from the gun he is holding will follow that path. The magic bullet will glow blue and leave a trail behind it as it flies. Any direction changes made by Ceramite appear as though the bullet ricocheted off of thin air without losing any momentum. Doing this has a minimal tole on Ceramite's stamina for every shot he fires but he can only do it up to 7 times within the span of 6 hours.
"We can allow it but state in the post that since we're on the fence we'll watch for anything that might make us pull it back from approval" - Gus
1. “toll”

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While this weakness is very prevalent when fighting with Ultio. Ceramite fights completely differently when using Exitium which is unlikely to show up unless the situation requires as Exitium cannot be carried on Ceramite's person due to it's size and weight.
How/why does he have this weapon if he can’t carry it with him into missions?

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Ceramite uses Exitium when he is fighting overwhelming numbers or an enemy he knows specialises in long ranges. With Exitium in hand Ceramite sprays bullets until everything in sight has been utterly wiped out if possible but with the new found long range firepower comes a new set of weaknesses. Exitium is so heavy that even someone with Ceramite's might is almost completely incapable of moving while wielding it and even has a hard time turning while wielding it meaning that if an enemy can get behind him it will be a long time before he can get them back in the firing line. Also it is utterly useless at close ranges as if an opponent is shot at point blank the weapon will damage itself and possibly Ceramite. The one counter Ceramite has to this is to drop Exitium on top of his enemy and crush them with it's weight. This is ineffective for many reasons the most obvious of which being that he no longer has his gun and it is very difficult for him to pick back up. Exitium also takes an incredibly long time to reload and while a single clip contains a large amount of ammunition it burns through it very quickly.
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Exitium is a collosal firearm that is as long and almost as wide as Ceramite's own body. It has a black outline with a deep brown wood plating towards the centre of it. The wood is sculpted with images of huntsmen slaying Grimm. Towards the rear of the gun a red fire dust crystal is mounted on either side of the weapon. The top of the gun splits open to reveal the internal machinery of the weapon. This opening is also used for reloading the Heavy machine gun. When not in use Exitium rests in a rocket locker that Ceramite has designed to look like a coffin which has allowed him to use both it and Exitium as props in shows if it is decided they really want to turn up the pyrotechnics.
1. Colossal
2. What exactly is Exitium? A mini-gun?
3. Again, how is this weapon used if he can’t even carry it with him?


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Re: Ceramite Gunmetal
« Reply #2 on: November 23, 2016, 01:14:26 AM »
Not done editing but I will put in the things that i think just need clarification here. It does say in the weapon description that Exitium is a really large heavy machine gun. Also he has the rocket locker that looks like a coffin. When he needs Exitium he calls it in using the rocket locker.
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psychotic mercenary- Alizarin rust "make me your enemy and they won't be able to identify your corpse"1C6BA0[/url]

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Guardian huntsman and drummer for Grimm Omen Ceramite Gunmetal "A barfight? alright then. SHOWTIME!" 800020 WIP[/u]

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Re: Ceramite Gunmetal
« Reply #3 on: November 28, 2016, 01:13:03 AM »
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« Last Edit: November 28, 2016, 07:09:47 AM by arcus_gray »
1st year reckless idiot of team LGGR- Gray Saggio- "oh screw it. I'll just hit it till it dies!" 660066

psychotic mercenary- Alizarin rust "make me your enemy and they won't be able to identify your corpse"1C6BA0[/url]

lone wolf huntsman. ex member of team SAND cerulean steel "You are welcome to accompany me but if something goes wrong I'll deal with it myself." 2B3B44

1st year glass canon of team TBD Fallow Russet  "I may have been forced into this but that doesn't mean i don't like it." 50c878

2nd year drunken gearhead(teamless) Revya Vermillion "If you were to change to a lighter metal and add gears here, here and here you could greatly- I've entirely lost you haven't I?" Orange

1st year nimble tank of team CRSA Sandy Smoke "I've been told I'm a right bastard to fight against. Care to try ya luck?"355e3b[/color]

Guardian huntsman and drummer for Grimm Omen Ceramite Gunmetal "A barfight? alright then. SHOWTIME!" 800020 WIP[/u]

White Fang power couple. Ignis and Glacies. [url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VwpudWRx7eg] Partners in crime

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Re: Ceramite Gunmetal
« Reply #4 on: November 29, 2016, 01:24:54 PM »
I'm going to take over the review process here. There is just one thing I want to make very clear to you in regards to his weapon, Exitium:

After discussing it with the other staff, we've concluded that you may have this weapon, but there will be quite a bit of restrictions for it:

1. Since the weapon can only be moved around via a rocket locker, it will only be able to move within the region of Vale due to the signal as well as the fuel/energy needed to have it moved from place to place. Not only that, but certain regions of Vale may be difficult for it to get to since it'll have to rely of the signal it gets from the different towers in the region or even impossible to get to due to the fuel/energy required for it to travel there. That said, you will not be allowed to have it travel to Mistral of Atlas if that's what you were hoping for.

2. Since the weapon can only be moved around via a rocket locker, you will need to account the time it'll take for it to arrive to it's designated location. This was one of the bigger discussions the staff had with this. There is absolutely no way that you will be able to call for your weapon and for it to arrive in the same post. That said, you will need to take into account that it will take one post for him to call it, one post waiting for the locker, one post for the locker to arrive, one post for him to get it out of the locker and one more to then be able to use it. Also, remember that the farther he is away from where the rocket locker is, the longer it'll take for it to get to him.

Here's an example:
- Ceramite calls for the locker
- Ceramite defends against any attacks while waiting
- Locker arrives
- Ceramite removes Exitium from locker
- Ceramite is ready and now able to use Exitium

Overall, you're looking at at least 5 posts before you'll be even able to use Exitium in any thread.

Those are the main restrictions that will come with this weapon, aside the fact that it'll be extremely cumbersome and hard to wield. If you're alright with those restrictions on the weapon, then there will be no issues with you having this large of a weapon.
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Re: Ceramite Gunmetal
« Reply #5 on: November 29, 2016, 07:22:56 PM »
Sounds perfectly fine to me. I was planning for it to take a while to arrive anyway.
1st year reckless idiot of team LGGR- Gray Saggio- "oh screw it. I'll just hit it till it dies!" 660066

psychotic mercenary- Alizarin rust "make me your enemy and they won't be able to identify your corpse"1C6BA0[/url]

lone wolf huntsman. ex member of team SAND cerulean steel "You are welcome to accompany me but if something goes wrong I'll deal with it myself." 2B3B44

1st year glass canon of team TBD Fallow Russet  "I may have been forced into this but that doesn't mean i don't like it." 50c878

2nd year drunken gearhead(teamless) Revya Vermillion "If you were to change to a lighter metal and add gears here, here and here you could greatly- I've entirely lost you haven't I?" Orange

1st year nimble tank of team CRSA Sandy Smoke "I've been told I'm a right bastard to fight against. Care to try ya luck?"355e3b[/color]

Guardian huntsman and drummer for Grimm Omen Ceramite Gunmetal "A barfight? alright then. SHOWTIME!" 800020 WIP[/u]

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Re: Ceramite Gunmetal
« Reply #6 on: November 30, 2016, 02:02:11 PM »
Awesome. Group approved and moved.
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