[Nick_Tyd]

(Im still new to this, so expect a few or more Errors)

Name: Nick Tyd

Age: 14

Species and Gender: Male,Human

Symbol:  Knife (Foreground) Bow (Background and this is just my Idea so its kinda of a WIP)

Occupation: Student in Beacon, 1st year (RP with me and he'll tell you how he got to Beacon)

Appearance: file:///C:/Users/Lenovo%20ideaPad%20V570/Desktop/FOLDERS/Nick.jpg

History: Nick was adopted by Alexandra tyd (since that he's adopted he also has a Brother and a dad, his mom and dad are also divorced) his mom is a member of the White fang and She's an Alcoholic, one night when She came back home she was drunk and went to the kitchen to grab a knife, after that she went to nick's room and threaten him but he gave his mom another chance but it happened again in a few weeks later and on the second time nick waited until His mom was asleep, Nick Packed his things while nick is packing he saw two Numbers on a paper with two names on the back, Nick grabbed both of the numbers and Finished packing up. Nick was able to run away from his mom, after a few hours nick started to asked people if they can call the numbers on the paper and after that Nick got the location of his dad's house and walks to them

Personality: Friendly but if someone mentions White fang then he'll get angry and if you kick him out without his bag he'll be angry and try to get it back

Aura and Semblance: The color of his Aura is dark blue and his Semblance is (WIP)

Combat Behavior: he brings Melee and range weapons but he's more of a Long ranged

WEAPON

Name: Blade (Its also WIP)

Primary Form: file:///C:/Users/Lenovo%20ideaPad%20V570/Desktop/Nick's%20Weapons.png the first mode is kinda like Tyrian's weapons but you have to take out the Magazine to Transform it

Secondary Form: ^

Tertiary Form: ^

Dust Functions: Like Crescent rose and Gambol shroud, you need to buy or get Dust Maagazines

History: (WIP)

[Kingnoname1]

First off welcome to the board. You've got the format so that's very good and I only really see a couple of real issues with what is already here. Still if you haven't already check out some of the approved characters to see what is expected of you. http://rwby-rpg.rwbyfanon.com/index.php/board,16.0.html.

Ah the citing of the C drive, that brings back memories. Well obviously we can't access your C drive so if you can find where you found those images or upload them yourself that'd be for the best. Pictures also don't generally replace the descriptions so if you could describe your character/weapon that'd be great. And no 'Crescent rose and Gambol shroud' doesn't describe it enough.

Your character is obviously very young, Ruby who is the main character only gets accepted when she is 15 so I'd scale that back to 16 probably 17 unless you can think of a very good reason(16 that is). 'RP with me and he'll tell you how he got to Beacon' this won't fly by the way, if you want to keep secrets in the profile that's fine, even if I can't see a reason even for villain profiles, but you need to contact the mods to get the 'real sheet' cleared meaning we can't help you much here.

Your snippet of history has a few holes as well. Like if your character has a birth family why did he get adopted? If the Dad was close enough to walk to why didn't he visit? If he visted why couldn't he tell his child was being abused? ect, ect.

Other than that, simply more. Best of luck with making your character by the way.

[Glow]

I know you're still working on everything (being WIP and all that), but one small thing;
'1st year (RP with me and he'll tell you how he got to Beacon)'
The point of the character sheet is meant to be a reference point. You don't hide information about key parts of the character's history; you can not tell people IC, and then have a dramatic reveal, but it needs to be down on the sheet itself.